Text Battle Archive: Rapper T vs iLL ScriptureZ [Text]...(0-3) |
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Rapper T
Suspended Joined: 25 November 2013 Location: NZ Status: Offline Points: 1423 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 22-27-0 Form: LLLWLW |
Topic: Rapper T vs iLL ScriptureZ [Text]...(0-3) Posted: 17 December 2018 at 11:01am |
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iLL ScriptureZ
Standard Member Joined: 13 May 2014 Location: NJ Status: Offline Points: 2477 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 11-5-1 Form: LWWLWW |
Posted: 17 December 2018 at 11:48am |
House deadline is 2 weeks, did you want to keep that? I’ll look for your verse
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Rapper T
Suspended Joined: 25 November 2013 Location: NZ Status: Offline Points: 1423 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 22-27-0 Form: LLLWLW |
Posted: 17 December 2018 at 12:13pm |
Take however long you need Lilly Allen
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iLL ScriptureZ
Standard Member Joined: 13 May 2014 Location: NJ Status: Offline Points: 2477 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 11-5-1 Form: LWWLWW |
Posted: 17 December 2018 at 12:31pm |
The point is... i don’t want to wait 2 weeks. I’ll drop after I see you posted
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Rapper T
Suspended Joined: 25 November 2013 Location: NZ Status: Offline Points: 1423 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 22-27-0 Form: LLLWLW |
Posted: 17 December 2018 at 2:12pm |
I don't waste no time, writtens clean in mint shape ...When T leave the party, I'll be leavin' ill grey Take ya fans whole base from under, cut ya face in blades You'll need time to cool down, because ya face inflames Bleatin' nothin' every day but vomit, get it of off me Not a joke, no. Stevie wonder... case of retinopathy You're never topping me. You think you wanna kill hitters? Stop it Lilly. You couldn't build interest I been savin' up the paper now I'm DROPPING ILL SCRIPTURES You Philly Will Smith sort, I maim with will's myth lore Yo once I kill him in it I'll be hostin' ILLS CRYPT TOURS Claiming ill scripts pffft, you asprin pill prescription I'm more the type to take your mums blood cos ILL'S CRIPPIN' And my punches will hit, you'll be reeling back in agony Feeling all like battlescenes just isn't for you actually YOUNG MONEY, fuck this drip's disease, I bring ill pain *The Cough Lolly* Poppin' drop you dead and have you scared of a lill wain You'll tapout when I connect, flow here it can fill drains But not a drip of shit you spit's ever quotable lame Fuck I hope this will change, your perception of yourself You egocentric fuck you get erections from yourself Ain't impressed with your bout, so Imma mess with your health Yo I'll confess I came to bless you by injecting more clout So open that ill up and give me all the money Yip cos you're a bundy and I'll rip you off for nothing 'til my fists are sore from punching, in my veins I caught you bluffing Funny cos you're from the country that they call the heartbeat But fuckin' ill you can't be, I bet when you see doctors They're like "kid you aren't sick, you're playin', go home, be honest..." You and me see not a, even match, no owing honours Scraptures eatin' crap to feed the masses, see no problem?! iLLy no god or goat or nothin', scriptin' like a plot for cousins written by unwanted fuckin' editors from farm out country no, what the fuck, you really said you wanted... um... ill... you better come correct now. Better spit some shit out Better rip out, have a flip out real good, get your tits out Cos it's out, that you said that. I found the script out The closet. Straight ill? ...Got me thinkin' with doubt Sicko you're my bitch now. T done heated up your kitchen Cook me up some fuckin' eggs or beat it, scripture - missin' Listen, it's a real shame pussy your heat pressure fixin' Antidote I brang the joke has illin' imposition To get fucked, little bitch you ain't up on my level Break it down with T - in trouble, with the trebel. TREMBLE Bases held and pitchin' now, fitting scripted - Roger Clemens I bet all you're gonna swing is basic bitch shit 'bout old letters... Fuck unlimited. You iller noone ever.
