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Scotty32
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Topic: 2smooth vs Frank White (Text) Posted: 01 August 2005 at 11:05am |
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Blind drops through PM to Scotty
PM lyrics and explanations of verse (<mandatory)
you may not add explanations in the thread of the battle, so make sure you get them all in your PM
Deadline: August 10
No-Show = loss for team (applies to both teams this time as both teams have a deadline)
All else default
Edited by Scotty_32
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Scotty32
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Posted: 11 August 2005 at 5:12am |
2smooth:
exp.
Chronic Filth Crew was his old crew that died... rip/ R.I.P. - kill the track
peep the wordplay...
he wouldn't battle 20 'cuz he didn't have time to record... already KO'd him
in dice games, rolling snake eye's is rolling 2 1's... also peep the mobb deep wordplay "mobb deep song, shook one's"
Frank has over 50 losses... also, his real name is Lloyd, peep the Lloyd Banks play
FRANK... you couldn't R.I.P. a track, even if you had to KILL me on it this win? I've got it SACKED, I'll SMOKE YOU like a BAG of FILTHY CHRONIC!!!
I'm going to knock you out again, just to show they reward hotness shit, you ducked 20 'cuz you only got time to record losses!!!
I'm a RENEGADE so my Mobb's Deep, i suggest you dont look, son or I'll rip out this SNAKE'S EYES, and leave him with the rest of the SHOOK 1's!!!
He wanted to reach 50? in losses he surpassed it 'cuz when I put this Lloyd on fire all you'll see is the ashes.
BOOM.
RENEGADES.
Frank White:
your like the bowl cancer testers you be talking shite
dropped your best shit this month and you been dead from the site
if they running lyrical assault i dont no what the fuck the renagades saw in you
ive read yours and orions keystyle cypher you got murdered by your own crew
damm i read your rhymes ill call you humpty dumpty the way yove fell
i would of though you would of had more orignal ideas after time in your jail cell
damm man you cant punch so bring your ite to average flow
damm i no these personals are hard to hear but then sos your audio
keystyle people see you when i get back
explanations - he hasnt been active for ages he and orion did a
cypher on msn orions lines were much hotter he went to jail and well
the audio speeks 4 itself
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Noxious
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Posted: 11 August 2005 at 9:44am |
Vote/ 2smooth
Better rhymes, he used Multi's... better Meta's & Punches... Frank
had Personals buh they sucked... Frank was way too Simple...
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Point Blank
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Posted: 11 August 2005 at 11:04am |
2-Smooth, Nice Multies And Punches, Couple Of Nice Personals Too, I Was Feeling Your Verse
Frank White, Pretty Basic Shit, Flow Was Awful, Wasnt Feeling It At All
One-Sided Battle
2Smooth Killed It, He GMV
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BRIGGZY
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Posted: 11 August 2005 at 12:25pm |
not tryna sway shit or nuthin but Noxious man
do you have a Secret fetish for multis?
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Noxious
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Posted: 11 August 2005 at 6:35pm |
Yeah... i do... i think they help your rhymes & flow alot...
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2smooth
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Posted: 11 August 2005 at 10:31pm |
thanks for the votes y'all, 2-0 me
uPPiN^^^ 4 tha K.O.~
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Cuba
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Posted: 12 August 2005 at 7:06pm |
Frank, he left it wide open for u and u jus missed ya chance...u need to nail some rhythm man, its jus all flat i duno why the fuck it read like that it jus does, its kinda like a kid readin lines at a christmas play, it reads like that, no passion within the lines...u had some pretty witty stuff in there but it aint shit without the flow man, u gotta find it, u gah potential but u aint gona do shit without it
2smooth, i duno where the snake eyes line came from coz the rest of ya bars were utter wackness, ive used a similar concept but u merked the rest outa the shook ones line, i aint even gona deny it, crazy...but the R.I.P a track was awful, bag of filthy chronic was average at best...2nd bar i duno wtf u was thinkin "ducked 20 coz u only got time to record losses" << doesnt that mean that he wudda beat 20 if he showed up? how is that a diss? "u cudda won a battle", ................... maybe next time, reach 50 was decent wordplay but the lloyd 1 is pretty obvious and wasnt worded that well, lucky 4 u frank has no rhythm
Vote - 2smooth
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2smooth
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Posted: 12 August 2005 at 8:21pm |
like i had to try, vanilla ice...
KO 4 SMOOTH, RENEGADE'S UP 3-0, CLOSE THIS BITCH
thx for the votes y'all
-2s
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Scotty32
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Posted: 14 August 2005 at 3:49pm |
4th win for renegades
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