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    Posted: 13 September 2004 at 5:35pm
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 14 September 2004 at 4:12pm

{He has recently made a lot of callouts, the German football team went out in the groups in the recent Euro Championships, german flag from bottom = yellow - red - black, flames are generally coloured the opposite to this, if I win it'll be 3-0 between us, his gf of two years was playin' him}

Yo...

My verse gets ya excited, but all that shot up was a blank
You callin' out so you can join ya crew at the bottom of the ranks
Rhymes are lackin', your flow is wack an' this cock is spiked
You could be Danny Williams an' still not rock the Mike
You gettin' knocked out in tha groups like the German attack was
An' ya punches fire backwards like their motherfuckin' flag does (THINK)
Like animal rights Hang'll be askin' this cat be spared hurt
Because man you only rip the spot when ya acne flares up
Speciously this beaten G slithers, left a dithered fool
This'll be three for me, provin' XX even strikes out with the dudes
Clout this fake herb, beaten beyond the hand of a surgeon
Face it, without the papers you'd still be banned an' a virgin (oooowee!)
Ya spit basic nothin' special, ain't sick, you jus' get hurled
Only thing more played than ya punches is ya wallet by ya ex-girl
Your wack ass lost for LA, then ya troubled rep fell
Now you hold no weight, whilst I'm orderin' double X Ls

...-1ne-...

. . . Now who said they fuckin' with me?
They just said that FUCKIN' with me
They didn't mean it
Nah . . .
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 15 September 2004 at 6:14am

aight...check me out!

The roof comes down as the walls close in around you,
Compressed constalations as the room slowly drownds you,
You boast excessive victories but gained from jockied votes,
Predictable orion yet again comes at me with copied notes,
Over-rated and under-skilled aparently our worst nightmare,
Self obsessed with renegades since he won his first fight there,
Three stars is all you'll be seeing when i pull out all the stops,
Im the only person who can be two down an still come out on tops,
This bitch thinks hes perfect in every way and has no flaws,
why did king jehu laugh at yo dick size when you pulled down yo draws?
like brother bear bitch you scratch with your claws an wields all fours,
But when i attack your wack crew from all sides you cant shield all doors,
Your material is becoming standard, orions losing the edge he was branded,
Shit your like a rotton timber what falls apart as its sanded..yea that landed,
You dissed me an i dont give a fuck..im on top now bitch pass the buck,
quick here come the two guys who kicked ass, better hide in here an duck.

out.

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 15 September 2004 at 9:31am

Ok Battle...

Flow...Orion Had Nicer Flow Fitted Well Together...XX Was Nice To Tho...

Punches...Orion I Liked The Gf Punch Alot...Dident See To Many Hard Punches From XX...

Multies...Nether Had Any Amazin Ones...Fuck Multies...

Complexity...XX Had Nice Start To The Verse And Some Kool Complexity...

Wordplay...Niver Had Dope Wordplay To Win It...

Personals...Orion Had Doper Personals Like I Said Before The Gf Line...

...Last Say...

Ok Battle Both Dident Come That Hard...But Nice From Both Props...

Orion Got 3...XX Got 1...Drawd 0...

Vote...Orion...No Hate No DR...Straight Vote...



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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 15 September 2004 at 9:52pm

aight..

1-0 orions way!

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 16 September 2004 at 2:13pm

Orion took this because he spat flames, XX had some nice punches in his verse but nothing that could take away from Orions (I like his Jehu punch tho, funny shit)

Yeh, Orion pretty much took this in every category, I cud write a bible vote but in the end thats why Orion beat XX, you'll get over it

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 16 September 2004 at 4:28pm

Orion had a nice verse, Did some good research lol, Rock mikes was ehhhhh to me, but the personals were tight,rip the spot, hahahahaha, not bad, your getting better at wordplay,flow was good as was the structure.....jus a solid verse really, nothign amazing as you know but pretty damaging, and your a bitch for that last line i had damn near the exact same thing in my head for the battle i was gonna have wit him, lol..bastid..

XX your getting better stylistically and it no longer looks like a pile of trash, you definatly got him on imagrey and its definatly a diff style to his which was refreshing,i didnt like the jehu punch personally, didnt see no real humor but not bad....flow is good rhyme scheme, cool, his was better..not as much punching power but good job

 

vote-orion not a shut out but he gets the vote

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 16 September 2004 at 4:35pm

ok...although i hate xx more than i do anybody else...ill vote fairly. i dont do hate votes...

I KNOW ITS 3-0 BUT I WANNA LEAVE A VOTE, JUST TO VOICE MY OPINION

flow: orion (xx never really had flow in any battles...except for the diss he dropped to me, that had good flow)

personals: orion (xx came weak here, ESPECIALLY with the dick size thing...that was hella gay)

punches: orion (the double x l's punch had me laughin my ass off)

wordplay: orion (rock the mike, rock the mic shit was nice)

opener: xx (i just like the first line, had good imagery of being caught against a wall)

closer: orion

thats

POP POPPITY WHAT, I Know Yall Aint Poppin At Us

Cuz One or Two Punches Will Leave You TALKIN LIKE SEAN CONNERY DOES

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 16 September 2004 at 4:35pm

sorry forgot to say

 

"thats 5-1 in the cats for orion"

 

vote: orion

POP POPPITY WHAT, I Know Yall Aint Poppin At Us

Cuz One or Two Punches Will Leave You TALKIN LIKE SEAN CONNERY DOES

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 16 September 2004 at 6:49pm
w-whitewash!

Orion - 3 points
XXXXXXXplosive - 1 point.


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