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Red-B
Groupie Joined: 09 January 2014 Location: FL Status: Offline Points: 408 Crew: eNtiTy Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 2-0-1 Form: NWW |
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Posted: 12 December 2020 at 8:33am |
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Growing up I was looking for a better route too much bottled inside they tried to pry It out Stressing bout school kitchen table I would whine and pout Son quit bitching I’ll give you something to cry about Remember times I would go see my cousins Sleeping at my grandmas I’d think nothing of it Wearing baggy clothes when I step out in public I could talk about my struggles but that shit is redundant I could talk about my weight how I think it’s disgustin’ Or maybe insecurities that sit all above it Or how I hate my job how I feel like a puppet But up until now I didn’t want that uncovered But I know things change my destinys is my hands I tried to make amends with people I thought were friends I’ve tried and tried again I’m tired of giving in But Im feeling closer to death then I’ve ever been (uh!) Hook I’m just looking for a better route I done traveled I4 and still can’t make it out Chevy Malibu with tented windows faded out I could see my goals in sight if I wasn’t faded now (2x) |
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Dntplywelwitothers
Groupie Joined: 30 November 2013 Status: Offline Points: 172 |
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Quick read, easy flow after the first three lines.
decent reflective piece, this would sound alright to a beat, hooks aren’t my thing, it’s something I’d have to hear delivered before I could give honest feedback. Anyway, this is a nice lil purge |
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