Exp: his name is Steve like Stevie Wonder Exp: retinopathy is a condition that caused his blindness from an early age |
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iLL ScriptureZ
Standard Member Joined: 13 May 2014 Location: NJ Status: Offline Points: 2477 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 11-5-1 Form: LWWLWW |
Posted: 17 December 2018 at 4:05pm |
Just wanted to smack you but it’s turnin’ into slaughter Bars is weak plus talk is cheap put the burner to this squawker Wordin’ is just awful, this act ain’t earnin’ him an Oscar Losses on LA ‘bout the same since learnin’ you’re a father Wantin’ my attention but you’re just a voiceless bitch A Buddhist fuck couldn’t shoot the ones, start his voyage quick Since he miscarried our relationship you get to join your kids Where’s the benefit here bro? Full of estrogen screamin’ Threats are a weakness from an irrelevant weirdo Ya text is placebo give ya chest a torpedo On discord as a softer version of CHAIN’s feminine ego . All that talk… and you pathetically write this? Is it clout you’re lookin’ for? & regrettably like this?! I won the tournament, but you have the Identity Crisis Show this novice the proper way to professionally dice him This is a cartridge in a ratchet, you’re a target I am blastin’ You were told that your helmet started as just fashion Then you became full retard… & a faggot Droolin’ on a dick has been regarded as a habit After you posted that garbage I just bagged him Put your heart in that trash shit… You’re Biggie, you’re Pac, you’re L, you’re Pun You’re Proof, ODB, Prodigy, Dilla (But let's be fair, you’re probably iller!) You’re Guru & Pimp, Mac Dre & Phife Since you’re a bitch your Left Eye but ain’t as tight You’re Sean P, Pumpkinhead, Eyedea or Chinx Freaky Tah your dome for any idea you think You’ll never get the recognition that you crave New Zealand's top artists have no competition for the stage You’re still a bottom feeder & nonexistent to wave Only thing you have in common with greats is bein’ dead up in a grave
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Crimson Juice
Site Moderator Joined: 20 December 2015 Location: U.K. Status: Offline Points: 3258 Crew: Lyricist Inc. Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 6-11-0 Form: LLWLW |
Posted: 17 December 2018 at 5:32pm |
This vote has been accepted by a moderator. OK,so 1st let me explain myself,i find this battle strange,strange in the fact i may be labelled by one combatant as a d/rider or groupie of sorts,but my vote will be an honest one because other wise what's the point.. RT. Honestly i found you verse a tough read,you had in parts a good mixture of ideas, but the wording/execution was horrid,which then marred the intended punch you was going for,the personal's came thick & fast but using the prefix iLL constantly in the 1st half of your piece got repetitive really,and took any sting you had,out of your personals to an extent,and to blunt i didn't really feel much from your offering.. iLL. Although you we're streets ahead technically,I still feel you took your foot off the gas for this one,you did come lighter via personals/punches than usual,but you did more than enough to get my vote still.. Overal,not an epic tussle here,and pretty much one sided in my opinion also,this is probably my shortest vote ever,but yeah iLL for me got this..sorry RT i just found your drop heavy,but for the wrong reasons as in heavy... Vote..iLL..peace. |
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ΔE(t)
Groupie Joined: 28 November 2018 Location: California Status: Offline Points: 50 |
Posted: 17 December 2018 at 9:18pm |
This vote has been accepted by a moderator. Rapper T, I felt yours was difficult to read. It was long but didn't progress to anything, basically just told iLL how much he sucks compared to you. It wasn't a smooth delivery in my opinion, it reads like you were just trying to throw punches without thinking of the verse as a whole, there wasn't much cohesion aside from theme, which is ironically how you're going to decimate him. For me, the hypocrisy of berating iLL about how you're gonna school him while simultaneously poorly executing said schooling left a bad taste. I would suggest comparing yourself to others less. "under promise, over perform." Hopefully that helps. iLL ScriptureZ, yours was much cleaner. I liked your opening, I thought it addressed the situation well. "All that talk… and you pathetically write this? Is it clout you’re lookin’ for? & regrettably like this?!" I liked your flow till "regrettably like this" I felt using "this" twice weakened it for me but it picked back up. I thought your ending was pretty slick. Vote: iLL |
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Vellum
Standard Member Joined: 07 October 2013 Location: Connecticut Status: Offline Points: 492 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 24-2-1 Form: WWWWWW |
Posted: 03 January 2019 at 2:07am |
there wasn't any nameplay from either that I felt was worth quoting. As far as schemes and multi rhymes that would go to ILL as well as personals, flow and punchlines. My Favorite line of this battle was the Identity Crisis shit written by ILL. Overall I felt like you both could have done better and in my opinion an unlimited battle is a horrible idea, it would have been hard to compare a 36 bar verse to an 8 bar verse and also I think you get to see who's better more easily when both emcee's use the same number of bars which in my opinion and for the sake of getting votes should be 8 bars maximum in order to keep the attention of readers and not tire them out to the point they don't even care who wins in the end lol anyways ... MVGT - iLL ScriptureZ |
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Rapper T
Suspended Joined: 25 November 2013 Location: NZ Status: Offline Points: 1423 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 22-27-0 Form: LLLWLW |
Posted: 03 January 2019 at 3:17am |
Thanks for the feed y'all, good battle iLL, you brought it like you should, props to all!
Close this thread down like a bankrupt shop yo |
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Crimson Juice
Site Moderator Joined: 20 December 2015 Location: U.K. Status: Offline Points: 3258 Crew: Lyricist Inc. Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 6-11-0 Form: LLWLW |
Posted: 25 May 2019 at 11:17am |
OK 3-0 to iLL and a ko.
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