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Scotty32 
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 Topic: R1-B7 - Phatal v Frank WhitePosted: 05 June 2005 at 10:41am |
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Maximum Length (Time): 3mins first to 5 votes wins or 3 KO dickride votes are not allowed crew votes are not allowed biting is not allowed Votes must be Fully explained Checkin Deadline: 11th June 2005 Post Deadline: 15th June 2005 Edited by Scotty_32 |
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Phatal
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Joined: 31 May 2005 Status: Offline Points: 114 |
Posted: 05 June 2005 at 11:39am |
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check check
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Scotty32
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Posted: 15 June 2005 at 2:13pm |
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Phatals Audio File
Frank Whites Audio File you may now vote. Note: to download right click with the mouse on the link and select "Save File As..." |
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LaWleSs
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Joined: 01 July 2004 Status: Offline Points: 431 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 2-5-0 Form: LWLLWL |
Posted: 15 June 2005 at 2:27pm |
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ehh frank you sound MAAAD unconfortable and its ruining your punches ..
flow and delivery is off by alot. but some of the punches r funny,
especially the rengade beats one. not feeling this one bro, u came
better before .
pha..this beat tight..delivery is fire..rhyme scheme is good, lyrics are cool you going at it..flows fluid as hell..clearly the better audio here.. vote phatal.. |
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Junior Shade
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Aka UnaBomber Joined: 07 June 2005 Location: UK Status: Offline Points: 5015 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 55-14-6 Form: LWWWLW |
Posted: 15 June 2005 at 2:38pm |
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Frank White, Ok i guess not feeling your flow at all sorry, Punch's were there one after another. Punch's/Personal's - 7/10 Overall - 17/30 Phatal, Damn opener is dope as fuck flow is perfect like the whole track got nice punch's aswell Punch's/Personal's - 8/10 Overall - 24/30 Nice battle but Phatal took it easy, props to both. Vote - Phatal |
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frank white
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First Audio Battle Winner Joined: 23 April 2004 Location: United Kingdom Status: Offline Points: 1556 Crew: XFade: Phoenix Text Rank: #13 Stats: 28-63-3 Form: LLNWWL |
Posted: 15 June 2005 at 2:40pm |
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look i respect phatal winning i accpet that but how could he win on personals im confused on that one but props to phatal
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the punching machine
bad boy 4 life biggie smalls was the illest |
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BRIGGZY
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Joined: 16 July 2004 Location: UK Status: Offline Points: 1617 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 9-2-0 Form: WWWWWW |
Posted: 15 June 2005 at 2:41pm |
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Phatal..damn..Beat is sick...flow is on point n solid..Emotion/Delivery were ILL Shit was real nice ur vocals suited the beat..Lyrics were Tight..Shit was nice man overall-8/10 |
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King Jehu
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Joined: 23 January 2004 Status: Offline Points: 6088 Crew: Renegades Text Rank: #4 Stats: 54-18-1 Form: WLWWWL |
Posted: 15 June 2005 at 2:43pm |
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Phatal had a more traditional diss track, and while he didn't have as
many punchlines as Frank, he came harder and better. Frank didn't spit,
he drooled on the beat... His flow was bad due to the awkward pauses in
the lines, like
"Frank's gonna fuck Up your filler..." That and a monotone delivery made it sound very un-natural. You sounded like you really didn't want to hit him, which goes against what you wrote. Phatal had some really good lines, but although he lacked the "holyfuckingshit" type of punchlines, still took this for being overall better. Vote: Phat Al |
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Insert something rappy here
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-Orion-
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Joined: 08 April 2004 Location: DisturbinLondon Status: Offline Points: 9598 Crew: Renegades Text Rank: #1 Stats: 90-4-1 Form: WWWWNW |
Posted: 15 June 2005 at 2:43pm |
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Phatal... This beat is absolute flames... This entire thing is fierce, no exaggeration... Delivery is perfect for the beat and flow is on-point start to finish... I dunno man, you've put out tracks worse than this lol... Very hard... Lyrically... Menorahs line, "Jewish nigga?!", Jehst/meth line, jus' tha whole thing, dark, lyrical and hard... Not that many punchlines, but I guess that can come in later rounds, this was otherwise flawless... "go home nigga" lmao... this was fire and I don't think anyone can question that whether they know u or not Frank... Started with flow on the snare nicely, but as it went on you needed to pause for too long periods of times and rushed other parts... Delivery-wise it was OK but this beat suits deeper/thicker voices so you did sound kinda awkward on it... You had the same problem SJay did, all the witty/funny things you had in your verse you didn't say in a witty/funny way, lacked emotion and delivery when it mattered most, lyrically there were good lines, Marxmen one, earache was an aight idea, ruined the last Renegade beat, 99% fans are Renegades, fake like XXL pics, all good but none really delivered well except arguably the opener... VOTE: Phatal |
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They just said that FUCKIN' with me They didn't mean it Nah . . . |
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King Jehu
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Joined: 23 January 2004 Status: Offline Points: 6088 Crew: Renegades Text Rank: #4 Stats: 54-18-1 Form: WLWWWL |
Posted: 15 June 2005 at 2:47pm |
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wow...
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Insert something rappy here
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Scotty32
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Speaker of Wisdom & Truth Joined: 18 October 2003 Location: North West, UK Status: Offline Points: 10489 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 3-4-0 Form: WLLWLL |
Posted: 15 June 2005 at 2:50pm |
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Phatal wins 5-0
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