Next Generation: R3-B1) I-Kontinue [vs] UnaBomber [Final] |
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frank white
Veteran First Audio Battle Winner Joined: 23 April 2004 Location: United Kingdom Status: Offline Points: 1556 Crew: XFade: Phoenix Text Rank: #13 Stats: 28-63-3 Form: LLNWWL |
Posted: 13 October 2006 at 5:21pm |
I will vote on this tomoz if thats ok with the battlers ?
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the punching machine
bad boy 4 life biggie smalls was the illest |
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Junior Shade
Superior Member Aka UnaBomber Joined: 07 June 2005 Location: UK Status: Offline Points: 5015 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 55-14-6 Form: LWWWLW |
Posted: 13 October 2006 at 5:22pm |
Im happy for you to drop the final vote... Ikon?..
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Junior Shade
Superior Member Aka UnaBomber Joined: 07 June 2005 Location: UK Status: Offline Points: 5015 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 55-14-6 Form: LWWWLW |
Posted: 13 October 2006 at 5:22pm |
Ps. make it'a dope brake down..
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Mackie
Standard Member Joined: 20 August 2005 Location: MK Status: Offline Points: 1504 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 45-38-4 Form: LLWLNW |
Posted: 14 October 2006 at 10:16am |
game
Yeah, Ya moved to Romania just to get with ya hoe, so This PUSSY is pussy whipped… like a lesbian homo lol, nice idea the setup is weak compared to the second line tho.. liked how ya paused after hoe, then said so, think that although simple wud sound dope in a audio,
A threat ‘n you’ll no show, yet you swear ya bad ‘n ya big The fact of it is… I ONLY TALKED TO YOU FOR AVYS AND SIGS (thanks!) good punch, landed well, flow was dope, liked the bad n big wordin to Damaged ya wit’ punches, ain’t lettin’ that shit slide You won't vote against ya crew? What more proof that ya dick ride? didnt like this bar the wordin of the dick ride bit was off, You bitch. Why? ‘Cus of the fact I gotchu duckin' ma calls I’ll just assume ya peN is dry ‘cus Nep is suckin’ ya balls good play, n multi, wasnt a hard hitter but was good, Ya frontin’, c’mon… All ya claims don’t fill in the gap Why ya register L.A. if you don’t listen to rap?! (‘fuck outta here) wordin in second line was off, matbe you jus missed the to i dunno, didnt like the claims dont fill in the gap, jus a litle meaninless or a stretched concept This bitch can’t relax: We all know you hide your age And there’s nooo explanation dogg… Besides you’re gay! i thought this bar was abit weak, hidin ya age don make u gay.. youve worded it to sound like a better punch than it is IMO, Ya rhymes are plays… and indeed ya lines are played Dude’s gotta explain EVERYTHING he’s tryna say (‘cuz it’s forced…) not bad flows on point, nice rhymin, Ya types are straight av’rage…There’s no cue to ya junk Fuck ya music preference, dudes already knew you were Punk* (oooooooweeee) think u ment 2 say clue insted a cue.. if ya didnt this bar went ova my hed, liked the wordin n the multi flowed it well, nice punch n personal Threw to the dump… given up a feast to the crows And ya “cleanin ‘shit’ up?”?… think… You forgettin’ ya flow! (iiiit's shitty) i didnt like this coz its like you relyin on the comment afterwards. sorta takes away from the lin IMO Yes ‘n ya know… Ya left, and I’ll admit I was mad But if that’s all you’ve gotten on me then that SHIT IS JUST SAD! yes n ya know part sounds a lil gay, flows everything well, jus think u cud of used somethin more aggressive or productive Flippin’ ya lands!… It’s almost like I taught you ya lines …EVEN YOU ADMITTED THAT YOUR STYLE WAS TRACED OFF OF MINE! good solid punch, flowed nice Aimin’ ya eyes at him… YOU’LL be seein’ the fake: When Nep recruited, even SMOOTH thought you were bein’ a snake... (True Story...) nice personal hit, flows on point, Ya easy as cake the way all my punches landing on ya, and… This ain’t the first time we seen "Game drop a Bomber, man" didnt flow as well as the rest of your verse so far, obvious play to, still nice Plus… Ya can’t defend the way I hurt ya’ll dudes ...Bomb ain’t "dropped no serious damage" since in World War Two nice punch, hit, It’s Ikon verse who? How is it sooo suspenseful? Battled ‘GAINST a NOVICE rank, and got a vote AGAINST you! (Pro?!) good punch again, rhymin was niice, didnt like the comment thing again tho Hence… you ain’t a rival. Tec’s (text) spray like a gun? I-kontinue to call you "Junior"...Why? Ya still gettin’ "sonned" lol, favourite line so far, junior - sonned is played but that was dope anywho.. Layed in the dump with text… no resolute to pull… You're second J wit' "forced plays", and always "shoot for Bull" dope line, hit well overall i think ya verse was dope but theyre wernt some of that really clever shit like you dropped in that battle with M.I , n that was time ago, i expected to be blown away by ya verse but think although you got punches in perfect flow all the way through, its just missing sumin, this a dope verse, but you missin the wow factor, i think its cause in battles recently you been takin on cats far below ya level, n you can jus list personals n put in a set up n win, thats what i see in this verse, its all straight but not like 'shit howd he think of that'.. on the good side of things tho the flow was perfect, all ya punches hit sometimes not that hard but they hit, ya rhymin was dope, n its definetly a hard verse to battle against... una ..Im the diffrence between us, a Master with each phrase
Plus i stay hot 'weather' or not you asked for a heatwave (whether) wheter play is playd, still nice bar tho rhymed well wit the multi Let me rephrase.. Fuck Game, i'll get rid of ya crew 'An engrave "Junior" across ya face as my 'signature move'... again nice lines no real punch but yu jus flexin ya plays.. flowd dope, really liked the rephrase bit, cause yu play wit phrases, sorta connected in my hed dunno if u ment that tho.
Summin' smell's bad!, i'll kick your team & there odor
Cus' the 'Game's finished' now like the "Cricket season is over!"..
first punch, hit, lol at goin for a sorta u smell punch, was nice, these three bars seem like you jus fukkin about tho, takes away from ya lines a lil, Why'd i join The Dynasty?, sympathy for you! Ya clique's dope? your sick? both simply are not true alrite, liked the sorta question n answer thing, the both simply are not true rhymed well jus didnt sound good, Your wimpy, so's ya crew, there chump's your'a faggot I'll eat this 'shrimp' in more ways than "Bubba Gump could imagine" read this bar three times, it almost flows i think you should have rhymed faggot in a line before it and had the gump shrimp line as a stand on its own line rather than have two non rhyming lines, play is good though, nice concept definetly, Ya shit'll get battered, text ripped up an scattered Kon couldn't 'hang with me in the ring' if we kicked it on Saturn! flows good, play is good, nice hitter, simple n effective, still not personal tho It wont happen cus' your talent's hardly elite bro Una's got Game 'dread-in'a loss' like "Bob Marley in kemo" lol, play was dope, good punch, flow was on point. Darn'it your weak flow ain't nice it's missin' G
He could be'a 'virgin birth' an' still not have'a "tight delivery"
sick play again, not agressive, humourous tho, n clever Kon love's my swagger, he'll be feelin' this fist too
It's like Game's 'saving magazine's' he's got "serious issues!" dope line, deliverd nice Straight k-o this gimmick, who's text we don't mention
Cus' when you write im 'pushing bored' like'a legless veteran
nice rhymin n play, liked the gimmic-con/kon connection Fuck The Dynasty G.. You can't manage'a DOPE team Plus, Battling J's a 'hell of'a gamble' like'a "satanic slot machine" flows nice again nice play Drop your fake personals, it's fact they aint landing
Game ain't sick.. That's why he drafted in hanGing alrite, kinda filla.. Kid your no vet, infact your lame with the text I'll just open ya throat like'a window your'a "pane" in the neck (Pain) lol, at refrence to hanging in last bar n the play in this is one haning used in the crew battle.. no relevence or anything jus thought its wierd how that happended.. alrite play, wordin was wierd Game'll get wrecked cus' his dissing is lame Never thought much of you, like i was "missing my brain" lol... good bar, simple.. one of thoe i cud of thought of that but wudnt lines
I'll eat up an' maim him with the neat'est of flames Kid's think im 'Miami's coach driver'.. I bring "Heat to the Game" nice play, think u need to switch it up abit tho, in the play to punch/persie ratio Assassin's are dope, peeps hate it cus im notably sick Kon the 'writings on the wall' for you like your Dynasty sig (Crew Page) sorta likd it, didnt hit to hard good concept tho Shit your weak an' what you speak & preach is past it
Junior's 'out the reach of kid's' like "bleach an' tablets".. [Sup Kon?]
