Crew Battles: Stalin vs ILLA (Text) |
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Scotty32
Site Owner Speaker of Wisdom & Truth Joined: 18 October 2003 Location: North West, UK Status: Offline Points: 10489 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 3-4-0 Form: WLLWLL |
Topic: Stalin vs ILLA (Text) Posted: 01 August 2005 at 10:57am |
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Blind drops through PM to Scotty PM lyrics and explanations of verse (<mandatory) you may not add explanations in the thread of the battle, so make sure you get them all in your PM Deadline: August 10 No-Show = loss for team (applies to both teams this time as both teams have a deadline) All else default Edited by Scotty_32 |
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Scotty32
Site Owner Speaker of Wisdom & Truth Joined: 18 October 2003 Location: North West, UK Status: Offline Points: 10489 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 3-4-0 Form: WLLWLL |
Posted: 11 August 2005 at 5:16am |
Stalin:
fuck ya groupies, hopin the voters listen to facts *Hangins second post Stalins msn is 'moneyoverbitches' he from illinois Yo U cant win.. It gon be LA dot com.. slash ya chin |
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Noxious
Superior Member Joined: 29 January 2004 Location: United Kingdom Status: Offline Points: 4167 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 63-59-3 Form: NWLWLW |
Posted: 11 August 2005 at 9:40am |
Stalin - Dope Flow, Good Multi's, they were Smooth... Personals were
Fire, Ripped the fuck outta him with them... some dope Meta's, Last bar
was Fire, hahaha... Good Shit i was feelin'...
Illa - Blah, Simple Flow... Boring Rhymes... dno what ya tried to do with the First bar, buh that aint a multi'... best line was probably the Illa-Noise line, that was good... rest was jus simple... last bar was aiight though... Overall - Stalin took this pretty easily... much nicer personals, nicer flow and better Rhymes... jus took it with nearly everything Vote/ Stalin |
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Point Blank
Superior Member Joined: 20 May 2005 Status: Offline Points: 7234 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 92-27-5 Form: WWNWWN |
Posted: 11 August 2005 at 10:50am |
Stalin : Nice Flow Throughout, Pretty Nice Multies, Sick Punches, Mad
Personals, My Favourite Line Was The Singing To Fatal Line Haha,Overall
That Was Some Tight Shit Homie,
Illa : Came Weaker Than I Expected, On The First Bar Your Multies Were Off,Flow Was Pretty Tight,Punches Were Ok, I Liked The Bumper Sticker One. All his 'Big Lines' are 'MISSING' like they Milk Cartons (get it) No I Dont Get It, Lol Tight Battle Stalin GMV ~1~ |
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ILLSTARRR
Veteran LA CHAMP aka Da General Joined: 18 October 2003 Location: P-Town... HBC Status: Offline Points: 3934 Crew: Renegades Text Rank: #2 Stats: 47-6-2 Form: WLWNLW |
Posted: 11 August 2005 at 10:58am |
If u dont get the wordplay i said dont vote.. Plus its pretty obvious u jockin' 1 team on here kid Edited by ILLA |
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TeQuiLaSunRiSe
Standard Member Joined: 25 August 2004 Location: United States Status: Offline Points: 1091 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 9-0-0 Form: WWWWWW |
Posted: 11 August 2005 at 11:20am |
seriously, dont start with the fucking jockin accusations...they old, and make you look like you can't take votes...
i got the wordplay, but mostly, it was just played.... so seriously, no more bitchin about votes. uppin |
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POP POPPITY WHAT, I Know Yall Aint Poppin At Us
Cuz One or Two Punches Will Leave You TALKIN LIKE SEAN CONNERY DOES |
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ILLSTARRR
Veteran LA CHAMP aka Da General Joined: 18 October 2003 Location: P-Town... HBC Status: Offline Points: 3934 Crew: Renegades Text Rank: #2 Stats: 47-6-2 Form: WLWNLW |
Posted: 11 August 2005 at 11:24am |
haha... ok
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Cuba
Senior Moderator Legendary Assassin Joined: 14 June 2004 Location: England Status: Offline Points: 12329 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 47-22-0 Form: WWWWLW |
Posted: 12 August 2005 at 6:55pm |
I don't see how Nox should be allowed 2 vote on this crew battle and especially on an Illa battle but fe fi fo fum...
