Raw Tactics: (Group C) Tec Vs Frank White

RULES

• No crew votes
• Votes in groups are best out of 5
• Votes must be explained SUFFICIENTLY with key battle criteria explained - tournament moderator will ensure all votes are explained
• To stop new members coming in to vote for their friends. To vote, you will have to apply (there will be a thread), and hanGing will say either yes or no. Most of the time it will be yes, but there are cases where people may try and cheat
• It is encouraged that all members apply to vote, including contestants and new members - if we've seen enough of you to trust you aren't a fraudulent account, you're welcome to vote
• Groups: max 8 bars
• There will be no first or second to drop. You can drop whenever you want, as long as it's before the deadline.
• No flips/feeding
• All verses will be checked for biting/recycling, so don't even try it - it's not worth it
• There will be a tourny discussion thread, but in addition to this "spam" won't be deleted from battles, so non-verse/vote posts are allowed, as long as they're relevant and non-hateful
• Scoring. 1 point for a loss , 2 for a win and 3 for a whitewash.
• No verse posted = -5 points.
• SPITS DUE BY MIDNIGHT (GMT) 20th September - GET WRITING PEOPLE
  

Lol Ur Opener Punch Has Be Used! I Think ILLA Used It...

Ur Jus A One Way Fool Lol Bitin Bitin Bitin Ur Gonna Get Merked LMAO...

Sup...Lol Sorry Man...I Noticed The "Played Punches" And Y Uve Lost 43 Lol...
...ANY MO' FO' WHO VOTES AGAINST ME FOR STRUCTURE OR MULTIES IS A WEAK DICKRYDIN FUCK...

...Lets Kick This Shit...

I'll Kill~This~Freak Drill~This~Geek leave his FUTURE lookin "Very Bleak" Frank aint iLL~He's~Weak I'll smash his Cheek 'N' leave his FACE~A BLOODY LEAK.../1
He's on~a HOT Streak if U make his Losses WIN'S! 'N' he's only got~a "Sting" in~his Step if he's Walking~On~Pin's, Frank's so FAT I dunno which one of his Chin's to be Hittin.../2
He's~a "400 Pounder" that still couldent MOVE~A~CROWD if he "Stage Dived", He was Deprived of Air~At~Birth cuz this bitch is so Ugly I shoved him back up 'N' asked for~a Re-Birth.../3
I'll Berrie him Alive in tha Earth so he can be Apart~Of~The~Underground I'll Pound him of the "Floor" so he's Bound to be Bouncing~Of~Tha~Walls.../4
This Joke~Falls Down Every "Gap" he leaves in his Lyrics 'N' if I "Shouted Down" his structure it would Echo back like Halls.../5
Franks ONLY got tha Balls~To~Battle~Me if he's Lickin Mine! NOW hows it "Feel" to be lookin down~a "Real Nine", Ur~a Joke 'N' ya rhymes are spongey like ive Stripped~Ya~Spine.../6

No Need For Any More...

One...........................

Tec wrote: Noticed The "Played Punches" And Y Uve Lost 43 Lol...

That's pretty out of order. The only real played punch there is the vampire bit, and as an ex-biter, you're askin' for it anyway.

Tec wrote: ...ANY MO' FO' WHO VOTES AGAINST ME FOR STRUCTURE OR MULTIES IS A WEAK DICKRYDIN FUCK...

Why? How would that make them dickryders? First of all, you had better multis than him anyway, but that's part a verse, not essential to win but it plays a part, and your structure is messed, which messes your flow, so people can't vote against you for that?

Frank... nice verse, funny, flow was OK, rhymes were basic, wordplay brought in to all ya punches, a lot of it quite original.

Tec... bad flow... some nice rhymes at times, and for someone that took a shot at him for played punches, you had losses/wins, rebirth and underground lines which have been done plenty...

Tec definitely had a more complex verse vocab-wise, and had some pretty good wordplay, complex rhyme scheme but complex isn't always good if it fucks the cohesion of the verse up, which it did for me... Frank came clean and simple, didn't try anything different but brought original wordplay and more personals, which gave him better punching power, his structure got him better flow... so ironically, Tec, the thing keepin' you IN this battle was the complex rhyme scheme/multis and vocab, even tho you said to people not to vote on multis...

Tec, you shoulda filled out ya eight bars, because you thought as his verse was simple it was wack, you're wrong. It dissed, with original concepts and personals. Big words and gore don't kill a battle, which is why Hanging has losses on his record. Frank wins.

VOTE: Frank White