Audio Mic: Mingiwuwu and the trial of the gatekeeper

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    Posted: 25 September 2019 at 1:56pm
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OK so the 1st thing is obviously the recording quality, it's poor, but in truth
that's minor, you seem to have a lot to say hence why you seem to rush to
try and fit the beat, your over writing hence the stumbles, your breath control
is cool though and you pitch/tone was good, you need to find a balance i
feel, because half way through when you was mimicking a different accent
(latino sounding) , you sounded alright to be fair, its like you got into at that
point, your contents (although many) were real nice, even if they were over
bearing, you need to write less relax and stop reading from a screen/sheet
and memories your lyrics, other that your all good...peace.


ps g/l in the up and coming tourney.
"You need to learn how to make an exit,
before you can dare make an entrance".
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