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Identity Crisis Magazine week 3: The MONSTER Edition
I. Intro by Spume Corrupt SOME INCREDIBLE WRITERS TAKE US TO THE NEXT LEVEL AND.......... *Please refrain from replying until the mag is fully posted. Thank you!
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II. Reviews by Spume and Sammy And then there was eight! By spume 8 just 8, could be 9! Who can tell? These guys though, the surviving gladiators, they have fought their way through and DELIVERED winning verses in not only one, but two battles, fighting onward and earning their way to the next round and a place in the IC2 Quarter Finals Thirty-two cut down to Sixteen Seventeen cut down to Eight..................And The culling is set to continue... --------------- And Your Winners!! Reviews: By Sammy and Spume #2 Plot Summary: 2, went the origin story route; and in this case the origin of Bloody Mary. It was a nice character exposition that gave it just enough to advance to round 3. Why it won: according to the consensus, i felt 2, took the battle due to consistency. The technical quality was a bit cleaner, the imagery was more vivid. Plot was about even in terms of engagement but at the end, Yeah, 2 was pretty consistent across the board. #17 Plot summary: After being bitten by a vampire, a man realizes that there’s much to be gain from being an immortal creature. Why it won: I felt it won due to a very creative concept. The idea here was to use the fangs of a vampire to dissect the socio-political landscape all the while serving as a decent character sketch. Well done my friend. #5 Plot Summary: A tombraider who is deep in the dark art/occult set out to search for the source of evil to gain its power. Why it won: I felt it won due to a combination of advance rhyming and a well thought out concept. The verse was littered with references. I did noticed my my dude Spume bringing up an interesting point about the 40 bodies at the end. I strongly feel the bodies does NOT refer to death but incarnation of evil lol. Great verse! #6 Plot summary: The ghost of a heartbroken woman refused to leave an estate; haunting anyone who enters. Why it won: 6 won due to good mechanics and a more engaging storyline. Recalling classic ghost stories like Turn of the Screw and The Others, 6 wove a character sketch that entertained, ultimatley giving it the win. Awesome job! #16 Plot summary: I think this verse was about the evil of mankind? I’ll be honest, i’m not entirely sure lol. Why it won: This verse was like a satire of societal tendency. The ugly side of us, sort of speak. It won because the mechanics and wording were of higher caliber. The concept was also high level. References, wordings, all played a part in the vote. Excellent! #7 PLot summary: i believe the verse was attempting to personify evil. Why it won: A solid execution gave 7 the win. From creativity to crisp wording to an assortment of spitfire imagery that complemented the tone, 7 gave enought to steal the L from an otherwise beastly submission also. Good job to both really. #8 Plot summary: i’m gonna borrow Crimson’s summary because it was so perfectly worded: “my 1st impression was a multitude of beast,Joesf Menegele/Jeckle and Hide/ Werewolf,even a Reptilian at one point with the Venom inclusion,but all along you were in essence Frankenstien, this beast became the extention of your tormented yrs,” Why it won: 8 was able to craft a very effective story and that’s due to mechanics. Combine that with some high level lyricism and you get a writer who will advance into the next round. Congrants, man and thanks both ofyou for the read! #3 Plot summary: The hunter becomes the hunted in this engrossing tale about primitive instinct, werewolves, and family honor lol. (my dramatic tone was done on purpose) Why it won: 3 took a chance with short lines and i think it worked. Short lines are great techniques to use to achieve a frantic tone. It leaves very little room for breathing. That usage here was perfect as the plot involves a cat and wolf type ordeal that really push the adrenal button. Well done. |
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To those venturing forward I wish you all the best....