rymins off a lil for me, My whole clique is dope, we drop sublime theme's
While your's is "clueless" like 'Rookie Cop's at crime scene's' You've never been fire well Una's bar's are hell
Kon couldn't be 'Inn-credible' as'a "five'star hotel".. ;) Junior's praised, he get's props, but Game? his best flop's
Tracks would'nt "make'a kick underground" with'a basement sweatshop I'll detach your limbs.. Leave your back in split's Toss your arm's in the river..... Catch the drift?! I'll smash your shit, leave you fucked up on crutches It's fact brah "I pack more name's then you pack punches" You can't jack, touch this cus' Game force's an' more
His flow's 'dead on arrival' like "corpses in morgues!" I'll make you forfeit of course, Junior's short fuzed
No-one's 'hearing you Kon' except the "court room" (Con)
I'll thwart you, Game'll get left in blood & bone's
When my stunning flow's "air Kon" like summer home's.. (Con)
for above reasons im voting una.. u can discount this if ya really waitin for frank i ain bothered |
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Junior Shade
Superior Member Aka UnaBomber Joined: 07 June 2005 Location: UK Status: Offline Points: 5015 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 55-14-6 Form: LWWWLW |
Posted: 14 October 2006 at 2:47pm |
Wow... You came down hella hard on us both there... I or Ikon can't stop you voting & i don't see you as'a herb so, if Scotty's happy with all the votes...
5-4 me... ..
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Mackie
Standard Member Joined: 20 August 2005 Location: MK Status: Offline Points: 1504 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 45-38-4 Form: LLWLNW |
Posted: 14 October 2006 at 2:50pm |
i skool both u bitchaaaas
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I-kontinue
Veteran The Sovereign Joined: 14 July 2004 Status: Offline Points: 4961 Crew: The Dynasty Text Rank: #3 Stats: 46-9-0 Form: WWWWWL |
Posted: 16 October 2006 at 4:09am |
Riight^
Anyway... I just got back home from a week end trip and wanted to see if this had gotten anywhere... appearantly it did... and not in my favor... one of those battles that heavily depends on who drops their vote first... I'm not exactly sure what Frank is a fan of, but it would have been interesting to see where he would have gone with this...
Yeah, this verse wasnt as polished as I usually do... The verses were due a long time before I sent in ma verse, and I thought this was all waitin' on meeeee, so I sent in what I had at the time... I usually read it a couple times through first, but really didnt this time and just sent in what I had... Then I realized Una hadnt even finished yet either... Ha... Ya won't be so lucky next time son... ...Every one loses as a wake up call... Many instances of that... Mark this one down in the archives though Scotty... it's history. |
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Junior Shade
Superior Member Aka UnaBomber Joined: 07 June 2005 Location: UK Status: Offline Points: 5015 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 55-14-6 Form: LWWWLW |
Posted: 16 October 2006 at 4:40pm |
You heard the boy..
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