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Form: WLLWLL 		Direct Link To This Post Topic: R2-B2) Dalinquent [vs] Demonic
    Posted: 06 July 2006 at 4:58pm
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if you cant make the deadline see me BEFORE the deadline or you'll be treated as a no-show

all verses must be in by: Thursday 13th of July 2006 at 12:00 midnight GMT
(thats UK Time, so dont try an claim "Time Difference" as an excuse)

theres no "you spit first", all verses have the same deadline so dont wait for your opponent.
if your opponent doesnt show, you STILL have to, otherwise you will be concidered as a no-show too.

DO NOT POST YOUR VERSE. PM your verse to me! or you can email it to webmaster@lyricalassault.co.uk

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Edited by Scotty32 - 06 July 2006 at 5:11pm
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Form: WLLWLL 		Direct Link To This Post Posted: 16 July 2006 at 4:55pm
Dalinquent:
Its ironic, even when demonic write his stupid ass wrong
You can be yao rapping, still in the game you wouldn't be-long
This loser ain't grown, so I'm about to leave him alone in a ditch
Make his look so bad his father will be disowning this bitch
He wanna prolong this shit but i wont let him imma wreck him quick
And expel the demon from this tourney like an exorcist
My flow sick, I will murder you with these verbs and nouns
I ain't proposing but this that shit that settle you down
yes you a clown, between us, its broad that you worst
and the only chance you got of winning is modding my verse
I'm a curse, i'm facing the weakest niggas to ever write a rap
Scotty should stop me, In this battle he ain't fighting back
The way he write is wack, u better than me, u just bizarre
You wouldn't be rawwer than me if ya death bed was a sushi bar
You be this hard, you more like a baby toy, you get rattle
How you expect to win this tourney when you lost ya ONLY FUCKING BATTLE
Demonic:

And ANOTHER no-show?!?...

Dalinquent ya at a frequent loss just look at the text stats ya rocking//*1
2nd round? u outa place like jr stayin at dynasty and not crew hoppin//*2
So shook that he this far in he aint been back online!//*3
Dude couldnt equal my talent if him an dollz were combine(d)//
Now ya established in the 2nd round dont be expressin ya feelings//*4
Coz by the amount of replies ya had the aint that appealing//*4
Even when ya telling true shit ya take up that hood typa roll//*5
But then wit ya english that bad wouldnt suprise me if ya hittin tha dole//*6
Dudes too confident fo' his own good from start to persent in his la days//*7
Just Look 1 of his first post was sayin Bsd was whack, dude musta been ina craze//*8
Coz a few days after that, He droped shit as whack as that//* 9
Anyway, Back to present, and on how ppl still grade you wack//*10


Expo's...

*1 = just peep his battle stats....
*2= Junior just jumped from dynasty to assassins...He's neva been in round 2 of a tourny
*3= Since he's gotten to round 2 he aint been online
*4=Peep this link and read the top few lines of what he said http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=8132&KW=Read+all+like+book
*5= Same link as above^... He keeps mentioning ganstaz an shit yet he's "telling the truth"
*6= Again same link... all ya gotta do is look how he types...
*7=Peep these threads...The Bsd thread he's calling him whack lol ..yet he's a pro...an the second link is goin at nep ... http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=2436&KW=  .... http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=8961&KW=
*8= Same as above..
*9= http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=2600&KW=    he dropped that verse after just 2days from callin Bsd wack ..Lmao
*10= in one of his more recent battles he got noshowed against an peep the responce of Hangin haha... http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=8137&KW=
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Form: LWWWLW 		Direct Link To This Post Posted: 17 July 2006 at 11:40am
Originally posted by Scotty32 Scotty32 wrote:

u outa place like jr stayin at dynasty and not crew hoppin//*2
 
*2= Junior just jumped from dynasty to assassins
 
Running my name in your battle hey?..
 
 
You better sleep with a lepricorn an hope you get a 'bit of that luck', cus IF you get past Dal (haha) & meet me..
 
 
 
Your going down boy..
 
 
 
 
 
 
Ps. Wack battle pshhh..
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Form: WWWWNW 		Direct Link To This Post Posted: 17 July 2006 at 1:37pm

dal - opener was forced, flow was ok and play was basic... 2nd bar, i think you missed a word, cuz it came off sounding like you did... but the flow was nice... ok bar... 3rd bar was a good play and punch... 4th bar was weak, flow was cool but i wasn't feelin' it... 5th bar was forced, "broad that you worst" was put there just to make the punch flow... good idea tho... 6th bar, flow was good again but punch was weak/ indirect... 7th bar was ok... good idea/ play... closer, again was a good idea, couldve been worded more effectively but still worked... not a bad verse, but not good either...

dem - lol @ the opener... sorry junior, but it was actually a good play the way he used it... good opener... ehh... 2nd bar wasn't good... you shoulda said someone with talent other than dollaz... wasn't feelin' it... lol @ 3rd bar... was funny, good punch... 4th bar was personal... but the punch was kinda weak... flow was good tho... 5th bar was a decent personal, but stretched lines fucked ya flow and the punch was indirect as they come... closer was funny, flow was ok, the double "wack" was, well, "wack" (yessss... i did it twice too!), but was a decent closer... overall, not horrible, better than i expected...

dal had better flow and wordplays... demonic had better personals... both had mostly weak punches... demonic didnt even post the minimum... daliquent missed the deadline... this is a weak battle...

vote: demonic for throwing personals the whole time... and for being on time... i guess...
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Form: LLWWWL 		Direct Link To This Post Posted: 18 July 2006 at 1:51pm
Dalinquent - I wasnt really feeling ya whole verse...the opener was weak and hd some filler in your flow...flow was good though and multis were decent..some good punches throw but didnt hit as hard as you probabaly wanted...
 
Demonic - nice shit you posted..opener was really good got me interested in your verse...you had personals the whole flow and it really killed...your punches were good and you just came harder...
 
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Form: LLWLLW 		Direct Link To This Post Posted: 19 July 2006 at 5:47am
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Form: WLLWLL 		Direct Link To This Post Posted: 22 July 2006 at 12:13pm
uppin for votes....
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Form: LWWLLL 		Direct Link To This Post Posted: 22 July 2006 at 12:22pm
Dalinquent- Wasn't really feeling your verse tbh, the punches were too vague and there weren't many personals, with the exception of this line...
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He wanna prolong this shit but i wont let him imma wreck him quick
And expel the demon from this tourney like an exorcist'

LOL

Also the main problerm for me was that the lines before your main punches really did seem like filler, as if you were devoting all your efforts to the second line. While this means the second is good, youre really wasting 1/2 of your verse. Good drop though.


Demonic- Great opener, direct, flowed well. For the rest of your verse, I felt the flow was somewhat forced, but youd done your homework, the punches were there and they made me laugh. Some more multies would have helped.

Close battle really, but Demonic GMV.
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Form: WLLWLL 		Direct Link To This Post Posted: 22 July 2006 at 12:29pm
ko for demonic

wow 3 words i never thought would share a sentance
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