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Groupie Joined: 18 March 2014 Location: London Status: Offline Points: 278 |
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Posted: 30 January 2021 at 9:31am |
We are in dark times, got to learn how to manoeuvre Mask, gloves and sanitisers... not what Covid threw up Learn how to move up, though culture vultures screw us To both viruses a natural remedy you can 'Be' like Manuka So i'm hoping-this offender comes clean about his globalist agenda To Labels the artist is just "stock", so really they're only-just a vendor The record labels are finished! Don't be scared I'm a Phobia defender Capitalists show faults; my journeys showing-how to Venture Industry is shady it needs to be taken over They let you rap about Crack and Baking Soda Dismissing our hardships as if mitigating's over Stop you, as soon as you start stating Kosher Time is nearly up for all these ageing jokers Won't lets us free; knowing we are making Owners We are so influenced we always fail in retail We are who we are: it's either Male or Female Dropping so much gems, check the scales in detail Got our own story, our masters tale's what we hail Change Gone Come, all we need is the patience And a spark like how slavery was ended by the Haitians With Racism and Viruses we are still getting daily patients But soon our life and our homes gonna be very spacious Fuck compliance, whether you want it or not its Equality Season And you can try to keep killing us for no fucking reason And its over for the News, they keep telling lies 'When you look at a black kid, you are seeing a Felons eyes' And whats worse is that we keep spreading spies Ben Carson, Candace Owens and the like will never thrive You will be able to stay home; "The Revolution WILL be Televised" |
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Groupie Joined: 09 January 2014 Location: FL Status: Offline Points: 408 Crew: eNtiTy Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 2-0-1 Form: NWW |
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This is a nice piece. I really like these lines specifically
Industry is shady it needs to be taken over they let you rap about crack and baking soda paints a clear picture as to what is trending nowadays. The Multi-syllabic rhymes are there and through and through this reads nicely. I am an audio head myself so easy transitions and readability is BIG for me. Overall nice piece. I think if I had one critique I’d say maybe if you sacrificed just a bit of the technical ability you’d get a more cohesive clear piece but on the flip side of that coin we all have different styles. Nice drop |
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