To those leaving us at this stage I say thanks for helping to make this tournament truly epic, your hard work and in all cases skilled writing and passionate EFFORTS have contributed to forcing the best to shine through... You are not forgotten yet.... S0 this is The IC2 Magazines tribute to our recently removed...-Spume THE DEPARTED... By Spume Corrupt
,............. Battler #FOURTEEN Bungee jumping without the strapping attached and face planting the canyon surface, it's the first in our list of nose divers here, free falling to a 4/2 against Battler #three Both guys received votes here so the voters were swinging both ways like Dennis Rodman at a swinger's shubbz, here's a short re-cap VOTES.. Crimson Said=First off i'm liking your inner rhyme scheme here,for me it shows a certain depth in vocab,as the pool of words used to do this can dry quick and fall flat if you don't have that range to achieve it, But QUE said= Ha ! Simple yet hella effective....The reader automactically gets to move easily thru the imagery and build his/her own idea of what that crook might look like. Theres far too many elements to tie up in this single verse My view.. The story never really came together here, But I was able to follow the writers general idea. Didn't think the connection with the Monster theme was very strong.... The piece seemed driven to rhyme at every opportunity, for me that always seems like trying to hard and I did find this work was awkward to enjoy.. That being said this writer does have a good ability to rhyme words maybe just needs to work on presenting them better. And working a story-line more effectively. A decent effort here. Favorite lines.. My first month as copper and its gettin stranger and stranger I expected the danger, but not crimes that defy the laws of nature, On the beat again, these streets I reign Surveyin my domain I hear a man in pain I race to the scene, this is far from routine Another scream from a crime unseen ............... Battler #NINE Mistakes the rat poison for orange juice here, drinking deeply from the soured cup of KO before being cut into quarters buy the blade of Battler #eight, last seen scurrying away with no tail to tell... This was a 4/0 KO so the voters were pretty decisive about the result, did they have anything good to say though? VOTES.. Jay Homie Said=The rhyming was pretty basic in this, and the whole rap part was nothing that was note worthy really, not a technically outstanding piece by any means. The story wasn't brilliant either, a lot of it was just about fucking But Self Acti said= In a nutshell your verse was consist, but I wish it would have had more colorful language and flair. My view At times this work was inspiring and realistic but other times I found it was simplistic and chunky kinda klunky The story had a happy ending? Unusual approach I thought plus the story never really had much flesh I think the main problems with this work was trying to fill a given line quota without fleshing out some memorable scenario. Rhyming was nice in places no doubt Favorite lines.. My mother's a whore that let Satan get in her pants One dark night we were fucking, she was screaming out Then next minute her face morphed & she grew a snout! I saw her big white fangs quickly shoot out her mouth She then proceeded with her attempt to take me out Noticed cause' of the cousins Aura "Aurora i am so disappointed!" "Taking Bribes to end lives, but since birth you were Anointed" ............... Battler #TEN Pulls the pin then neglects to throw the hand grenade far enough in this explosive fight with Battler #seven, this battle went all the way to a 4/3 scoreline, so mega close looking like a brutal throw-down.. Shit could have gone either way.. What swung it for the winner, what did it come down to? Lets look what the voters thought... VOTES.. Ashley K Said=I thought that the concept was hella fucking dope and creepy and you kills this shit topic wise. Shit gave me food bumps and you closed it out well. But Amgin said=Only criticism, I wish you would of changed the color of the text of the demons voice to red or something, would of made a strong clear statement. But now I'm just picky. My view. Not the easiest verse to enjoy here, I felt like I spent over half my time at a children's party. Names were thrown about but who was who and did it matter Theme monster theme was not explored enough here, I was looking for a lemonade and a cup cake a one point! The story Concept was there but not presented or developed in an engaging way... Favourite lines. Hello, come inside, it's nice to meet you then I get blasted with balloons Come here, you've gotta meet my best friend nathan Bringing an end to one of my bestest days And little james will be slain, hanging from a tree top Torso open, your the chosen, you can make these things stop Hear that screaming? I just decided your mom and dad's life