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    Posted: 01 August 2005 at 11:05am
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 11 August 2005 at 5:12am
2smooth:

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Chronic Filth Crew was his old crew that died... rip/ R.I.P. - kill the track
peep the wordplay...
he wouldn't battle 20 'cuz he didn't have time to record... already KO'd him
in dice games, rolling snake eye's is rolling 2  1's... also peep the mobb deep wordplay "mobb deep song, shook one's"
Frank has over 50 losses... also, his real name is Lloyd, peep the Lloyd Banks play

FRANK... you couldn't R.I.P. a track, even if you had to KILL me on it
this win? I've got it SACKED, I'll SMOKE YOU like a BAG of FILTHY CHRONIC!!!

I'm going to knock you out again, just to show they reward hotness
shit, you ducked 20 'cuz you only got time to record losses!!!

I'm a RENEGADE so my Mobb's Deep, i suggest you dont look, son
or I'll rip out this SNAKE'S EYES, and leave him with the rest of the SHOOK 1's!!!

He wanted to reach 50? in losses he surpassed it
'cuz when I put this Lloyd on fire all you'll see is the ashes.


BOOM.

RENEGADES.

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your like the bowl cancer testers you be talking shite
dropped your best shit this month and you been dead from the site
if they running lyrical assault i dont no what the fuck the renagades saw in you
ive read yours and orions keystyle cypher you got murdered by your own crew
damm i read your rhymes ill call you humpty dumpty the way yove fell
i would of though you would of had more orignal ideas after time in your jail cell
damm man you cant punch so bring your ite to average flow
damm i no these personals are hard to hear but then sos your audio

keystyle people see you when i get back

explanations - he hasnt been active for ages he and orion did a cypher on msn orions lines were much hotter he went to jail and well the audio speeks 4 itself

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 11 August 2005 at 9:44am
Vote/ 2smooth

Better rhymes, he used Multi's... better Meta's & Punches... Frank had Personals buh they sucked... Frank was way too Simple...


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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 11 August 2005 at 11:04am
2-Smooth, Nice Multies And Punches, Couple Of Nice Personals Too, I Was Feeling Your Verse

Frank White, Pretty Basic Shit, Flow Was Awful, Wasnt Feeling It At All

One-Sided Battle

2Smooth Killed It, He GMV
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 11 August 2005 at 12:25pm

not tryna sway shit or nuthin but Noxious man

 

do you have a Secret fetish for multis?

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 11 August 2005 at 6:35pm
Yeah... i do... i think they help your rhymes & flow alot...


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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 11 August 2005 at 10:31pm

thanks for the votes y'all, 2-0 me

uPPiN^^^ 4 tha K.O.~

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 12 August 2005 at 7:06pm

Frank, he left it wide open for u and u jus missed ya chance...u need to nail some rhythm man, its jus all flat i duno why the fuck it read like that it jus does, its kinda like a kid readin lines at a christmas play, it reads like that, no passion within the lines...u had some pretty witty stuff in there but it aint shit without the flow man, u gotta find it, u gah potential but u aint gona do shit without it

2smooth, i duno where the snake eyes line came from coz the rest of ya bars were utter wackness, ive used a similar concept but u merked the rest outa the shook ones line, i aint even gona deny it, crazy...but the R.I.P a track was awful, bag of filthy chronic was average at best...2nd bar i duno wtf u was thinkin "ducked 20 coz u only got time to record losses" << doesnt that mean that he wudda beat 20 if he showed up? how is that a diss? "u cudda won a battle", ................... maybe next time, reach 50 was decent wordplay but the lloyd 1 is pretty obvious and wasnt worded that well, lucky 4 u frank has no rhythm

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 12 August 2005 at 8:21pm

like i had to try, vanilla ice...

KO 4 SMOOTH, RENEGADE'S UP 3-0, CLOSE THIS BITCH

thx for the votes y'all

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 14 August 2005 at 3:49pm
4th win for renegades
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