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    Posted: 01 August 2005 at 10:57am
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 11 August 2005 at 5:16am
Stalin:

fuck ya groupies, hopin the voters listen to facts
someone ran off wit ya money, all u did is diss him on wax
he aint competition, who aint expect me to punk him
Illa aint no streetfighter, even when he pressin the buttons (this aint a game bitch)
talkin like u toy wit crime, pussy ill destroy ya lines
Can you picture a thug singin along to The Boy Is Mine?
u aint shit, what the fuck do u bring to the table
check the tourny finals, this bitch was singin to Phatal (Phatal, ewww Phatal)
im like jason chasin ya dreams, now Im on the hunt
lil bitch, even hangin thinkin its your time of the month*
got alot of groupies but im tellin ya your wack
u needed chincheck to bring talent to ya track
why the fuck u a leader, aint even a fan of ya clones
2 faced bitch, u told me Briggz cant handle his own**
u a straight bitch only place u got fans is on the net ho
and fact is u "stayin broke" cuz ya fake ass cant "catch flo"***

*Hangins second post
**he told me on msn that its crazy to put briggz against phatal, damn briggz, thats hard
***His boy flo took a couples G's from his ass and he still aint do nothin to him

ILLA:

Stalins msn is 'moneyoverbitches' he from illinois
Mashonda seems to appear on cassidy tracks jus singing hooks/hooks boxin
The sport fencing is used with tips on the points of swords
If u dont get the wordplay dont vote.. cus thurs fire right here


Blaze em...



Yo U cant win.. It gon be LA dot com.. slash ya chin
I choose "money over bitches" thats why im Cashing ya in
Renegades half steppin, When we land wid Killer Poise
Turnin' stalin out as a Fan, Since he reps "Illa Noise" (ILLINOIS)
U just Woman, U aint ghetto... or safisticated
Ur Bitch, Life an Fists are ALL Completly Wasted
Face it, 'One hit wonder' Ill put u under
All u do is catch  "Hooks" like fuckin' Mashonda
Im Foreal, This bitch should 'beg' my pardon
All his 'Big Lines' are 'MISSING' like they Milk Cartons (get it)
This embarrassing, Im eight places above u
Ill send u 'Flyin' to heaven like a fuckin' Dove Dude
Fuck ya Long lines, they aint makin' no sense
Cus u aint makin' ur 'Point' like practicing Ta Fence   (fencin)
Multies so what Bitch? Im quick to thump a spitter
Cus Stalin's cheesey shit, Coming out like Bumper Stickers!!




Ova...


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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 11 August 2005 at 9:40am
Stalin - Dope Flow, Good Multi's, they were Smooth... Personals were Fire, Ripped the fuck outta him with them... some dope Meta's, Last bar was Fire, hahaha... Good Shit i was feelin'...

Illa - Blah, Simple Flow... Boring Rhymes... dno what ya tried to do with the First bar, buh that aint a multi'... best line was probably the Illa-Noise line, that was good... rest was jus simple... last bar was aiight though...

Overall - Stalin took this pretty easily... much nicer personals, nicer flow and better Rhymes... jus took it with nearly everything

Vote/ Stalin


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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 11 August 2005 at 10:50am
Stalin : Nice Flow Throughout, Pretty Nice Multies, Sick Punches, Mad Personals, My Favourite Line Was The Singing To Fatal Line Haha,Overall That Was Some Tight Shit Homie,

Illa : Came Weaker Than I Expected, On The First Bar Your Multies Were Off,Flow Was Pretty Tight,Punches Were Ok, I Liked The Bumper Sticker One.


All his 'Big Lines' are 'MISSING' like they Milk Cartons (get it)

No I Dont Get It, Lol

Tight Battle

Stalin GMV

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 11 August 2005 at 10:58am

If u dont get the wordplay i said dont vote..

In american missin' peeps go on milk cartons wid the big letters MISSING on the front of em.

Plus its pretty obvious u jockin' 1 team on here kid



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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 11 August 2005 at 11:20am
seriously, dont start with the fucking jockin accusations...they old, and make you look like you can't take votes...


i got the wordplay, but mostly, it was just played....


so seriously, no more bitchin about votes.

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POP POPPITY WHAT, I Know Yall Aint Poppin At Us

Cuz One or Two Punches Will Leave You TALKIN LIKE SEAN CONNERY DOES

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 11 August 2005 at 11:24am
haha... ok











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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 12 August 2005 at 6:55pm
I don't see how Nox should be allowed 2 vote on this crew battle and especially on an Illa battle but fe fi fo fum...

