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    Posted: 24 September 2007 at 2:37pm
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Spent six months hurtin' who I shoulda been supportin'/
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 07 October 2007 at 10:07pm
ill be sendin mine within the hour

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 08 October 2007 at 1:25pm
hallow no-showed, and pfeif was late but i'll let him off this time.

so pfeif wins:


G-Pfeif:


~ I speed into the Hospital Parking Lot and park my Car… My mind is racin as I make my way through the doors~

As I arrive at the hospital, im completely filled with this elation
that can’t be quelled, due to constant joy and anticipation
for the blessing that the lord is bringin me… that hes sendin to my life.
Today will be the arrival of my son, a little me, a little Pfeif.
I was at work, and then time stood still when I got the call,
telling me my wife was in labor and my baby boy was bout to fall.
The whole ride over all I had in my head were these visions,
of me playing catch with my son, watchin games, and takin him fishin.
Sprinting through the corridors, I was runnin out of stamina.
My mind was racin, I was surprised I remembered the camera.
I made it to the maternity ward and quickly found the obstetrician.
He calmly said, “Hello Mr. Pfeifer.  I need you to come with me and listen“
I said, “How’s my wife? How’s my son, my little man?”
He said, “Your son is doing well, but on the other-hand…
There were some complications, and your wife is fadin fast.”
I broke down right there, and braced myself against the glass.
I peered into the room, and I could see my lady cryin.
"Tell me you can save her! Youre lyin!  Tell me my woman isn’t dyin!”
“Can I see her???  She needs me… I need to be there by her side”
I couldn’t think of any words to say… just collapsed on her chest and cried
“I love you so much honey, you’ve given my life so much joy…
You’ve given me a son, and I promise to be a man and raise our little boy.”
She took a deep breath; she pulled me closer and, in a whisper, said
“You know I love you, But theres something I need to say before Im dead”
I told her “Its ok baby, I love you too… you don’t even need to bother
“No” she said… “you need to know, you might not be the father”
 
~BEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEPPPPPP~
~She’s gone~

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