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    Posted: 01 August 2005 at 10:56am
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Deadline: August 10
No-Show = loss for team (applies to both teams this time as both teams have a deadline)
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 11 August 2005 at 5:22am
Orion:

I'm gunnin for you... ha, yeahhh

You-know that dude-O has got bars to Everest
Run from us then you DEAD like Jean Charles De Menezes (HAAAAA!)
He pussy... n' got his homies to adore 'im
Might be close to ILL son but that's only in ya forum (aww)
Ya phony an' ya borin' an' you fakin' you advanced
Won't be servin' me no slugs unless you waiterin' in France
Break him where he stands, this little boy smacked an' toasted
He spits on the mic but too he's too WACK to post it (true story)
You lack the focus, expected some better days?
7 of you faggots are REJECTED from Renegades
Wrecked at a tender age, 15 an' left a broke dude
Don't think you makin' ground jus' 'cuz we walkin' all over you
Ownin' fools, the way I'm ruthless it's seamless
I'm bound to leave you lyin' 'cuz the TRUTH is ya weakness
Peep this... I show wack herbs aggression
You only talk shit behind password protection ('fuck outta here)
Get sonned motherfucker, don't FRONT motherfucker
If you think Game kills anythin' you a dumb motherfucker
Blood soakin' ya casket, ya know that ya wack bitch
'Cuz FL's the place folk go when they past it (ahaha)
Wack fuck, gassed up, switched crews 'cuz he a fake cat
Anyone you beaten has been sleepin' or jus' straight WACK
You ain't accomplished shit, I'ma rip whatchu wrote
Won't get a win-in-32 if Scotty fixed you the votes (hahahaha)
Believe me... I'd never let this clown slay O
Y'all 'bout to be LL 'cuz this ya SECOND ROUND KO
An' they know, they outclassed, we formin' a threat
But they the Front Line so they must be lookin' FORWARD to DEATH
Swarmin' ya text... dogg I KNEW this was easy
You ain't on for respect, go face ya crew for some freebies (WHAT?!)
Ya doomed to defeat G, smashed you before I'll SMASH you AGAIN
Y'all talk but when it comes to ACTION you DEAD (motherFUCKAAAZ!)

Sit on it... faggot ass camper motherfuckers

Game:

…Welcome To official ‘Lyrical Assault’ …

FYI:
*Renegades claim they ‘runnin this’
*I personally think cuz of his rank, peeps d/r him
* 20TheTruth told me what I say below personally afta I asked him
* He’s frontin cus the last crew battle Ren vs FL, he was like “I’ll sit this one out” cus he thought they could do it by themselves, but then when they were backed up, he jumped in against Unforgiven
*Had the text battle title twice, an lost it twice
*I hope ya’ll know tina turner an her song r-e-s-p-e-c-t… and kno john cena, the rappin wrestler…in ma open callout, I asked for sum1 respected and he accepted the callout
*When peeps lose a match, they just get the loss added to their record, but when he loses its always a big controversy!
*Peeps call him space shuttle
*Belair was banned from L.A. for showing his picture



…Let’s Go For The Win…

LOOK,
L.A.’s official pedophile… get newbies to sweat yo style
You think you “RUNNIN this?” Without ya dick, you couldn’t get a mile!
An’ I ain’t telling lies, need 20 to tell you?
THE LAST MATCH THAT WE HAD HE SAID HE BARELY FELT YOU!
Plus, the last crew battle, ya whole GANG was Frontin
‘Cus ya’ll was bout to lose, so you HAD to jump in (yeh)

…Play With His Feelings…

Like a MYSTERY to me…how LONG you been flowin?
…An’ still need a couple riders to be ON you like Trojan?
Call me a carnivore, I eat his words (beef) to pinch my craving
‘Cus I ain’t seen an O-line actually HIT, since the Ravens!
Orion?! Overrated! Just my RIVAL at best
…Gaydes are too…dats why ILLA took the TITLE an’ left!
Thinkin you respected?... Big ego? And Tina mood?
I’ll diss you wit viscious spits, then slam ya like Cena do!
My punches similar to trains, NOBODY CAN STOP IT
You aint a vet, jus’ pro at losin… SO SCOTTY CAN DROP IT