conclusion...best battle ive seen in a while in these parts, is pretty hard coz i thought illa connected pretty solidly thruout the drop until maybe the last line which was kinda anticlimatic, but u cant hate on the wordplay thruout his drop at all, and to be honest thats usually an area that he shows mad inconsistancy with, but Illa noise was like BOOM, u cant fuck with it...stalin's verse was hot also but a cuple of things i didnt like about it was that he opened with the same punch which was pretty wack, jus span it out a different way and then had two singin punches straight after each other...i wudda jus went with the phatal one coz that was a hot punch while 2 me the otha 1 doesnt really stand up wen u re-read the verse jus coz i dont particularly give a shit wah tune a dude listens 2, but was funny the first time round and thats wah counts...time of the month was ok, duno, seemed to be pushin on the verges of "look i have a personal" but u shaded it, average punch...briggz punch, agen kinda weak of u 2 put that in coz thats jus the guy bein real wit u sayin 'i think briggs will lose'...and i wudda omitted the chincheck line coz the flow is slightly diff to the rest and looks like it was jus stuck in there...plus u gettin like Game the amount of fukin names u droppin, fukin hell man u need to chill out wit that...while illa had the punchlines constant from where i sittin, first line was filler like a motha fuka and anotha example of the abstract personal, but while stalins was kinda like "yeh its a personal punch but it the diss is kinda suspect" i wud say that yours was more "yeh thats a nice punch but the personal aspect of it is kinda suspect"...id go with the latter everytime tho, illa noise i mentioned, dopeness...the next line was filler, jab but fuck it i guess u both had those bars between the hot ones that were eitha dodgy or transistional...next two bars weren't anything great but were both solid punches and good use of similes...it doesnt hurt u as much to have punches like that tho with a shorter bar structure coz with stalins style it all kind of builds up to a big punch and if u left goin "hmmm, maybe" afta it then it leaves a worse impression of a verse as a whole instead of if u looked at it bar for bar...dove dude was pretty weak actually, was more of a jab...i think i didnt see that bar the first time i read this, but then i liked the set up bar with that one so it didnt hurt you that bad, kinda sloppy tho considerin ya finisher...i think u had all that otha shit and u were like "fuk it, ill jus throw these two down i cant be fucked", i done it b4 and yeh its easy to do but i think that ya middle section cudda done with a harder pucnh in the middle...the fence line kinda brought it bak tho and the lack of a killer finisher hurt u, i think if the finisher was shit hot then i wudda given the battle to you...

but i duno...i aint really broke anything down like this in a while coz i cudnt be fucked wen i first read it and thought "verse for verse" i was thinkin illa coza the style and how the weaker of his punches didnt really stick out as much as Stalin's did, but then when u look at it bar for bar then u kind of go to thinkin "well actually Stalin had MORE and he used the multis" and all of that, i mean...its hard to judge wen shit is like that do u go with ya gut reaction and vote on the verse as a whole or do u break it down like an enzyme and say "well he was technically better"

tough one but i think with stalins style u gotta make sure that you come precise as a mother fucker and while he had the better punches on the whole the ones that i questioned were really too many, like 4-6bars stuck out eitha intially or wen i looked at it bar for bar and thats just too many for me in an 8bar battle...illa, bar for bar dude was prolly better than u but then im nah really into this scientific battle dissection stuff no more so u edged it for me

Vote - illa (try and find a better expo you text hoes)
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 17 August 2005 at 6:24am
Uppin' 2-1 Stalin










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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 22 August 2005 at 12:49am
lol...i jus caught the part in IceC's explanation where he said "u gettin like Game the amount of names you droppin"...wow, i guess i dont even notice it...i use what i can to rip a fella, ya kno..lol
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 22 August 2005 at 3:59am
Game as in the rapper Game... not you... Game drops names alllllllllll the time on his tracks
. . . Now who said they fuckin' with me?
They just said that FUCKIN' with me
They didn't mean it
Nah . . .
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 22 August 2005 at 5:43pm
oh, lol...fuck!
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 22 August 2005 at 10:15pm
^ wow.
no more
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 22 August 2005 at 10:52pm
lol @ game thinkin he drops anybody, lol (sorry, I had to, )
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 24 August 2005 at 12:16pm
Uppin for more votes
+Sick-Witted+
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 24 August 2005 at 5:43pm
jehu, quit wit the wordplay..lol...'dropin anybody' as in 'droppin any name' is what the statement was about
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 24 August 2005 at 7:14pm
This shit shouldn't even matter anymore. Dude ain't even in our crew anymore...

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 24 August 2005 at 7:59pm

Stalin From Illinois...???hmmm

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 25 August 2005 at 7:38am

stalin...ok his personals were good tha line bout his man ran wit his money fucked up tha boy is mine line like really ina way did it for me as far as illas image cuz it seemed as niggah was dis hardcore niggah dat dont listen to soft shit and staklin exposed him but down side his rhymes juz didnt seem like he wanted to battle and he brang back tha money line again unless dat was diff but seemed like he was talkin bout tha same shit

illa...i dont know dis verse seemed like he didnt wanna show up mashonda line its like wut tah fuck you talkin about, illa noise shit seemed beyond forced dont know didnt seem like he wanted to be here aight 1

vote:stalin

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 25 August 2005 at 10:49am
Jus finish it at this score then w/e... that's a clear enough winnin margin, the crew battle is over, Stalin's left, so yea... lock this one up too
. . . Now who said they fuckin' with me?
They just said that FUCKIN' with me
They didn't mean it
Nah . . .
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