Next Generation: R1-B7) frank white [vs] Stalin |
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Scotty32
Site Owner Speaker of Wisdom & Truth Joined: 18 October 2003 Location: North West, UK Status: Offline Points: 10489 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 3-4-0 Form: WLLWLL |
Topic: R1-B7) frank white [vs] Stalin Posted: 20 June 2006 at 1:38pm |
12lines min - 16lines max First to 5 or 3KO No Biting No Recycling No Dickryde Votes No Feeding/Flipping Crew Votes Allowed ALL Votes MUST be explained ALL Dodgy votes WILL get deleted! No Vote swaying Allowed Only Verses and Votes allowed, all else will be removed. No bitching, use the thread provided if you cant make the deadline see me BEFORE the deadline or you'll be treated as a no-show all verses must be in by: Tuesday 27th of June 2006 at 12:00 midnight GMT (thats UK Time, so dont try an claim "Time Difference" as an excuse) theres no "you spit first", all verses have the same deadline so dont wait for your opponent. Votes will last for 1 week from the date of the last verse entry *edit* changed the lines from 20-50lines to 12-16lines, also extended the deadline an extra day, now 27th june *edit* Edited by Scotty32 - 21 June 2006 at 5:15pm |
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Stalin
Site Moderator Joined: 24 November 2003 Location: United States Status: Offline Points: 2587 Crew: Renegades Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 34-12-2 Form: LNWWLW |
Posted: 23 June 2006 at 6:05pm |
only 7 bars cuz I aint gonna be around tomorrow
goodluck
dissin this guy rippin him right, have him run from insanity
I can punch u for bein a jew, but its already been done to ya family yall missin one from the cavalry after I verbally flip and hurt this bitch frank white aint tight, dude can only kick balls and WORK FOR KIDS!! u below me, not my level, so Ill let u and ya crew plot together u cant beat me, u been here 2 years and have never gotten better I gotta rip the mic, spit it true, least favorite to get the title is u I might spit spiteful but true, helen keller could flow nicer than dude flow wit this ferocious style u wont find worse than me, I hurt many Get Scotty to add a Hall Of Shame, Guess who'll be the first entry wit ya style so basic I admit ur darin to rhyme, im declarin ya blind only u cant see ya losses are more than the age of ya parents combined now we got two crew heads adjoinin, only tecs'll burn me Why the fuck did scotty let u in?, YOU'VE LOST IN EVERY TOURNY!!! |
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Scotty32
Site Owner Speaker of Wisdom & Truth Joined: 18 October 2003 Location: North West, UK Status: Offline Points: 10489 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 3-4-0 Form: WLLWLL |
Posted: 28 June 2006 at 5:31am |
eh, frank whites verse since he sent it via pm:
dude i honestly forgot that you excist but im gonna get rid of s like someone with a lisp man fuck you and your soon to be wife rip the mic ? youve never spat in your life the jew punches they played they aint cool this dude says hese a gangbanger but he still at school this dude really should not have annoyed lloyd you talk about my job, at least i can get employed come back to rap what the crack brin no wealth assains ? thats ironic stalin was assinated himself like the punchline on the parents yet heres the biz dog at least frank knoes who his father is shit man its cool can cope with the insults fine but the only way your be on a cd is bigged up on mine |
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I-kontinue
Veteran The Sovereign Joined: 14 July 2004 Status: Offline Points: 4961 Crew: The Dynasty Text Rank: #3 Stats: 46-9-0 Form: WWWWWL |
Posted: 28 June 2006 at 3:12pm |
Ha, Stalin came harsh in this one yo...flow was on point, and had some real funny lines in this. Had a better flowin' verse than Frank did
Frank came wit' some really slick punches in this one... Stated shit I know are personals...coulda worded them better to make 'em land harder though bruh... flow was workable, but not great... ...Both MC's killed it wit' the personals in this one... Ima have to give it to Stalin for a better flowin' and more humurous verse |
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Scotty32
Site Owner Speaker of Wisdom & Truth Joined: 18 October 2003 Location: North West, UK Status: Offline Points: 10489 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 3-4-0 Form: WLLWLL |
Posted: 30 June 2006 at 4:45am |
uppin for votes
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WillyWhyte
Standard Member Joined: 16 June 2006 Location: Canada Status: Offline Points: 172 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 0-5-0 Form: LLLLL |
Posted: 30 June 2006 at 2:47pm |
both yall had good pucnhes, i have to break it down in cats tho it was close...
