Shadow Boxing: Round 1 - Group 1 - Voting

Verse One - It's kool, had me laughing in place's flow on the whole was good bit choppy here and there storyline was clever the opening was crazy and as the verse went on it got darker and darker i like'd that ..

Rated - 7/10

Verse Two - Very nice way of approching the subject could have bein pulled off really dope but i felt you lacked on the topic a little, no dout your flow was unreal it slotted together perfect but i just was'nt feeling the concept as much as the first verse ..

Rated - 6/10

Verse Three - Another way of approching the subject same as Verse one but cut diffrently, i liked the overall story of this good twist in the tail at the end but the one thing that let you down the whole way was your flow it was really horrid to read i kept having to go back and read it again, prolly could have taken this but the flow let you down ..

Rated - 5/10

Verse Four - Damn realllly good way of approching, but! overall i was not feeling this flow lacked big style in places which really threw it off which was also a big shame had some flashes of really good concepts and set up's but was constantly ruiend by the flow ..

Rated - 6/10

Damn i just Re-Read my Comment's Sorry for Sounding sooo Negative .. Im really Suprise'd that Flow was missing big time with most verse's, but Overall im going to go with Verse One and a Tie between Two and Four ..

So im'a Vote JUST Verse One ..

Here's how I saw it...

ALL YA'LL shoulda came better and at higher standards...there were good verses but none exceptional...I must say that all verses ENDED decent tho...witha lil twist at the end

Verse 1- I liked this storyline the most of all 4. It kept me interested as I read along. It wasn't THAT clever, but for a Topical, it was the closest to my standards of it...flowed ok...

Verse 2- I see this person put effort into his flow. The storyline wasn't that good though...kept goin on and off...and then jus' kinda picked up again at a random place...this wasnt really something I could "see" if ya get me...I like to "see" topicals as stories play out in my head

Verse 3- This verse took on the "see" factor which I liked...The only problem is the storyline wasnt as interesting as verse 1...it flows better tho...if this person had jus added more creativity and suspense to his verse, he woulda took it hands down

Verse 4- Competes with verse 3 for dopest closing...Honestly though, the flow was not that good...the person that can use multies and tell a story is the winner...you only told a story...lacked tha flow factor, and flow makes a verse alot more enjoyable. story lagged in some parts, (beginning especially) and then picked up (at the end)

Yeh, I guess I should vote for a verse now... The most important part of a Topical like this is to tell a story...and then comes the multies.Therefore, the verse that kept me most interested is the verse I will vote for...

Vote: Verse 1

Scotty, am I supposed to also cast another vote for verse 3 in the polls???? cuz i dont wanna fuc nething up and vote twice

ok

Results

1. 20theTruth = 3
   
2. Briggzy = 1
   
3. Nepenthes = 1
   
4. Frank White = 0

due to it being a tie for 2nd place, am going to let verse 2 thru
becose junior shade only voted for one verse, but gave verse 2 and 4 6/10

as verse 2 and 3 tied, i let it be between them two basiced on juniors vote which is verse 2

so Verse 1 and Verse 2 go thru to the next round