Audio Mic: Good Luck - EP II AK the Genesis

https://soundcloud.com/ashleykaos/good-luck

I figure I may as well do this one last time. The first thing AK. A lot of audio heads don't really feed your drops because you don't return the favor and feed other audio drops. As far as the track goes it's never been the question of content for you. It was always how you delivered it. The flow hasn't improved to much in this song than the last 5 or 6. However, it has gotten better since you've started. Maybe that's the greatest obstacle for you to overcome. You seem persistent enough to get it eventually though. Funny thing is I was the one who usually took the time to listen to your drops and figure the best way to feed them to actually try and help you. Not the fake attempts some other people may have given you or the empty promises some will make after your interview. The Ch3kk fool that always bitches always seemed to feed your drops and a lot of other audio heads drops consistently. I'm done with all that now tho. So overall aiigh track. Work on your flow is the last bit of advice I have to give. Now let's see how much feed you really get. -Deuces-

i appreciate the feed but mabye i dont drop feed because i dont want to just drop fucking empty fake feed because i am still learning myself. look at your chekk your fucking bitching right now. i already know what this is about and i figure your a part of it too sky lol your know what i am talking about. but whatever dude fuck this shit.

Check. Look at your sig. Look at your avy. Lol I could give a fuck how you feel about me to be honest and my music I could really care less. And if that's how you actually felt the whole time not like it matters then your fucking fake to playing all nice and shit and I don't fuck with two faced punk ass pussy bitches. Go back to sucking on your fucking pacifier bitch. And if you reply with a come back involving me and sucking a dick cuz I'm a girl , then it's just because your mad that I wouldn't touch yours with a ten foot pole. Have a wonderful day :)

Swear tuh gawd I am literally crackin the fuck up lmaooo. This niggah Check keep takin self inflicted L's. Got caught tryin tuh be slick. Good catch Ash lol.

Far as the song...ehhh. You just off the rythem too much. When that happens it just messes everything else up.

I also dug that Doom battle accapella much more. You seemed way more polished and in your element. You seemed comfortable and hungry.I think you turned alot of heads with that drop.

Like what Droid said, ya vocals overtook the beat. Just fix that and re-send if possible cause now i couldn't pay attention to your lyrics, i was just asking myself "is it that hard to flow on a simple beat?"... The dude with the chorus was flowing good except the rapper.
I know you a good rapper just fix the beat and ur vocals please, make em go together.

sorry if you felt what i was saying was hating...it really was meant in the spirit of help