conclusion...best battle ive seen in a while in these parts, is pretty hard coz i thought illa connected pretty solidly thruout the drop until maybe the last line which was kinda anticlimatic, but u cant hate on the wordplay thruout his drop at all, and to be honest thats usually an area that he shows mad inconsistancy with, but Illa noise was like BOOM, u cant fuck with it...stalin's verse was hot also but a cuple of things i didnt like about it was that he opened with the same punch which was pretty wack, jus span it out a different way and then had two singin punches straight after each other...i wudda jus went with the phatal one coz that was a hot punch while 2 me the otha 1 doesnt really stand up wen u re-read the verse jus coz i dont particularly give a shit wah tune a dude listens 2, but was funny the first time round and thats wah counts...time of the month was ok, duno, seemed to be pushin on the verges of "look i have a personal" but u shaded it, average punch...briggz punch, agen kinda weak of u 2 put that in coz thats jus the guy bein real wit u sayin 'i think briggs will lose'...and i wudda omitted the chincheck line coz the flow is slightly diff to the rest and looks like it was jus stuck in there...plus u gettin like Game the amount of fukin names u droppin, fukin hell man u need to chill out wit that...while illa had the punchlines constant from where i sittin, first line was filler like a motha fuka and anotha example of the abstract personal, but while stalins was kinda like "yeh its a personal punch but it the diss is kinda suspect" i wud say that yours was more "yeh thats a nice punch but the personal aspect of it is kinda suspect"...id go with the latter everytime tho, illa noise i mentioned, dopeness...the next line was filler, jab but fuck it i guess u both had those bars between the hot ones that were eitha dodgy or transistional...next two bars weren't anything great but were both solid punches and good use of similes...it doesnt hurt u as much to have punches like that tho with a shorter bar structure coz with stalins style it all kind of builds up to a big punch and if u left goin "hmmm, maybe" afta it then it leaves a worse impression of a verse as a whole instead of if u looked at it bar for bar...dove dude was pretty weak actually, was more of a jab...i think i didnt see that bar the first time i read this, but then i liked the set up bar with that one so it didnt hurt you that bad, kinda sloppy tho considerin ya finisher...i think u had all that otha shit and u were like "fuk it, ill jus throw these two down i cant be fucked", i done it b4 and yeh its easy to do but i think that ya middle section cudda done with a harder pucnh in the middle...the fence line kinda brought it bak tho and the lack of a killer finisher hurt u, i think if the finisher was shit hot then i wudda given the battle to you... but i duno...i aint really broke anything down like this in a while coz i cudnt be fucked wen i first read it and thought "verse for verse" i was thinkin illa coza the style and how the weaker of his punches didnt really stick out as much as Stalin's did, but then when u look at it bar for bar then u kind of go to thinkin "well actually Stalin had MORE and he used the multis" and all of that, i mean...its hard to judge wen shit is like that do u go with ya gut reaction and vote on the verse as a whole or do u break it down like an enzyme and say "well he was technically better" tough one but i think with stalins style u gotta make sure that you come precise as a mother fucker and while he had the better punches on the whole the ones that i questioned were really too many, like 4-6bars stuck out eitha intially or wen i looked at it bar for bar and thats just too many for me in an 8bar battle...illa, bar for bar dude was prolly better than u but then im nah really into this scientific battle dissection stuff no more so u edged it for me Vote - illa (try and find a better expo you text hoes) |
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ILLSTARRR
Veteran LA CHAMP aka Da General Joined: 18 October 2003 Location: P-Town... HBC Status: Offline Points: 3934 Crew: Renegades Text Rank: #2 Stats: 47-6-2 Form: WLWNLW |
Posted: 17 August 2005 at 6:24am |
Uppin' 2-1 Stalin
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I-kontinue
Veteran The Sovereign Joined: 14 July 2004 Status: Offline Points: 4961 Crew: The Dynasty Text Rank: #3 Stats: 46-9-0 Form: WWWWWL |
Posted: 22 August 2005 at 12:49am |
lol...i jus caught the part in IceC's explanation where he said "u gettin like Game the amount of names you droppin"...wow, i guess i dont even notice it...i use what i can to rip a fella, ya kno..lol
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-Orion-
Veteran Joined: 08 April 2004 Location: DisturbinLondon Status: Offline Points: 9598 Crew: Renegades Text Rank: #1 Stats: 90-4-1 Form: WWWWNW |
Posted: 22 August 2005 at 3:59am |
Game as in the rapper Game... not you... Game drops names alllllllllll the time on his tracks
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They just said that FUCKIN' with me They didn't mean it Nah . . . |
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I-kontinue
Veteran The Sovereign Joined: 14 July 2004 Status: Offline Points: 4961 Crew: The Dynasty Text Rank: #3 Stats: 46-9-0 Form: WWWWWL |
Posted: 22 August 2005 at 5:43pm |
oh, lol...fuck!
