Open Mic: "I Write Because She Exists"

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Verse 1: 

I love you Hip-Hop and I always will 

First time I heard you I remember how you made me feel 

I knew it was real when we had our first Run 

And I remember when we shared our first Pun 

Yeah the 80's was fun but the 90's is when our relationship really begun 

And even though I shared you with everyone  

In all honesty that obstacle was easy to overcome 

I also had No I.D. so we already had that in Common  

Our own internal affairs never became a problem  

Was introduced to rap pages and I scanned every column  

I remember seeing this article on Illmatic  

Right then I knew this release would be massive  

Then the reports surfaced that the source issued 5 Mics, a classic  

A year and some change late the purple tape had its release date 

And It became my sound•scape inside the library that day  

No biggie that's when I started to serch while on a new quest  

That's when she took her final breath, Dear God is there really Life After Death? 

Hook: 

She rises in the east but she sets in the west  

Hip-Hop is dead maybe we just loved her to death

She rises in the east but she sets in the west  

Hip-Hop is dead maybe we just loved her to death

Hip-Hop is dead maybe we just loved her to death

Verse 2:

...Coming Soon...

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Dave Infinite Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Banned Joined: 14 August 2018 Location: CA Status: Offline Points: 153	Post Options Post Reply Quote Dave Infinite Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Topic: "I Write Because She Exists" Posted: 17 August 2018 at 6:42pm
	*Verse 1*: I love you Hip-Hop and I always will First time I heard you I remember how you made me feel I knew it was real when we had our first Run And I remember when we shared our first Pun Yeah the 80's was fun but the 90's is when our relationship really begun And even though I shared you with everyone In all honesty that obstacle was easy to overcome I also had No I.D. so we already had that in Common Our own internal affairs never became a problem Was introduced to rap pages and I scanned every column I remember seeing this article on Illmatic Right then I knew this release would be massive Then the reports surfaced that the source issued 5 Mics, a classic A year and some change late the purple tape had its release date And It became my sound•scape inside the library that day No biggie that's when I started to serch while on a new quest That's when she took her final breath, Dear God is there really Life After Death? Hook: She rises in the east but she sets in the west Hip-Hop is dead maybe we just loved her to death She rises in the east but she sets in the west Hip-Hop is dead maybe we just loved her to death Hip-Hop is dead maybe we just loved her to death Verse 2: ...Coming Soon...


Sammy Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Site Moderator Beacon of Light Joined: 24 October 2015 Status: Offline Points: 2223 Crew: Elision Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 1-1-1 Form: LNW	Post Options Post Reply Quote Sammy Report Post Likes(1) Quote Reply Posted: 18 August 2018 at 1:31am
	ha every emcee/writer eventually will do a hip hop ode piece. this is pretty dope cuzzin. love the references to the classics and the wordplays were a nice touch. keep writing, bro.


Neek Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Site Moderator Super Mario Slaughterer Joined: 05 October 2004 Status: Offline Points: 3862 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 3-1-0 Form: LWWW	Post Options Post Reply Quote Neek Report Post Likes(1) Quote Reply Posted: 18 August 2018 at 10:44am
	I dig that hook. im with Samuel Adams here.. a nice little nod, nothing mindblowing but a solid piece none the less. welcome to the party. insert LP linking his bible of how to get started and gripes about posting unfinished shit
	#Bananas

spume corrupt Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Superior Member Joined: 27 April 2011 Location: UK Status: Offline Points: 3163 Crew: Lyricist Inc. Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 20-7-1 Form: WLWLLL	Post Options Post Reply Quote spume corrupt Report Post Likes(1) Quote Reply Posted: 18 August 2018 at 7:11pm
	Yeah bro this was an enjoyable read I like that I got the impression this was your personal thoughts/experience The was cool but I’m just thinking My yard is south facing so I’m still feeling some heat I like your stuff thus far man Keep up


Dave Infinite Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Banned Joined: 14 August 2018 Location: CA Status: Offline Points: 153	Post Options Post Reply Quote Dave Infinite Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 18 August 2018 at 9:14pm
	Spume Corrupt that is correct. The 2nd verse is a mix of both and then there is third verse, which will be more like the first. Salute My Dude