Open Mic: I Really Mean It

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    Posted: 03 August 2021 at 11:21pm


While you are practicing...   freestyles and written
Mean styles from Britain;    ...meanwhile - i'm spittin!
Rolls like Royce, then don't diss because he's shy yo
Don't get me writing, my Pen don't miss. I'm not Bukayo


I'll be buying acres in Florida, of homes or land though
I'm scaling up into real estate, just let your man grow

While they're scaling back after putting my name in raps
With a wall mark hit your target or what's the aim in that?

I'm stacking paper; packing thou's like Pacquiao. Manny's best
So much Cash Money - they look at me like "Man, he fresh"

My wife breathes heavily - her lungs make her vest move
My queen makes this king step forward once; that's a Chest Move

I'm fearless when it comes to bad blood, that's a major shift
There's a greater kick... when i speak now, I'm razor quick
Look what you made me do with my style, my favourite bit
My suits get tailored quick...  because my tailor's swift


Jay-Z:
"I just tackle the subject, the flack of the public/
Nothing!I know real N***** just happen to love it"

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This was pretty fun, I noticed a bit of a nameplay theme dunno if it was intentional or not but added a consistent and creative element to what was already a good little flex. No idea what flow you were trying to go for but the way I read it was cool, rhymes were frequent too. Nothing overly spectacular but instead it stayed at a good level with no dramatic drops in quality etc.
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