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NewBlood 
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 Topic: Mackie vs Freeda5thDawgPosted: 30 July 2006 at 10:07pm |
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.:Rules:. .:Text:. You Two Decide On Your Topic 5 Bars Min/10 Bars Max No Flips Versus Due One Week Of Check .:Audio:. 3 Minutes Max Tracks Due Two Weeks Of Check .:Final Notes:.
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I-kontinue
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Posted: 01 August 2006 at 3:28pm |
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You're getting bullied at school like those nerds got bullied at Columbine years back... Describe your thoughts, and what your actions are in narrative form.. The topic can be from any point of view you choose...1st person, 2nd person, or 3rd person...whichever on appeals to the battling lyricist the most. Edited by I-kontinue - 03 August 2006 at 6:56pm |
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Mackie
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Posted: 06 August 2006 at 9:12am |
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chekin in
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Freeda5thDawg
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Joined: 19 June 2006 Status: Offline Points: 1324 Crew: Lyricist Inc. Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 5-1-0 Form: WWWLWW |
Posted: 16 August 2006 at 4:44pm |
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sorry about the very long wait...no excuses...if it's still going down, checking in...
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I-kontinue
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Posted: 16 August 2006 at 4:47pm |
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The rules were drop within a week of both check ins, and you just did, so it's due a week from now. It's all good...
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Mackie
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Posted: 20 August 2006 at 10:43am |
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ermm im not sure if its in tha time limit but my verse will ne in friday.. cant do it any uva time.. will be in tho no doubt..
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Mackie
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Posted: 20 August 2006 at 1:25pm |
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this topic is played out... n seriously boring/un-original... how bout.. about a kid thats landed himself in jail due to bent cops fittin him up with drugs in order to take these drugs themselves for their profit... thoughts feeling about bein in jail + being wrongly convicted while the cops. who r spose to be catchin criminals have put him away, it being ironic etc, etc.. he cud also drop the soap but its ya own choice how ya play it...
wha u reckon? |
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I-kontinue
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Posted: 20 August 2006 at 6:01pm |
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Kinda played out? Where have you seen it done? What I reckon is it's too late to change topics now... especially if Freeda started writin' already.
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Mackie
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Posted: 20 August 2006 at 6:11pm |
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meh don bother me.. bullyin aint exactly mind blowin concept.. sall good tho..
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Freeda5thDawg
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Joined: 19 June 2006 Status: Offline Points: 1324 Crew: Lyricist Inc. Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 5-1-0 Form: WWWLWW |
Posted: 23 August 2006 at 3:55pm |
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is it still the bullyin?...i might drop sooner or later if so, cuz after the death of my grandmother shit's been hard to find time, if it's still that topic, tell me so...unless u really want the topic u came up wit mackie, i'm fine wit it as well...
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Mackie
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Posted: 26 August 2006 at 5:22am |
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naa im gud with bullying. imma drop 2 day.
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Freeda5thDawg
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Joined: 19 June 2006 Status: Offline Points: 1324 Crew: Lyricist Inc. Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 5-1-0 Form: WWWLWW |
Posted: 27 August 2006 at 12:09am |
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As my mind resigns from its sane through these physical beatings- -
I drift from my feelings to instincts to kill these mimical heathens- - Till our next meeting - I’m plotting their death - Wanting these fags done- - Rush to my home and roam in the room where I’m robbing my dad’s guns- - Sick of these pricks who think sticking a fist in my lips is humorous- - I’m doing this as soon as school begins - Shoot bullets into the ribs- - Who would see it coming? - A nerd with a gun? - Bursting ya lungs- - Wish you could reverse what you’ve done when you hurt me for fun?- - Now that you’ve learned it was dumb - It’s useless to beg for ya life- - Using this tech in my right - Defuses ya breath in the lights- - Hearing the prudent students panic now that their future’s ruined- - Damage groups-influenced by fame - Vanquish their youth in crudeness- - Chests blew so ruthless - Gruesome images I’ve imagined tonight- - Tomorrow - My magic will fly - Blasting every fag in my sight- - What about the gal that I like? - Fuck her - Let her gag on my pipe- - I’ll be grabbing the dike by the cunt while nutting gallons inside- - If I have to I’ll die - But I won’t leave here a virgin or chump- - Till this diversion is done - Every boy and girl will meet the dirt from the gun- - The worse is to come now that’s it’s morning - My target approaches- - Doesn’t know till he stopped when I showed him - But forgot to reload it- - ...oops... ---------------- had to do it quick cause of personal problems and cause this has already been due for a while...g'luck mackie... |
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Mackie
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Posted: 27 August 2006 at 8:34am |
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dope. sorry 4 not writing yesterday i had coursework n shizzle.. imma write now part of it anyway.. ill post late 2nite sum time
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Freeda5thDawg
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Posted: 27 August 2006 at 5:19pm |
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no prob...
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Mackie
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Posted: 08 September 2006 at 5:17pm |
 sorry for not gettin this done... u can count this as a no show if u guys want coz i taken the piss wit this verse n it still ain finished
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Freeda5thDawg
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Posted: 08 September 2006 at 11:17pm |
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NO!!!...i hate no show wins...
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Kay B
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Posted: 13 September 2006 at 8:24am |
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How can the leader of the crew no-show.....
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Fatal
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Posted: 14 September 2006 at 12:04pm |
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lmao
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Demonic
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Posted: 15 September 2006 at 11:20am |
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He's not...and he's left
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I-kontinue
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Posted: 20 September 2006 at 10:28pm |
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Ok, 1-0 The Dynasty... Closed.
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