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iLL ScriptureZ
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Posted: 14 December 2018 at 5:16pm |
Learn the logic line for line... Luckily discovery’s oddly just behind Certain knowledge as described Check your pockets for your wallets Word to Wallace, Ready – Die Wave ridin’, stay hidin’ When did mollusks fuckin’ fly? Duckin’ shells in this sucker hell Need a walrus by your side Not Daddy Warbucks Orphan Annie But a partner for the ride ‘For you get peeled on the real Like cornhusks when it’s dry Dinner bells don’t ring To warn us when it’s time Let courage symbolize Who are you inside? A little intertwined Don’t get it twisted like boar tusks to a vine To fill an empty heart You start with a starvin’ mind Perfect lipstick on the pig The glamour & the shine But the shit that sits within Is still there after when you hide Like magic by design The havoc’s no surprise Aim at life goals… a hattrick in a loss That passion isn’t lost In a hat with a disguise Cuz you’re scared to pay the toll Just a fraction of the prize But it happens at a cost Pay your dues to the truth Closed caption for the lies Flick your nickels, cross the bridge Get the sniffles, call in sick Reach your dreams, be a beast Show’em what different is Heed to the deathbed speech Do everything you want to do Instead of wishin’ that you did
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spume corrupt
Superior Member Joined: 27 April 2011 Location: UK Status: Offline Points: 3162 Crew: Lyricist Inc. Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 20-7-1 Form: WLWLLL |
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Wow
That’s the stuff I like, this shit was dope I was really digging the delivery, the pace of flow never let up and the content was very engaging |
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Sammy
Site Moderator Beacon of Light Joined: 24 October 2015 Status: Offline Points: 2222 Crew: Elision Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 1-1-1 Form: LNW |
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Who are you inside? A little intertwined Don’t get it twisted like boar tusks to a vine there's a strong possibility that i will steal those lines for an audio drop. and also...this was REALLY good
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ΔE(t)
Groupie Joined: 28 November 2018 Location: California Status: Offline Points: 50 |
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I liked the way this flowed a lot.
"Luckily discovery’s oddly just behind Certain knowledge as described Check your pockets for your wallets Word to Wallace, Ready – Die" I thought it was pretty smooth through out the whole thing until "Aim at life's goals.." I wasn't a huge fan of the flow after that but it was a really interesting style. |
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