PERSONALS - TIE
punches - frank white (had harder punches, and a few more...)
metaphors/similies - frank white
wordplay - frank white
opener/closer - stalin (crazy last bar)
flow - frank white
structure - TIE
complexity - stalin
creativity - stalin
OVERALL VOTE - FRANK WHITE
mad close. stalin u woulda won if all ur bars were as dope as ur closer. he just hit with harder punches. my cats explain it. it wasa DOPEE ass fuckin battletho, ur both studs. PEACE
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WILLY 'tha wiseman' WHYTE
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NepentheZ
Superior Member ... { 26 } ... Joined: 11 October 2004 Location: Yea..Cake. Man Status: Offline Points: 7727 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 40-32-1 Form: WWLWLW |
Posted: 30 June 2006 at 6:27pm |
Like dude a few above said, both had mad personals, which made it a really equal battle punch wise. there werent any amazing hot punches, and both came consistent. Stalin had a much better flow, ive never really liked FW's, and Stalin had a much better humour/sarcasm to his verse. Vailiant effort from both, but Stalin takes this, not by much, but pretty much due to the humour and fluidity in his verse.
Stalin GMV.
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I'm so fucking intelligent, half the time I don't even know what I'm saying... |
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2smooth
Standard Member Joined: 25 October 2004 Status: Offline Points: 1930 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 36-5-2 Form: WWWWNW |
Posted: 05 July 2006 at 12:09pm |
stalin - lol @ the opener... flow was on point and the punch / play was funny, good punch... lol again at the 2nd bar, funny ass punch and good flow... rotfl @ 3rd bar, personal after personal... this one was dope and funny as well... flow was thrown a little here, but still aight... 4th bar - worded effectively, flow again wasn't up to your normal standard, but straightforward and effective diss, good, funny bar... wasn't feelin' the 5th bar... was cool, but just not that strong to me... 6th bar was heat tho... lmfao... ive used a similar play on frank but yours was worded to better effect... great punch and personal... closer was heat too, flow was back to on point and the personal / punch was effective... overall, good verse... frank - very nice opener, flow was nice, good punch and play... nice bar... 2nd bar - i wasn't feelin' it... flow was apparent, which, congratulations on getting better with, but, rip the mic/ never spat in your life just doesn't really work for me... wasn't feelin' it really, sounded like filler... 3rd bar, seemed like you fed off of his verse, which is against the rules, but who knows... anywho, again, wasn't feelin' it, flow was fucked and the personal was weak... 4th bar, however, was funny as hell... lol... nice personal, flow was good again, nice punch... good bar... next bar made no sense to me... sorry... the 2nd line could have been nice, but the first ruined this bar completely... "come back to rap what the crack brin(g) no wealth"????? umm... that's either the worst set up i've ever seen or the worst set up i've ever seen... sorry... next bar (6th) was dope, funny bar and nice punch, way to pick it back up... closer was weak... why would he be bigged up on your cd? again, flow was fucked, and the punch just seemed completely off to me... alot of potential in this verse, but horrible wording and flow ruined it... a few very nice punches tho...
vote: stalin |
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Scotty32
Site Owner Speaker of Wisdom & Truth Joined: 18 October 2003 Location: North West, UK Status: Offline Points: 10489 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 3-4-0 Form: WLLWLL |
Posted: 05 July 2006 at 6:02pm |
3-1 to stalin - uppin for more
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Scotty32
Site Owner Speaker of Wisdom & Truth Joined: 18 October 2003 Location: North West, UK Status: Offline Points: 10489 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 3-4-0 Form: WLLWLL |
Posted: 05 July 2006 at 6:03pm |
i been MAD busy lately, besides one battles still open.
round 2 will be up in a day or two, depends how busy i ma |
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Fatal
Superior Member ...Wicked Wit Wordplay... Joined: 08 March 2005 Location: Chicago Status: Offline Points: 6441 Crew: The Dynasty Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 44-4-2 Form: WNNWWW |
Posted: 05 July 2006 at 6:13pm |
Stalin got this one due to a harder hittin verse. It flowed better n had tha more advanced drop. Stalins closer was killer. Frank had a decent verse but it wasnt better thanStalins. Vote: Stalin -1 |
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Scotty32
Site Owner Speaker of Wisdom & Truth Joined: 18 October 2003 Location: North West, UK Status: Offline Points: 10489 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 3-4-0 Form: WLLWLL |
Posted: 06 July 2006 at 4:45pm |
rules said one week for votes, so stalin wins by 4-1
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