Audio Mic: Gold Links

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    Posted: 29 March 2017 at 4:24pm
the bass in the beat was pretty saturated so I couldnt do much in the mix to make it sound great

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Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote Lord Puente Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 29 March 2017 at 4:42pm
You had some nice lines in there man, I like the bite your tongue or they'll check your dental, and I liked the face the deck word play. For the most part I enjoyed the flow. When you did a heavy rhyme scheme tho there flow got a little jumbled but over all this was a nice showing for your first audio. Welcome to LA, you def have the basics and a good voice for audio. With a little work you can be great. At different parts it reminded me slightly of action Bronson, and on a couple parts with the heavier rhymeschemes minus the flow getting slightly tripped up made me think of big pun.

Overall nice job, keep spitting.
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Thanks for the feed my dude
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I'm feeling this. Your flow is MF doom like how its kinda off but still works. The bars were well written the cards/deck bar was my favorite. Like you said quailty could've been better but it doesn't take away from how nice you are. Stay active bro good work
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@Doom, thats whats up bro, im glad you enjoyed it
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this shit sucks
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