…Kill Him…

Bitchin about votes, Ima knock up ya fake hustle
Fly past ya head by SPITTIN FIRE like a rocket , ‘space shuttle’
You cant handle half the heat wit my degree of bars
…So above this motherfucker, I can PEE on stars
A light year or inch away, aint no way you TOPPIN THIS
Got ma drift? I’ll blow ya top like alcoholics POPPIN CRISP
Injectin slick venom spits to most of you dorks and…
I’ma erase “O”… like im talking NEW YAWK SLANG!
Plus I did expect to see Orion actually step to me
‘Cus his respect is “nothing but net” like number twenty three

…He’s Already Dead, Now Stomp The Shit Out Of Him...

The FLOW is RIDIC, and you KNOW DAT IM SICK
You ugly…SHIT! Belair was BANNED jus’ for SHOWIN YA PIC?!
…Fact of the matter IS you must be OFF wit the pen
Cus you done copped the title, dropped it, got it, LOST IT AGAIN
Dumbfounded state of mind, I don’t think ya GOT A CLUE!...
I can literally ‘DROP SHIT’ and still be on top of you…
(toilet seats, O-shaped)

**!.:BOOM :.!**
Another F.L. win
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 12 August 2005 at 7:41pm

ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo, this is how its done *retracts comment from illa and stalin battle* it dont really need the same massive breakdown but god dam Game u almost had him man, gotta be honest i used to have u down as the top of the middle tier of battlers round here but u moved yaself up, had some ridic lines in here, personals was bangin, offensive line punch *takes hat off*, cena line...that was razor sharp, setup was crisp and the hit was like BOOM, aretha franklyn did respect tune but turner cudda dun a remake, i aint know too much bout her 2 be honest, so ill assume she did for u 2 say that...to be honest if u look at it, stylistically u held ya own and brought it hot with the punches and wordplay with ya own personality with it tho...like most people will jus have a certain pattern they go with but u becomin more consistant with the wordplay and punches while also keepin ya signature "shit on you" type punches that you throw in there, which is stylistically somethin i like bout ya drop

but ive sed it b4 in anotha crew battle (i think on this site as well) that wen i look at a crew battle i want to see you comin at everyone within the crew and not just the dude u battlin...other people mite have there preference on that but thats jus how i think it shud be done and Game was light on the Renegade orientated disses...ill put it down rite now for everyone, if this was in the one on one section then i'd give it to Game because the personal punches were fire...had to jump in, ouuuuuuuuuuuuch (that was actually the best crew-facin punch as well), and if people think that i shud be votin accordin to Orion vs Game then change the vote...impressive shizzle tho...Orion, hotness...u hit Game but to be honest i think he got at u harder on a personal level, but then punches like the second round KO, the FL...past it, and the front line fuckas die first or waheva that was made sure u pipped him, stylistically i like how u've moved away from the strictly abstract-diss type of wordplay and now have a wider array in your arsenal and also how u had the straight punches in there that kind of diluted ya drop but made sure that u kept hittin thruout (like u used to be more wordplay-heavy but now u can mix it up...like u still wudda had hot punches if u took out most of the wordplay and the game-directed personals), and the motherfucker bar is shit that uno that i like...jus brings a down a level in terms of mixin it up of a straight science/intellectual drop and keepin it so that its not repetative in its nature and alla that....

but yeh, hot assed fuckin battle...id actually go as far to say a classic from both sides, i always sed that this wud be a dope battle if it went down and i was proved to be right...both captured my respect here, and thats wah it used to be all about

vote - orion

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 12 August 2005 at 8:26pm

i like people that know what they're talkin' about...

