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BN.Bedlam
Banned Joined: 29 March 2017 Location: Parts Unknown Status: Offline Points: 22 |
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Posted: 29 March 2017 at 4:24pm |
the bass in the beat was pretty saturated so I couldnt do much in the mix to make it sound great
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Lord Puente
Newbie Final Boss Joined: 05 July 2016 Location: Florida Status: Offline Points: 1814 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 4-2-0 Form: LWWWLW |
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You had some nice lines in there man, I like the bite your tongue or they'll check your dental, and I liked the face the deck word play. For the most part I enjoyed the flow. When you did a heavy rhyme scheme tho there flow got a little jumbled but over all this was a nice showing for your first audio. Welcome to LA, you def have the basics and a good voice for audio. With a little work you can be great. At different parts it reminded me slightly of action Bronson, and on a couple parts with the heavier rhymeschemes minus the flow getting slightly tripped up made me think of big pun.
Overall nice job, keep spitting. |
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BN.Bedlam
Banned Joined: 29 March 2017 Location: Parts Unknown Status: Offline Points: 22 |
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Thanks for the feed my dude
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D.Von Doom
Standard Member Joined: 18 June 2014 Status: Offline Points: 1534 Audio Rank: #1 Stats: 15-4-0 Form: WWWWWL |
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I'm feeling this. Your flow is MF doom like how its kinda off but still works. The bars were well written the cards/deck bar was my favorite. Like you said quailty could've been better but it doesn't take away from how nice you are. Stay active bro good work
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BN.Bedlam
Banned Joined: 29 March 2017 Location: Parts Unknown Status: Offline Points: 22 |
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@Doom, thats whats up bro, im glad you enjoyed it
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Bakardi
Groupie Joined: 13 July 2016 Status: Offline Points: 307 Audio Rank: Unranked Stats: 0-4-0 Form: LLLL |
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this shit sucks
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