Open Mic: Buzz Words & References

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    Posted: 04 May 2020 at 6:38pm


...it's a style...
...
Now you know damn good and well I ain't no paragon...
Of virtue making short stories Payton Gary long
But y'all want me to perform and sing a Katy Perry song
Praising Holy Mary while these racists carry on.
I could rhyme a few bars about a case of Perignon
Or dating married moms or a K of marijuan'
Or I could kick a few flows about these bayonetted arms
And blame it on the system that raised your parents wrong.
The amount of testosterone is truly microscopic
'cause you goofies like to gossip like the gays at hair salons.
Now having common sense does not make me Farrakhan
Even though I'm throwing all these flames at ancient Babylon.
Or at this echo chamber where I played it Barry Bonds...
Style and ran shit faster than a Roman military comm.

I'm a gun personified, so keep your weapons palmed
If they 'Gave You Power' then I'm talking like I'm Megatron.
...

...blaow!...


Edited by CHAIN - 04 May 2020 at 6:51pm
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Well i calling it if no one else does, BS, (referring to your opening line), if your not a
finished individual article in your own right with the pen, then most of the poetry I've
read counts for zero, and I do like me some Benjamin Zephaniah and Pam Ayres, shit
from time to time I even give Byron a whirl, so feel free to have a moment and let that
statement sink in, although you may not be Poet Laureate, yet, it's never stopped you
from throwing out (especially in last month, almost in conveyer belt fashion) quality
pieces, true they not be everybody's bag, but there's no doubting your game, now with
that typed, again you've made me say WOW on completion, I could now type blah blah
multiple syllables this and metaphorical blah that, but that I've done before, and the
fact you that already know that sways me from it, (although that shit is all present
still..lol), i was feeling the content here, kind of abstracted/subliminal, the self hype 'I
only move forward in life not back" scenario coupled with a question aspect of like
"why should I or would I just to please, I'm my own man", that s the vibe I was getting
out of this verse, I guess you already know you ain't going to please ppl all the time
from this statement-ish drop, again my FRIEND this is yet another vibrant piece that
we'll deserves a lot of merit, and I fear me typing RIPE doesn't do that, soooooooo,
Tremendous read......peace.
"You need to learn how to make an exit,
before you can dare make an entrance".
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lol

@Crim your feed is always hilarious


Never change

Appreciate you taking time out to share your thoughts.
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