the funny part is that i don't really like iceC... lol jk

peace and respect ice

nice battle you fucking fucks

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 13 August 2005 at 1:50am
This is the hottest battle in the whole crew battle... Great Job for both. Game, way to fuckin step up man, I thought this was gonna be easy at first. Illa did well recruiting Game and Junior Shade... top 15 for both i the near future... Game first, ha ha. 
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 13 August 2005 at 6:45pm
do i still have hopes of winnin this? lol, uppin
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 13 August 2005 at 11:26pm
oh yeh, so i can at least "say" it...i get where ya comin from ice, but tha thing is this battle was originally set up in the battlefields (when i began writing) and then moved to crew battles and i jus stuck with the "against ORION" mentality
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 14 August 2005 at 2:20am
"Against Orion," lol

Ever hear of "if ya can't beat 'em, join 'em?" Join the Darkside, Game.
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 14 August 2005 at 8:30am
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 14 August 2005 at 10:57am
Ahhh the pitfalls of prewritin... ya see... that's why mine was so crew oriented...'cuz it's a crew battle...if it was one on one it woulda been more Game-oriented...and yeah, votes would be nice... And yeah Game I was gonna wait till shit was over, but mad props on the verse... head an shoulders above your previous shit... I'd have to say I've been ya harshest critic since u won the tourny jus to make sure you didn't get carried away but you've proved yourself here... If you can out this sorta shit without havin to pre-write and on a regular basis then you'll be in business... peace
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 14 August 2005 at 2:07pm
Woah, Hottest Battle Ive Read While Being On This Site.

Orion - As Always You Came Sick And Straight To The Point.Multies Were Perfect And Not Too Stretched. Didnt Notice Any That Were Forced Either. You Had The Personals Locked Homie, Especially Clowning His Crew And Their Name, For Example That One Bout Being On The Frontline And Looking Forward To Death Was Sick. Punches Were Off The Chain,Very Personal And Hit Real Hard. Wordplay/Nameplay Was Pretty Tight, Especially The Ones About His Crew. Overall Your Verse Flowed Real Tight And Was Really Hot.

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Wack fuck, gassed up, switched crews 'cuz he a fake cat
Anyone you beaten has been sleepin' or jus' straight WACK


Game - Damn, Thats The Hottest I Ever Seen You Spit Dawg.Mad Multies That Flowed Tight And Matched Up With The Punches. Personals Were Off The Chain, Especially That Shit About Belair Getting Banned For Showing His Pic LMAO.Punches Were All Over The Place, In A Good Way, They Were Throw In Everywhere And That Made Them Hit Harder Whenever They Came Across. The Best Punch Was Prolly The One Bout Belair. Overall You Came Real Hot Homie, But Orion Won By The Skin Of His Teeth

Tightest Battle Ive Read In The Crew Battle So Far, Well, Ive Read All Of Lol, So Yeah, This Is The Hottest.Longest Vote Ive Ever Written Too LMAO, So No Complaining Bout It Everyone! Haha

Orion GMV

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 14 August 2005 at 2:32pm

Orion - Hott verse hit hard, good personals the mic line was a tight one lol, Flow was flawless help by the use of ur multis which were tight to, Name playes came of nice and really hit home. Tight drop showed ur heat. O and tell u wat that opener was sick lol

Game - Came at ur fullest here havent seen u spit better than that since u joined major props on that , Your punches were tight and thou u lacked the amount of orion ur personals were tight to , Flow was sick , multis were tight . Overall game you came with some crazy lines props.

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Orion
Blood soakin' ya casket, ya know that ya wack bitch
'Cuz FL's the place folk go when they past it (ahaha)
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Peep this... I show wack herbs aggression
You only talk shit behind password protection
Game
Like a MYSTERY to me…how LONG you been flowin?
…An’ still need a couple riders to be ON you like Trojan?
&
Dumbfounded state of mind, I don’t think ya GOT A CLUE!...
I can literally ‘DROP SHIT’ and still be on top of you…

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Ok though i dont think game should have left this battle without a vote , orion has to have it

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 14 August 2005 at 2:39pm
Big up to Game, yo...
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 14 August 2005 at 2:40pm

Bueno... lock it up

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 14 August 2005 at 2:42pm

Damn...

Well I thought he shoulda got sum Credit




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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 14 August 2005 at 3:47pm
3rd win for renegades
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