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    Posted: 13 September 2004 at 5:37pm
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 14 September 2004 at 8:14am

{I'm in a group with him and the leader of his crew, Renegades beat his crew, I forfeited in the last LA tourny, the 20th is the deadline for verses to be in, Dez Troy audio dissed him, he's from A-Town (and this is group A), his occupation is "part-time rapper/hustler), he claims he can't do audio because of equipment troubles; you should get all the wordplay...}

Yo, Yo

It's round one against this little bitch who can't rap yet
Your punctuation is poor kid so you'd best get outta my bracket
The louder the racket you make, the more times I'll have to ace ya
You don't know cuttin' edge, since you're not old enough for razors
I'll dine on your insides an' eat ya wack leader for breakfast
We took ya crew by the neck an' wrecked it like an asbestdos necklace
No forfeits this time, never will this ho's poor spits rip mine
You got wack rhymin' an' slack timin', ya shit so forced it drips brine
Ya name is prophetic 'cuz the 20th will reveal the truth
Ya got Dez-Troyed in an' audio an' ya text has been abused
Get the fuck outta A-Town, my spit tore ya repetoire
This dogg's watered-down, not even fit for the reservoir
Only thing you hustlin' is bullshit, you ain't a rapper of choice
Truth is ya equipment ain't broke kid, but then neither's ya voice
I'm takin' you out, no meals an' no makeovers
Straight smashed the pussy, now get out, date's over.

-1ne-

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They just said that FUCKIN' with me
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 14 September 2004 at 3:00pm
haha oh snapz ...ima drop tonight gone till da 24th ~1~
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 15 September 2004 at 1:55am

---sup O, nice verse but ima hafta lay it doooown hahaz..---

All good things gotta come to an end, plus u gotta BoyFriend, cuz u be screaming "OH RYAN!"// (O-rion)
Your 'morbid' flows leave me dying, you THINK you're numba one so even ya OWN conscious is lying//
Stop playin'...I KNOW YOU KNOW-ME, i'm like the X to da Z, cuz i got "Weapons of Mass Destruction"// (1)
leave ya ass 'bruised' from inflammation, my thoughts are filled wit corruption//
I'm like Jesus the way i 'bless the text', and last time i checked, i wuz still "The New and The Best"//
My punchez are 'frigid', da dick makin ya throat moist, playin tricks wicha voice, leave you "Blue in the chest"//
Itz str8 murdah in 16 bars, whoz gay? u are, and my punchez 'hit' harda den a lung full of SARS//
you 'dress-up' like Cinderella, smack u like Ike did fuccin' Tina, so hard i'll make you excrete piss in ya OWN draws//
I dont give two fucks you rated numba 'one' well 'truth' be told, im cold, when im tot'in da gun//
my shots ARENT warning ones, in da hood dey dont mean 'hello' but ATTENTION bitch RUN!//
I didnt know they made panty hose, with ass-flaps for easy access to 'assholes', but then again u Proved me wrong//
I didnt know you hada fetish for dicks, the idea alone iz sick, u associate wit 'spicks', AGAIN u proved me wrong//
You're like a genuis who had a 'lo-bo-to-my', cuz when u decided 'to-bat-tle-me', you mustve 'Lost Your Mind'//
Didnt you hear 20's a 1 of a kyne, a 'Godfather Buried Alive' like da BadBoy, Shyne?// (2)
You're a insane crack addict mixed widda gay faggat, your parents HAVE to be the Proudest//
but everytime the boys come and run-a-train you're 'known around da globe' for screaming loudest//

(1) "Weapons of Mass Destruction" - Xzibit, 2004
(2) "Godfather Buried Alive" - Shyne, 2004

 

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 15 September 2004 at 9:43am

Nice Battle 20 Really Tried To Bring It To Him And He Did Well...

Flow...Orion Had Much Nicer Flow...20th Flow Was There But Orion Was Better...

Punches...Both Brought The Punches Orion May Have Bein A Lil Harder But I Couldent Decide...

Multies...Orion Took Them...

Complexity...Orion Had Some Complex Words In There...20th Had A Complex(ish) Verse But Not Enuff...

Wordplay...20th Was Nice So Was Orion But I Think He Got It...

Personals...Both Had Some Nice Personals Dident See Many But What Was There Was Funni...


...Last Say...
Nice Battle First Ive Seen From 20th God Work Mayne Nearly Had It...Even Tho It Looks Like U Got Killed It Was Alot Closer...

Orion Got 3...20th Got 1...Drawed 2...

Vote...Orion...No Hate No DR...Straight Vote...



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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 15 September 2004 at 11:23am
0-1 Uppin'
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 15 September 2004 at 4:06pm

flow: orion
punches: orion
personals: draw
Multies: Orion
wordplay: 20
opener: orion
closer: orion
structure: orion

6-1-1 ORION

Orion: nice shit, the multis was nice, and went well wit da flow and punches...wordplay was iffy, but none was really needed, as your gnack for punches overcomes that.

20: nice verse, probably the best battle verse i have seen from you. only thing i can say negative is; keep ya lines shorter, work on multis (you had some, but they were weak), and you gotta get more creative with punches. but you had wordplay, i guess

 

vote: orion

 

thats if my vote even counts

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 15 September 2004 at 6:06pm
yaya thanks for da feed back i understand, just tryna make too complex
ideas and its harda to put em short ass linez...haha 2-0 uppin'
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 15 September 2004 at 6:14pm
i meant 2-0....still uppin' tho...and oh yeh hanging, orion, or any other
mod... iz there a k.o limit or first to five anytime?
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 15 September 2004 at 6:14pm
Fuckin A sorry...**edit** 0-2
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 16 September 2004 at 4:22am
Originally posted by Rules Rules wrote:

Votes in groups are best out of 5


so i 'assume' its first to 5
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 16 September 2004 at 6:31am
Best out of 5 means first to 3.
. . . Now who said they fuckin' with me?
They just said that FUCKIN' with me
They didn't mean it
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 16 September 2004 at 7:25am
but it doesnt say 3-OK  which is why i said i assume its first to 5

and i said "assume" since i aint connected to the tourny
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 16 September 2004 at 7:29am

Well unless people vote after it's already effectively over (which they won't, as people barely vote when it's needed let alone otherwise) it'll always end with the first to three, but yeah, you're right, it doesn't say three anywhere. The idea of best out of 5 is that it can end 3-2, 3-1, etc etc, so it's the equivalent of first to 3, 3-0 KO, but it was just quicker to write...

One more vote up in here already...

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 16 September 2004 at 2:23pm

Orion won this, he had some harsh lines...style was punchy (meant both ways) and effective, wordplay was witty and managed to hit in comparison with 20's that was sometimes overly complex and didnt result in a punch (i liked some of his concepts tho...jus gotta work them better)...Orion's flow was pretty much perfect as well whilst 20s was a little stretched at times...

So there u have it, Vote=Orion

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 16 September 2004 at 3:13pm
so 3-0 k.o [?] or whoever to 5 first?
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 16 September 2004 at 3:27pm
It's over. Two more people can vote if they want, but it's already finished so...yeah, no point.
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 16 September 2004 at 6:14pm
so whitewash[?] -- 3pts for u?
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 16 September 2004 at 6:46pm
thats it.


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3-0

3 points orion
1 point 20

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