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    Posted: 27 March 2005 at 9:26am

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First to 6 votes or 4 KO
No Biting
No Recycling
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Votes MUST be explained
ALL Dodgy votes WILL get deleted!
No bitching after verses have been dropped
keep it in the bitchin thread or see me

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Send them shits to me

Oh yeah i kno this is gonna be done by tonite

All im gonna say is GOOD LUCK to both ov u
Show us sum classic shit

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 29 March 2005 at 4:25pm

ORION



Voters, FYI:
First: we ain't beefin', this is JUST a battle, please understand that, anyway
Said he missed sex durin' his separation from his gf
He recently sent me a TROJAN virus
I beat him in the topical tournament
In the last round Stalin tried to make him look gay
Jam Master J of (RUN-Dmc) was killed but forgotten soon after really
After beatin' Stalin he claimed that made him champ till the tourny was over...
If you don't get any of it now, don't vote.
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Yo... Renegades...

It's the finals... an' you ain't takin' a win man
Ya spits need work so bad they on street corners shakin' a tin can
Ya verse is suffering, ya versus suffering, I'm deadly to health
You're almost certain to lose... ya even SAID IT YASELF!
Your only hope is jokers who can't tell a punch from a rhyme
But I'll beat you, cue excuses, you'll be front of the line (think)
I quit LMS, won the tag myself, don't say you ain't know
That ya accomplishments ain't shit 'cuz I done GAVE YOU 'EM BOTH!
Yeah I said it, slingin' the sickness in infamy
If I beat you again, will we see another retirement for sympathy?
Ya ain't sinkin' me wit' ya keys, I'm rippin' this clown's raps
I'm too hot dude, ready to pop you WITH OR WITHOUT CAPS!
Ya form's a paradox, so I'm doubtin' ya class
'Cuz your streak's ain't shit yet they comin' outta ya ass?!
Ya lack the words an' catchin' nerves outta fright
'Cuz ya mis-hittin' like when you an' ya girl had that fight (boom)
Tried to take me wit' a virus, but jus' heed tha lesson
You sent ME a Trojan, but YOU gon' be the one that needs protection
Beat ya every time wit' heavy rhymes, you're no obstacle
"King of Open Mic"? STILL got merked by me in topical!
I'm unstoppable, each an' every flow slays
We've all played checkers, tha semis prove King goes both ways!
Ya whole game's suckin' tha dick, forgotten, ya nothin' in this
When J dies we won't care 'cuz I'm still RUN-in this shit (ouch)
Sonnin' this kid, redundant in scripts, ya ain't dope man
Gon' need to start Rumours to top this, like Lindsey Lohan
My whole plan's to take his weight an' he gonna pray I fail
But J couldn't move numbers standin' on top of weighin' scales!
You got amateur raps clown, we all laugh atcha ass now
So desperate for the belt ya tried to take it after the last round!!!
Ironic twist to finish, ya spit's diminished, this whore is fragile
You're pussy, you fear me, and you're afraid to talk before a battle!!!





King Jehu


Ima shock ya soul when I see ya
Your verse couldn't make me see-sick if you rocked the boat like Aalyah
Funny... I'm stellar but Orion is not
You soft like B2K but not the only O'Ryan to flop
You're in danger, LA's feeling none of your bars
So you couldn't be SAIPH now if that was one of your stars
Caim homophobic but have the wrong sex in your mind
Knew you were a fake artist from the CON-text of your lines
O's a prophet, He must know that I'm taking the title
He already said that my lines were better than his in the finals  *1
And we come off the top like we lost hair
But your beats and rhymes couldn't make u platinum if you were software
So I'll mangle and strangle this bitch on some animal shit
And break your mandible quick for biting the man with the spits    *2
Took my style now I bite back but like Hannibal did
You send me beats? I throw your "tune out" like channels just switched


Your openers and closers are ok, the body is Filler
You can't give me a loss now if you hacked hanGing, Bolo, Abs, Scotty AND Illa
Son, you act like you brave, you shook...
You'll lose and have more in COMMON (carmen) with either dave than looks   *3
O's softer than fur, the Easter bunny shook him
I wouldn't post my pic on LA either if I was that funny lookin!
Fuck telescopes, I'm already lyrically seeing Sul
U think you blowin up cause riders have you gassed like sport utility vehicles?
You're skinny and easily beatable, but I put these verbs to work
You were ridden when you beat me cause YOU still preffered my verse!
You'll never get more blazed than in this battle, even if you knew Snoop
I'm hungry, bout to eat this faggot O like he's a froot loop
your verses are kinda boring to read, your typing is so lame
I'll make you dash before and after the beating, like the hyphens in yo' name
your punches MISSING, it's TRUE, go against THIS and you're SCREWED
Cause I came in as the underdog but now I'm PISSING ON YOU

*1  We had a tag battle in another site and we won the tag tournament. he said my bars were better than his in the finals.
*2  He came into LA with ILLA's style, then changed to SymBion's Goldmic style... Now his style is similar to mine (ask Ice, he and others said so in the tag tournament)
*3  Carmen Elektra... more IN Carmen: Orion looks like Dave Navarro (her husband)
I also beat Stalin, his name is Dave... so he'll have more in common with Dave



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Wow Fuck Knows.... Who the hell won that










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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 29 March 2005 at 6:03pm

am back for along time, i seen this shit an was impressed sik shit from both mc's , close called battle, i have mad respect for both of these guys, and this battle shows y! props to u both, i aint guna get into deep voting here cuz i aint got time

so

vote:orion,only just gets my vote for favourable punclines, its to close thou i mite read this shit and think jehu tomorrow, but now am thinking O got this

classic final and type from u both, i hope u lot get ya renagedes shit goin BIG and we can get duets on the go!!!

take it easy fella's

all my life ave been tryin to defy whats wrong and whats right, i jus hope now producing, can sequence my life.....
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 29 March 2005 at 7:28pm
Flow- Both equal where you flow decent most of the time but some lines you sacrificed it, usual tho.

