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    Posted: 14 December 2018 at 5:16pm

Learn the logic line for line...
Luckily discovery’s oddly just behind
Certain knowledge as described
Check your pockets for your wallets
Word to Wallace, Ready – Die
Wave ridin’, stay hidin’
When did mollusks fuckin’ fly?
Duckin’ shells in this sucker hell
Need a walrus by your side 
Not Daddy Warbucks Orphan Annie
But a partner for the ride 
‘For you get peeled on the real 
Like cornhusks when it’s dry
Dinner bells don’t ring 
To warn us when it’s time
Let courage symbolize
Who are you inside?
 A little intertwined
Don’t get it twisted
like boar tusks to a vine
To fill an empty heart
You start with a starvin’ mind 
Perfect lipstick on the pig 
The glamour & the shine 
But the shit that sits within
Is still there after when you hide 
Like magic by design
The havoc’s no surprise 
Aim at life goals… a hattrick in a loss
That passion isn’t lost
In a hat with a disguise 
Cuz you’re scared to pay the toll
Just a fraction of the prize 
But it happens at a cost 
Pay your dues to the truth 
Closed caption for the lies 
Flick your nickels, cross the bridge 
Get the sniffles, call in sick 
Reach your dreams, be a beast
Show’em what different is 
Heed to the deathbed speech 
Do everything you want to do
Instead of wishin’ that you did 
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Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote spume corrupt Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 14 December 2018 at 5:45pm
Wow
That’s the stuff I like, this shit was dope
I was really digging the delivery, the pace of flow never let up and the content was very engaging

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Who are you inside?
 A little intertwined
Don’t get it twisted 
like boar tusks to a vine

there's a strong possibility that i will steal those lines for an audio drop. 

and also...this was REALLY good


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Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote ΔE(t) Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 15 December 2018 at 8:29am
I liked the way this flowed a lot.
"Luckily discovery’s oddly just behind
Certain knowledge as described
Check your pockets for your wallets
Word to Wallace, Ready – Die"

I thought it was pretty smooth through out the whole thing until "Aim at life's goals.." I wasn't a huge fan of the flow after that but it was a really interesting style.
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