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20theTruth
Superior Member Joined: 10 August 2004 Location: United States Status: Offline Points: 2155 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 16-6-0 Form: WWWWWW |
Posted: 22 August 2005 at 10:15pm |
^ wow.
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no more
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King Jehu
Veteran Joined: 23 January 2004 Status: Offline Points: 6088 Crew: Renegades Text Rank: #4 Stats: 54-18-1 Form: WLWWWL |
Posted: 22 August 2005 at 10:52pm |
lol @ game thinkin he drops anybody, lol (sorry, I had to, )
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Insert something rappy here
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Stalin
Site Moderator Joined: 24 November 2003 Location: United States Status: Offline Points: 2587 Crew: Renegades Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 34-12-2 Form: LNWWLW |
Posted: 24 August 2005 at 12:16pm |
Uppin for more votes
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+Sick-Witted+
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I-kontinue
Veteran The Sovereign Joined: 14 July 2004 Status: Offline Points: 4961 Crew: The Dynasty Text Rank: #3 Stats: 46-9-0 Form: WWWWWL |
Posted: 24 August 2005 at 5:43pm |
jehu, quit wit the wordplay..lol...'dropin anybody' as in 'droppin any name' is what the statement was about
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BiggStankDogg
Veteran Joined: 22 May 2004 Location: United States Status: Offline Points: 1832 Crew: Renegades Text Rank: #7 Stats: 35-8-0 Form: LLWWWW |
Posted: 24 August 2005 at 7:14pm |
This shit shouldn't even matter anymore. Dude ain't even in our crew anymore...
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Fear the Bow of the Silent Archer |
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SiccSpitz
Groupie Joined: 03 July 2005 Status: Offline Points: 62 |
Posted: 24 August 2005 at 7:59pm |
Stalin From Illinois...???hmmm |
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ImGreat
Standard Member Joined: 25 May 2005 Location: United States Status: Offline Points: 388 Audio Rank: Unranked Stats: 1-0-0 Form: W |
Posted: 25 August 2005 at 7:38am |
stalin...ok his personals were good tha line bout his man ran wit his money fucked up tha boy is mine line like really ina way did it for me as far as illas image cuz it seemed as niggah was dis hardcore niggah dat dont listen to soft shit and staklin exposed him but down side his rhymes juz didnt seem like he wanted to battle and he brang back tha money line again unless dat was diff but seemed like he was talkin bout tha same shit illa...i dont know dis verse seemed like he didnt wanna show up mashonda line its like wut tah fuck you talkin about, illa noise shit seemed beyond forced dont know didnt seem like he wanted to be here aight 1 vote:stalin |
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-Orion-
Veteran Joined: 08 April 2004 Location: DisturbinLondon Status: Offline Points: 9598 Crew: Renegades Text Rank: #1 Stats: 90-4-1 Form: WWWWNW |
Posted: 25 August 2005 at 10:49am |
Jus finish it at this score then w/e... that's a clear enough winnin margin, the crew battle is over, Stalin's left, so yea... lock this one up too
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They just said that FUCKIN' with me They didn't mean it Nah . . . |
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