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    Posted: 11 October 2019 at 5:31pm
Is it just me or is it getting crazier out there?



The worst part of having a mental illness is people expect you to act as if you dont.
No courtesy, I refuse to front, I wont.
I just dont want to feel so bad anymore, All I have is negative thoughts.
Short fuse, minds ill, emotions out of sorts.
Me versus me has been my biggest fight,
On a tight rope between darkness and light,
I try and be alright, Mother tells me to smile and put on a happy face.
Purpose is to bring laughter and joy to this world,
but Fuck this place.
They laugh at me because I'm different, I laugh at them because their all the same.
I'm not ashamed, I feel estranged from people living out life as a fucked up game.

Why so serious?

You dont listen, do you?


Fuck You.

Lifes a Joke, I'm Through....

I used to think my life was a tragedy, now I realise it's a fucking comedy!
I hold a colossal animosity embedded deep inside, reaching its capacity.
I think I felt better when I was in the hospital, people there dont pretend to be sane.
Out here, all I see is people causing one another unnecessary pain,
What do they gain? No connection, then again trust is a dangerous game.
I dont even trust my reflection, that's the manner of my mind frame.
Madness is like gravity, all it takes is a little push and your drowning.
Swimming in thoughts I'm going round in,
Im closed off so I cant let the sound in.

Smile. Because it confuses people.

Most of all me.


*Bold indicates quotes from various Jokers

Edited by Mitch.Wagwaan - 11 October 2019 at 6:16pm
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Damn mother fucker, this shit hits home. I love the joker, for ibvious reasons. As an insane clown, I can truly relate to this here shit, and whether you identify as Juggalo or not you sound like one right now.
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I had no idea what a Juggalo was until I just googled it man. I'm not but I'm glad you can relate to this piece.
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Originally posted by Mitch.Wagwaan Mitch.Wagwaan wrote:

I had no idea what a Juggalo was until I just googled it man. I'm not but I'm glad you can relate to this piece.

You never heard of Juggalos? Well let's see if you can feel some wicked clown shit.

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Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote Point Blank Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 12 October 2019 at 7:37pm
This was nice Mitch, the first line was powerful and really set the tone for the rest of the verse. To take a load of quotes from the joker and build a verse around it is a really cool idea, don't think I've seen anything like that before. He is such a fucked up character that it would have been nice to see this drawn out a bit more and perhaps made a little bit more sadistic, but I still liked it. Keep it up.
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Very creative here dude, writing a verse around Joker quotes/sayings must
of took some thinking out, as it read real smooth too, you nailed the filling in
scenario, and gave it an edgy/dark vibe in the process, similar to a question
and answer slant it had this layered effect on reading which was done solidly,
cool inclusion that, in fact with Joker being insane and unpridctable made it
a tighter rope to walk so to type in the way of subject matter, as it had to stay
cruel and callous with a twisted logic to keep in character, i have no gripes or
faults with this drop, as i feel you fleshed it out real well, ripe work and ripe
read...peace.
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before you can dare make an entrance".
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Thanks PB & CJ, appreciate the feed lads.
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