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    Posted: 20 June 2006 at 1:38pm

12lines min - 16lines max
First to 5 or 3KO
No Biting
No Recycling
No Dickryde Votes
No Feeding/Flipping
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ALL Votes MUST be explained
ALL Dodgy votes WILL get deleted!
No Vote swaying Allowed
Only Verses and Votes allowed, all else will be removed.
No bitching, use the thread provided

if you cant make the deadline see me BEFORE the deadline or you'll be treated as a no-show

all verses must be in by: Tuesday 27th of June 2006 at 12:00 midnight GMT
(thats UK Time, so dont try an claim "Time Difference" as an excuse)

theres no "you spit first", all verses have the same deadline so dont wait for your opponent.

Votes will last for 1 week from the date of the last verse entry

*edit* changed the lines from 20-50lines to 12-16lines, also extended the deadline an extra day, now 27th june *edit*

Edited by Scotty32 - 21 June 2006 at 5:15pm
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 23 June 2006 at 6:05pm
only 7 bars  cuz I aint gonna be around tomorrow
 
goodluck
 
dissin this guy rippin him right, have him run from insanity
I can punch u for bein a jew, but its already been done to ya family
yall missin one from the cavalry after I verbally flip and hurt this bitch
frank white aint tight, dude can only kick balls and WORK FOR KIDS!!
u below me, not my level, so Ill let u and ya crew plot together
u cant beat me, u been here 2 years and have never gotten better
I gotta rip the mic, spit it true, least favorite to get the title is u
I might spit spiteful but true, helen keller could flow nicer than dude
flow wit this ferocious style u wont find worse than me, I hurt many
Get Scotty to add a Hall Of Shame, Guess who'll be the first entry
wit ya style so basic I admit ur darin to rhyme, im declarin ya blind
only u cant see ya losses are more than the age of ya parents combined
now we got two crew heads adjoinin, only tecs'll burn me
Why the fuck did scotty let u in?, YOU'VE LOST IN EVERY TOURNY!!!
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 28 June 2006 at 5:31am
eh, frank whites verse since he sent it via pm:

dude i honestly forgot that you excist
but im gonna get rid of s like someone with a lisp
man fuck you and your soon to be wife
rip the mic ? youve never spat in your life
the jew punches they played they aint cool
this dude says hese a gangbanger but he still at school
this dude really should not have annoyed lloyd
you talk about my job, at least i can get employed
come back to rap what the crack brin no wealth
assains ? thats ironic stalin was assinated himself
like the punchline on the parents yet heres the biz
dog at least frank knoes who his father is
shit man its cool can cope with the insults fine
but the only way your be on a cd is bigged up on mine
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 28 June 2006 at 3:12pm
Ha, Stalin came harsh in this one yo...flow was on point, and had some real funny lines in this. Had a better flowin' verse than Frank did

Frank came wit' some really slick punches in this one... Stated shit I know are personals...coulda worded them better to make 'em land harder though bruh... flow was workable, but not great...


...Both MC's killed it wit' the personals in this one... Ima have to give it to Stalin for a better flowin' and more humurous verse
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 30 June 2006 at 4:45am
uppin for votes
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 30 June 2006 at 2:47pm
both yall had good pucnhes, i have to break it down in cats tho it was close...
 
PERSONALS - TIE
punches - frank white  (had harder punches, and a few more...)
metaphors/similies - frank white
wordplay - frank white
opener/closer - stalin (crazy last bar)
flow - frank white
structure - TIE
complexity - stalin
creativity - stalin
 
OVERALL VOTE - FRANK WHITE
 
mad close. stalin u woulda won if all ur bars were as dope as ur closer. he just hit with harder punches. my cats explain it. it wasa DOPEE ass fuckin battletho, ur both studs. PEACE
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 30 June 2006 at 6:27pm
Like dude a few above said, both had mad personals, which made it a really equal battle punch wise. there werent any amazing hot punches, and both came consistent. Stalin had a much better flow, ive never really liked FW's, and Stalin had a much better humour/sarcasm to his verse. Vailiant effort from both, but Stalin takes this, not by much, but pretty much due to the humour and fluidity in his verse.
 
Stalin GMV.






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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 05 July 2006 at 12:09pm

stalin - lol @ the opener... flow was on point and the punch / play was funny, good punch... lol again at the 2nd bar, funny ass punch and good flow... rotfl @ 3rd bar, personal after personal... this one was dope and funny as well... flow was thrown a little here, but still aight... 4th bar - worded effectively, flow again wasn't up to your normal standard, but straightforward and effective diss, good, funny bar... wasn't feelin' the 5th bar... was cool, but just not that strong to me... 6th bar was heat tho... lmfao... ive used a similar play on frank but yours was worded to better effect... great punch and personal... closer was heat too, flow was back to on point and the personal / punch was effective... overall, good verse...

frank - very nice opener, flow was nice, good punch and play... nice bar... 2nd bar - i wasn't feelin' it... flow was apparent, which, congratulations on getting better with, but, rip the mic/ never spat in your life just doesn't really work for me... wasn't feelin' it really, sounded like filler... 3rd bar, seemed like you fed off of his verse, which is against the rules, but who knows... anywho, again, wasn't feelin' it, flow was fucked and the personal was weak... 4th bar, however, was funny as hell... lol... nice personal, flow was good again, nice punch... good bar... next bar made no sense to me... sorry... the 2nd line could have been nice, but the first ruined this bar completely... "come back to rap what the crack brin(g) no wealth"????? umm... that's either the worst set up i've ever seen or the worst set up i've ever seen... sorry... next bar (6th) was dope, funny bar and nice punch, way to pick it back up... closer was weak... why would he be bigged up on your cd? again, flow was fucked, and the punch just seemed completely off to me... alot of potential in this verse, but horrible wording and flow ruined it... a few very nice punches tho...

vote: stalin

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 05 July 2006 at 6:02pm
3-1 to stalin - uppin for more
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 05 July 2006 at 6:03pm
i been MAD busy lately, besides one battles still open.

round 2 will be up in a day or two, depends how busy i ma
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 05 July 2006 at 6:13pm

Stalin got this one due to a harder hittin verse. It flowed better n had tha more advanced drop. Stalins closer was killer. Frank had a decent verse but it wasnt better thanStalins. Vote: Stalin

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 06 July 2006 at 4:45pm
rules said one week for votes, so stalin wins by 4-1
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