Punches- Felt O Took this one, mis-hitting although played wordplay it was a tight ass punch, funny as well, personals were quite predictable if you ask me,about the carried you in lms shit,and most other personals i saw coming, was still nice tho, Jehu had some nice shit about style taking,and subconsciensly flippin his lms punch..again predictable.

Wordplay- About a tie, was expecting better from orion and jehu surprised me, both had alot of played stuff and a few nice stand outs. One problem i had was Jehus More in common is very similar to Kay z's line in his freestyle dissing nas , I liked the Run one from O..

Multis- Tie, nothing needs to be said both ur usual schemes, some nice inticate ones in their from both.

Close shit. Long time since i peeped a text battle, good couple months, but this was nice. Felt O edged it with his punches tho, good showing to both..

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 29 March 2005 at 7:29pm
make that jay z and not kay z.
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 29 March 2005 at 8:59pm
My verse with the working links...


Ima shock ya soul when I see ya
Your verse couldn't make me see-sick if you rocked the boat like Aalyah
Funny... I'm stellar but Orion is not
You soft like B2K but not the only O'Ryan to flop
You're in danger, LA's feeling none of your bars
So you couldn't be SAIPH now if that was one of your stars
Caim homophobic but have the wrong sex in your mind
Knew you were a fake artist from the CON-text of your lines
O's a prophet, He must know that I'm taking the title
He already said that my lines were better than his in the finals  *1
And we come off the top like we lost hair
But your beats and rhymes couldn't make u platinum if you were software
So I'll mangle and strangle this bitch on some animal shit
And break your mandible quick for biting the man with the spits    *2
Took my style now I bite back but like Hannibal did
You send me beats? I throw your "tune out" like channels just switched


Your openers and closers are ok, the body is Filler
You can't give me a loss now if you hacked hanGing, Bolo, Abs, Scotty AND Illa
Son, you act like you brave, you shook...
You'll lose and have more in COMMON (carmen) with either dave than looks   *3
O's softer than fur, the Easter bunny shook him
I wouldn't post my pic on LA either if I was that funny lookin!
Fuck telescopes, I'm already lyrically seeing Sul
U think you blowin up cause riders have you gassed like sport utility vehicles?
You're skinny and easily beatable, but I put these verbs to work
You were ridden when you beat me cause YOU still preffered my verse!
You'll never get more blazed than in this battle, even if you knew Snoop
I'm hungry, bout to eat this faggot O like he's a froot loop
your verses are kinda boring to read, your typing is so lame
I'll make you dash before and after the beating, like the hyphens in yo' name
your punches MISSING, it's TRUE, go against THIS and you're SCREWED
Cause I came in as the underdog but now I'm PISSING ON YOU


*1  We had a tag battle in another site and we won the tag tournament. he said my bars were better than his in the finals.

*2  He came into LA with ILLA's style, then changed to SymBion's Goldmic style... Now his style is similar to mine (ask Ice, he and others said so in the tag tournament)

*3  Carmen Elektra... more IN Carman: Orion looks like Dave Navarro (her husband)

I also beat Stalin, his name is Dave... so he'll have more in common with Dave
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 30 March 2005 at 10:59am

this shit was mad Close...

Orion..Delivered sum very hard hittin punchlines,the Flow was Dope,Personals were Dope,Creativity was cool had a few nice lines in there n kept very consistant with his Punchs

Jehu..Flow was nice Kept it solid n dope..Punchlines were Cool Hit hard on Orion..The Personals were nice u had harder hittin personals than orion did imo.Kept it creative n Very consistant

 

But overall

Winner-Orion

He was more Consistant with his Rhymes he kept Attacking n attracking Battle Was close as shit.

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 30 March 2005 at 11:11am

1 more vote an O's the champion


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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 30 March 2005 at 4:34pm
Orion's verse showed agressiveness. Punches were on point. As he says "quality, not quantity" wit punches n the punches he threw landed very well. Of course it showed nice lyricism, and nice flow. His punches werent as direct as Jehu's...more fancy and wordplay-ish...its one of those verses that you have to know somethin about to understand...i know theres a word for it, i just cant remember it right now...his punches were Good and complex tho when understood...Smoothe drop

Jehu had the more direct approach wit the originality in punches, and I liked that. Nice personals in your verse. A great contender for Orion's...all the punches didnt land to their full effect tho.... He could have used the ender idea more to his advantage (that's a problem I have too.) The flow in this verse was Good as usual. Smoothe drop...

Ok, when it comes down to it, both verses were up to par. Not the best I've seen from neither of you, but better than most battles here on L.A.

Orion: 9.5/10
Jehu: 9/10

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 30 March 2005 at 5:15pm

4-0 Orion woopydoo good job buddy...Now you can look good when you shine my shoes on sundays!!


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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 30 March 2005 at 5:59pm
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