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    Posted: 03 July 2008 at 9:54am

 

ayo/dont need no feed back/
i flow like diseased cats, please black/
i read back the shit that emcee's lack/
is orginality battle me u best on ur knees fat.../

...average joe battle flows make niccas lean back/
as quick as fat kids hit the scene where ice creams at/
so ill stay 730 till a 745/
pack wit a quarter to twelve, that means 11 45's/
i dont mean ur dumb, im jus more clever then u guys/
for those who dont get me im sorry for the wait/
old head say im phat, so im sorry for the weight/
and im sorry for the hate, so dont worry im in space/
stay fly till i die...so that holster's in ur waste?/
and u here to get me nicca, u sure are a disgrace/
my distaste for these rapper is gettin harder jus to take/
im ur father so dont bother if i spit water in ur face/
cuz its really oil homie heres the fire for the flame/
mack clip make u back flip while i fire at u lames/
cats is tired and ashame, they confused/
till they loose they mind spin like tires for a brain/
start screamin loud like they sing for choirs on train/
no trainin day jus aim and spray u die before the reighn/
and the rain falls hard dont matter where u at/
shatterin backs they clappin so we clappin em back/
claim they gangsta but these gangsta only kno how to act/
its an actual fact, if pun was still alive/
half these guys wouldnt b hip hop cuz they actually lack/
a matter a fact i tragically and drastically act/
on occasion stay blazin like the blunt was unwrapped/
i could keep goin, keep flowin, even though wat we do is wrong/
each song is a free way till im actually on/
timberlake style, keep spittin till yall actually gone/
yall cum quick yall think bitches nuttin is an actual yawn/
 
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i cant understand y the shit seperate like at the top...anyway...take it how u want it...im not talkin to anyone but if u think i am do somtin...
 
 
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uppin for feed back...i need help

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i take lame men, leave them on the island of caymen
spit fire like smacking stones like the time of the cavemen
i'm insane then,fuck progress yo, it's time to delay them
i'm the maniacal main man born of deranged men
leaving lackluster losers on their knees like the lay men
a false pretense, thinking you can be on the defense
so repent, fast, like the days in between lent
so leave then, retreat, exit spent like broke dudes
mess with me and learn lessons like the end of G.I. Joe tunes,
i hope you think hard about the time that you go through
the insults, rude thoughts, brought by a cult crew,
a menacing membership, mainly manned by maniacs
stronger than the hulk, and smarter than 10 brainiacs
a good thing gone band, a patient man gone mad
got it twisted like pull and peels and melted assault mags
with open palms and raise hands, put em up like your stuck up
the one sidedness of this bitch just got me all fucked up

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so wat else got me fuked up/
prolly like my head wen u see the feds run up/
or a shot of 151 poured up in a blunt cup/
drunk up, i could a give a fuk bout some corn balls/
i eat beef, but these fags'd rather lick on some corn dogs/
we on yall, collabo? more like a stab yo/
fuked up like old ladies fall and you laugh yo/
assholes got my whole ass jus mad yo/
we warriors that war wit yall kinda like m o...p/
we deep like the m o...bb u see me the king of this easy/
so please peep, my m o, demolish on sight/
not quite g unit, we jus admonish ur plight/
however u can die if ud honestly like/
and not to be obvious but u probably might/
not quite possibly but we disembowle u trife../
rap cats i blow ur ass back any hour at night/
and thats gangsta, yall take it like fagots/
try to flip it around and try to craft it/
make it in a way to try and cash in, the fact is/
none of yall fuked wit either one of us/
 
 
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No arrogance intended here...

But, consider inquiring with Bolo or Junior for help with ya' content.
I see you gotta' handle on flow, but ya' need to build some textual-direction with you rhymes...
Anyway, hit'n either uh'these Famz up for tech' support is worth the thought.
 
And, don't feel like you gotta' be renegade with ya' persona, here...
Everyone here (for the most part) is supportive with helping others elevate.
LA breeds some ill Emcees.
 
I came to LA 'cause the community support was appealing.
 
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And...  Croc-Jones...  this IS open mic...  drop yur own thread to get feed, otherwise
drop the feed Famz is looking for...
If it was a battle with rhyme you was intending with yur 2cents in this...
Call out for a battle.
Don't spam yur Ish.
 
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Edited by Madeye - 03 July 2008 at 5:04pm
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you dont really understand im not here to elevate...im here to have fun...i rap for real here in philly...and crocadalligator is my homie
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Aiight then...
as you were.
Don't be askin' for feed if you don't need the shit.
Either you want help, or you ain't in need of it - make you mind up.
 
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naw i was bein sarcasic not my fault u couldnt read it
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Yeah...  sure.
 
Ya' self-contradiction says it all, mayng.
We'z all in this for fun - needless to say.
 
Anyway...  take or leave the feed.
Thas' all.
 
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who really says i need help "mayng"
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uh oh...cuz lyrical assault is the end all be all of life...i forgot people like u need this to make u feel alive...so according to ur little record 3-8...who are u really?

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STFU, X...
before you went and changed your little comment at the bottom of your drop, it said you
was lookin' for help.

and yeah!
  you need it.

If not lyrically (in your own childish opinion)...  then you need an attitude adjustment.
...smartn' up! Kid.

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i never changed it...it said exactly wat it says now...like i said who goes around sayin i need help...like i said if u couldnt read the sarcasm its not my fault...and take it easy...y are u so sensitive...goodness...
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Right...

And I'm a Vet...  Make you titles say "Do Not Feed" if you don't want it.
Other than that, Shutty.
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dont get it fuked up fam...ur a vet in here...personally to me u really aint shit...so "shutty"

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Originally posted by Xperience Xperience wrote:

...personally to me u really aint shit

Well, then we have something in common...

... *dumbass*...
 that Vet remark was sarcasm...  lol...  now who's oblivious...

I'm callin' you out, son.
Come and show you self, Biaatch!  Censored
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that wasnt sarcasm...ur jus trash...sombody close this...

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No doubt. Biggest waste of a thread ever!
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