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Scotty32 
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Speaker of Wisdom & Truth Joined: 18 October 2003 Location: North West, UK Status: Offline Points: 10489 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 3-4-0 Form: WLLWLL |
 Topic: R1-B5) freestyleelite [vs] UnaBomberPosted: 20 June 2006 at 1:37pm |
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12lines min - 16lines max First to 5 or 3KO No Biting No Recycling No Dickryde Votes No Feeding/Flipping Crew Votes Allowed ALL Votes MUST be explained ALL Dodgy votes WILL get deleted! No Vote swaying Allowed Only Verses and Votes allowed, all else will be removed. No bitching, use the thread provided if you cant make the deadline see me BEFORE the deadline or you'll be treated as a no-show all verses must be in by: Tuesday 27th of June 2006 at 12:00 midnight GMT (thats UK Time, so dont try an claim "Time Difference" as an excuse) theres no "you spit first", all verses have the same deadline so dont wait for your opponent. Votes will last for 1 week from the date of the last verse entry *edit* changed the lines from 20-50lines to 12-16lines, also extended the deadline an extra day, now 27th june *edit* Edited by Scotty32 - 21 June 2006 at 5:12pm |
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Junior Shade
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Aka UnaBomber Joined: 07 June 2005 Location: UK Status: Offline Points: 5015 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 55-14-6 Form: LWWWLW |
Posted: 21 June 2006 at 1:57pm |
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.. Wreckage
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freestyleelite
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Joined: 06 June 2006 Location: United States Status: Offline Points: 18 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 1-0-0 Form: W |
Posted: 22 June 2006 at 2:51am |
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aight. ma verse will post up in minutes
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Junior Shade
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Aka UnaBomber Joined: 07 June 2005 Location: UK Status: Offline Points: 5015 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 55-14-6 Form: LWWWLW |
Posted: 23 June 2006 at 4:50pm |
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Ya sick? nah ya to played, ya sink an just soon fade
Cus J'll leave 'elite' missing, like the link to the crew page.. E.L.I.T.E ..You gays, are bound to be jocking my ill style
He's to easy kids.. Yeahhh.. Im just dropping this 'freestyle!' Step back, take a breath cus this son is ownage
Cheaa!, this 'styles' straight played like last summers clothing Bring hammers home'n you'se a weak squirt Kid'll have you 'lion on ya chest' like a Puma t-shirt..
Your wackness is real i'll let the heaters unfold'n
You aint seein' U.....na(h), like your mirrors been stolen
Hold on, i'll make you choke an then bleed son
Cus your only hard line is the coke in the freezer
Fall back kid an if you speak then i'll sink ya..
Free'll be out by round 2, like a weak beer drinker
I know fuck all about you, so it was slightly difficult..
Fuck it...
Junior Aka UnaBomber..
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freestyleelite
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Joined: 06 June 2006 Location: United States Status: Offline Points: 18 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 1-0-0 Form: W |
Posted: 27 June 2006 at 9:56pm |
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real emcee will speak, the heaps ready to fall,
cuz damn you weakand man you'll weep,
hands will beat rash emcee's, or those that creep
dont stand and seek static, no shock while i command you sleep
drippin heat, when im rippin sweet jams, but i dont seek fans, greet stans with kicks that flip the script they wrote with geek hands
call me 'dope man', cuz Im STILL iLL, C the styles bring 'traffic' and tactics scatter rappers, abra ca dabra, magic I 'have it', the mad spit and something called 'star quality' wack mc's, like U, try to 'lock it down' I just make their 'bars fall n bleed' theyre subpar, call it weak, ain't 'sicker' no flicker of 'pathology' confrontation's no consolation, welcome to Intimidation Colony Legends 'Erase' competition when compositions flow pristine 'executions' grow so mean, when 'assassins' hit, foes 'get cleaned' Its about time u grab ur feeder, my spit is hot as if its coming stright out of a heater! Uz messin with the Monarch! the leader! wht d'ya have to say? EVERYONE grab some liquor, and pur it on the pavement cuz its RESTIN DAY i
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2smooth
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Joined: 25 October 2004 Status: Offline Points: 1930 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 36-5-2 Form: WWWWNW |
Posted: 28 June 2006 at 3:37am |
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wordplay, flow, delivery and punches all go to junior... freestyleelite, you had good ideas, but horrible structure and flow, and no direct punches or personals... not that either had much to work with on the personal level... but anywho, pretty much 1 sided vote: Jr. shade
-2s
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Demonic
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X Fade II Joined: 06 August 2004 Location: Cardiff Status: Offline Points: 3463 Crew: XFade: Phoenix Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 2-4-0 Form: LLWLLW |
Posted: 28 June 2006 at 5:38am |
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Junior had a more direct verse, Used harder punches and better worplay to kill this battle off...He had a decent flow an sturcture also...which cant have been said to free... Free, Weldone for showing
 ...You seem a little new to this...But anyway...Had some good ideas in there just didnt work them well enough, Your flow wasnt very good...and you didnt come direct enough...Vote JUnior |
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I-kontinue
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The Sovereign Joined: 14 July 2004 Status: Offline Points: 4961 Crew: The Dynasty Text Rank: #3 Stats: 46-9-0 Form: WWWWWL |
Posted: 28 June 2006 at 3:19pm |
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Una killed this wit' the wordplay punches...an all around better verse ...
FSE....flow was kinda off on the verse, and try to make ya punches more direct too bruh... keep practicin v/Una |
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Scotty32
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Speaker of Wisdom & Truth Joined: 18 October 2003 Location: North West, UK Status: Offline Points: 10489 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 3-4-0 Form: WLLWLL |
Posted: 29 June 2006 at 2:49pm |
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juniors thru
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