Open Mic: I Really Mean It

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    Posted: 03 August 2021 at 11:21pm

While you are practicing...   freestyles and written
Mean styles from Britain;    ...meanwhile - i'm spittin!
Rolls like Royce, then don't diss because he's shy yo
Don't get me writing, my Pen don't miss. I'm not Bukayo

I'll be buying acres in Florida, of homes or land though
I'm scaling up into real estate, just let your man grow

While they're scaling back after putting my name in raps
With a wall mark hit your target or what's the aim in that?

I'm stacking paper; packing thou's like Pacquiao. Manny's best
So much Cash Money - they look at me like "Man, he fresh"

My wife breathes heavily - her lungs make her vest move
My queen makes this king step forward once; that's a Chest Move

I'm fearless when it comes to bad blood, that's a major shift
There's a greater kick... when i speak now, I'm razor quick
Look what you made me do with my style, my favourite bit
My suits get tailored quick...  because my tailor's swift

"I just tackle the subject, the flack of the public/
Nothing!I know real N***** just happen to love it"

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This was pretty fun, I noticed a bit of a nameplay theme dunno if it was intentional or not but added a consistent and creative element to what was already a good little flex. No idea what flow you were trying to go for but the way I read it was cool, rhymes were frequent too. Nothing overly spectacular but instead it stayed at a good level with no dramatic drops in quality etc.
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Introducing Karen Bradley as Mama knows a Bowl of Noodles
Served by some Show Dufus AKA The Blue Bus
Malibu Puss tryna Majimbu Us
Fusing checks to disappear without saying Kudos
It's brutal what I do so futile
Kinda like Midas after a touch or Brutos
Without rebuttals for a Neutral
Ready to Kung Fu Puke All
For a pass from Paul in the Rural
Read after "D" Addy died caz daddy dyed
I'm a free ounce from inside the tranny tried
A Dog like Danny but without a Ride
Or Chucky without a Bride
You get hauled to the side if you want to be Fried
My fanny lied Johnny 5 was an actual Bribe for the Wide
Not a wing about to Collide where they Hide
His names Mic or Mac Under Eye
In China Brother FODDER Rye
Car. Bye When the Raw Fly ike an eagle across the Sky
Double Spy
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