No Mercy: (FINAL) King Jehu V Orion |
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ILLSTARRR
Veteran LA CHAMP aka Da General Joined: 18 October 2003 Location: P-Town... HBC Status: Offline Points: 3934 Crew: Renegades Text Rank: #2 Stats: 47-6-2 Form: WLWNLW |
Topic: (FINAL) King Jehu V Orion Posted: 27 March 2005 at 9:26am |
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ILLSTARRR
Veteran LA CHAMP aka Da General Joined: 18 October 2003 Location: P-Town... HBC Status: Offline Points: 3934 Crew: Renegades Text Rank: #2 Stats: 47-6-2 Form: WLWNLW |
Posted: 29 March 2005 at 4:25pm |
ORION It's the finals... an' you ain't takin' a win man
*1 We had a tag battle in another site and we won the tag tournament. he said my bars were better than his in the finals. Edited by ILLA |
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ILLSTARRR
Veteran LA CHAMP aka Da General Joined: 18 October 2003 Location: P-Town... HBC Status: Offline Points: 3934 Crew: Renegades Text Rank: #2 Stats: 47-6-2 Form: WLWNLW |
Posted: 29 March 2005 at 4:41pm |
Wow Fuck Knows.... Who the hell won that
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Louie
Veteran Joined: 22 October 2003 Location: United Kingdom Status: Offline Points: 1062 Text Rank: #9 Stats: 18-6-0 Form: Unknown |
Posted: 29 March 2005 at 6:03pm |
am back for along time, i seen this shit an was impressed sik shit from both mc's , close called battle, i have mad respect for both of these guys, and this battle shows y! props to u both, i aint guna get into deep voting here cuz i aint got time so vote:orion,only just gets my vote for favourable punclines, its to close thou i mite read this shit and think jehu tomorrow, but now am thinking O got this classic final and type from u both, i hope u lot get ya renagedes shit goin BIG and we can get duets on the go!!! take it easy fella's |
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all my life ave been tryin to defy whats wrong and whats right, i jus hope now producing, can sequence my life.....
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LaWleSs
Standard Member Joined: 01 July 2004 Status: Offline Points: 431 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 2-5-0 Form: LWLLWL |
Posted: 29 March 2005 at 7:28pm |
Flow- Both equal where you flow decent most of the time but some lines you sacrificed it, usual tho.
Punches- Felt O Took this one, mis-hitting although played wordplay it was a tight ass punch, funny as well, personals were quite predictable if you ask me,about the carried you in lms shit,and most other personals i saw coming, was still nice tho, Jehu had some nice shit about style taking,and subconsciensly flippin his lms punch..again predictable. Wordplay- About a tie, was expecting better from orion and jehu surprised me, both had alot of played stuff and a few nice stand outs. One problem i had was Jehus More in common is very similar to Kay z's line in his freestyle dissing nas , I liked the Run one from O.. Multis- Tie, nothing needs to be said both ur usual schemes, some nice inticate ones in their from both. Close shit. Long time since i peeped a text battle, good couple months, but this was nice. Felt O edged it with his punches tho, good showing to both.. VOte-Orion. |
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LaWleSs
Standard Member Joined: 01 July 2004 Status: Offline Points: 431 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 2-5-0 Form: LWLLWL |
Posted: 29 March 2005 at 7:29pm |
make that jay z and not kay z.
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King Jehu
Veteran Joined: 23 January 2004 Status: Offline Points: 6088 Crew: Renegades Text Rank: #4 Stats: 54-18-1 Form: WLWWWL |
Posted: 29 March 2005 at 8:59pm |
My verse with the working links...
Ima shock ya soul when I see ya Your verse couldn't make me see-sick if you rocked the boat like Aalyah Funny... I'm stellar but Orion is not You soft like B2K but not the only O'Ryan to flop You're in danger, LA's feeling none of your bars So you couldn't be SAIPH now if that was one of your stars Caim homophobic but have the wrong sex in your mind Knew you were a fake artist from the CON-text of your lines O's a prophet, He must know that I'm taking the title He already said that my lines were better than his in the finals *1 And we come off the top like we lost hair But your beats and rhymes couldn't make u platinum if you were software So I'll mangle and strangle this bitch on some animal shit And break your mandible quick for biting the man with the spits *2 Took my style now I bite back but like Hannibal did You send me beats? I throw your "tune out" like channels just switched Your openers and closers are ok, the body is Filler You can't give me a loss now if you hacked hanGing, Bolo, Abs, Scotty AND Illa Son, you act like you brave, you shook... You'll lose and have more in COMMON (carmen) with either dave than looks *3 O's softer than fur, the Easter bunny shook him I wouldn't post my pic on LA either if I was that funny lookin! Fuck telescopes, I'm already lyrically seeing Sul U think you blowin up cause riders have you gassed like sport utility vehicles? You're skinny and easily beatable, but I put these verbs to work You were ridden when you beat me cause YOU still preffered my verse! You'll never get more blazed than in this battle, even if you knew Snoop I'm hungry, bout to eat this faggot O like he's a froot loop your verses are kinda boring to read, your typing is so lame I'll make you dash before and after the beating, like the hyphens in yo' name your punches MISSING, it's TRUE, go against THIS and you're SCREWED Cause I came in as the underdog but now I'm PISSING ON YOU *1 We had a tag battle in another site and we won the tag tournament. he said my bars were better than his in the finals. *2 He came into LA with ILLA's style, then changed to SymBion's Goldmic style... Now his style is similar to mine (ask Ice, he and others said so in the tag tournament) *3 Carmen Elektra... more IN Carman: Orion looks like Dave Navarro (her husband) I also beat Stalin, his name is Dave... so he'll have more in common with Dave |
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BRIGGZY
Standard Member Joined: 16 July 2004 Location: UK Status: Offline Points: 1617 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 9-2-0 Form: WWWWWW |
Posted: 30 March 2005 at 10:59am |
this shit was mad Close... Orion..Delivered sum very hard hittin punchlines,the Flow was Dope,Personals were Dope,Creativity was cool had a few nice lines in there n kept very consistant with his Punchs Jehu..Flow was nice Kept it solid n dope..Punchlines were Cool Hit hard on Orion..The Personals were nice u had harder hittin personals than orion did imo.Kept it creative n Very consistant
But overall Winner-Orion He was more Consistant with his Rhymes he kept Attacking n attracking Battle Was close as shit. Props |
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ILLSTARRR
Veteran LA CHAMP aka Da General Joined: 18 October 2003 Location: P-Town... HBC Status: Offline Points: 3934 Crew: Renegades Text Rank: #2 Stats: 47-6-2 Form: WLWNLW |
Posted: 30 March 2005 at 11:11am |
1 more vote an O's the champion
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I-kontinue
Veteran The Sovereign Joined: 14 July 2004 Status: Offline Points: 4961 Crew: The Dynasty Text Rank: #3 Stats: 46-9-0 Form: WWWWWL |
Posted: 30 March 2005 at 4:34pm |
Orion's verse showed agressiveness. Punches were on point. As he says "quality, not quantity" wit punches n the punches he threw landed very well. Of course it showed nice lyricism, and nice flow. His punches werent as direct as Jehu's...more fancy and wordplay-ish...its one of those verses that you have to know somethin about to understand...i know theres a word for it, i just cant remember it right now...his punches were Good and complex tho when understood...Smoothe drop
Jehu had the more direct approach wit the originality in punches, and I liked that. Nice personals in your verse. A great contender for Orion's...all the punches didnt land to their full effect tho.... He could have used the ender idea more to his advantage (that's a problem I have too.) The flow in this verse was Good as usual. Smoothe drop... Ok, when it comes down to it, both verses were up to par. Not the best I've seen from neither of you, but better than most battles here on L.A. Orion: 9.5/10 Jehu: 9/10 v/ Orion |
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Belairesfinest
Standard Member Joined: 29 January 2005 Location: United States Status: Offline Points: 844 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 2-15-7 Form: NLNNLL |
Posted: 30 March 2005 at 5:15pm |
4-0 Orion woopydoo good job buddy...Now you can look good when you shine my shoes on sundays!!
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ILLSTARRR
Veteran LA CHAMP aka Da General Joined: 18 October 2003 Location: P-Town... HBC Status: Offline Points: 3934 Crew: Renegades Text Rank: #2 Stats: 47-6-2 Form: WLWNLW |
Posted: 30 March 2005 at 5:59pm |
Fuck Off^
ORION tornament winner an LA CHAMP |
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