was at stake You'll find your parents behind the terrace sliced at the waist .............. Battler #ONE Tries boarding the train in a costly timetable error affair seconds before shit arrives, smashed into and derailed by Battler #sixteen in another close encounter, defeated in an epic 4/2 clash VOTES.. Amgin Said=This was dope, a refreshing read and angle on the monster theme as it wasn't blatant. I really enjoyed the scene and environment you painted. The rhyme scheme was strong yet subtle. It read smoothly and the lines complimented eachother. It was Shakespearean vibe. Very well done But Nigma said=The content was a bit to DayDizzilian for my preference but you definitaly encapsulated the topic effectively. Solid entry. My view WOW just fucking WOW What an incredible work this is!!!! A really enjoyable STORY, well thought out Really embraced the Monster theme well Rhyming was brilliant This work had perfect measure of all the necessary elements to deliver an outstanding read For me that is what it's all about Sorry to see this competitor leave us here Favorite lines Yes, a full moon only looms once a month, Here's 'Lunar News' - Zoom on the front, No sowing kit to patch ripped clothes, This shit blows, rolling on my tip toes, It grips slow.. Makes a soul hurt, Soles work along with the growth spurt, I hope search but thoughts lay fucked, They thrust for blood and prey lust, Daddy is in a bad place, we'd be a ready meal- If we weren't in bed behind this heavy steel, Let me feel safe again, at least Sarah's comfy, He dares us bluntly, as he scares us monthly, Well, no.. No.. Whats the blood from her elbow, A swelled flow from the wound, Dads snarls are foul, I fight back the tears as she starts to growl.. ............... Battler #ELEVEN Fails in a quest to cross the Arctic in nothing but Speedo style pants for protection, stuffed with lemon Popsicle's for nutrition... Not even a hat.. Frozen out in their clash with Battler #six VOTES Neek Said=ok, not sure if Nigma or Amgin or both. but this was cool. I liked the short style, obviously... I liked your approach as well. But Spume said=The title Lagoon conjures up some dope potential for story telling but you didn't deliver the aspect! Arguably the main ingredient...... My view.. So this piece was stylish and the scheme Laden flow was a refreshing read Rhyming was tight throughout very smooth The theme was present and the Idea sound Just wish the contents were a bit deeper and the outcome more developed.. I did like the lagoon Concept a lot and just wanted more Overall this was an enjoyable work to read Favorite lines.. "Lagoon" Likened to a lunatic’s howl A movie clip; borrowed from vintage Hollywood style The Devil dwells on the bank of rage and fumigations. The stinging swoon of hatred whispering the tune of Hades. Splash! Its name is Legion Born of tainted reasons The well of life is dry As light subsides, it engage through anger; seething ............... Battler #TWELVE All attempts to score recreational drugs here have lead this contestant to the wrong part of town here Seeking to get higher! But only ending up getting robbed of they cash money then chopped up and buried VOTES.. Sammy Said= just when I thought 5 had it in the bag....HOLY SHIT!! This was sooo well written. There were no trite phrase, no cliche imagery, no tired rhymes, it was straight up fire. But Spume said=I gotta jump on this verse and call a WTF ???Emergency, fuck sake I was sober five minutes ago! So I really found it hard to enjoy this sprawling number My view.. This was a really good read, it did get hard to follow at time but the rhyming definitely carried it thru I don't think it really captured the potential that was available with the given Monster theme.. But still a very enjoyable attempt with some dope rhyming worked in creating a smooth flow over a long piece. Favorite lines.. Lifes unequal. No curse could cure it of that It’s this lack of balance where the purities at My mission, It was grandiose. First step, the maps unfolded. Pencil prints my path to go Passing slopes in lands that savage folk are known to have control But with a passive, planned approach, I can transverse past patrol Feel the weight of someone's gaze, proceed to make my laps, and quick My vision sees a thousand hallways make a maze; a labyrinth The room changes to a hall of mirrors which starts spinning, then crashes I'm sent flying due to gravity that's shifted my axis Land with eyes closed, feeling glass bits where my hands hit When they open, in a mirror shard I glimpse into panic ............... Battlers FOUR and THIRTEEN Tandem skydive here folks, free falling for a mile Looking like LAW was piloting a large aircraft over Uncharted terrain when he hit some turbulence And it seems as though bit player Battler #seventeen was responsible for tampering with the parachute!... Carnage ensues as two players hit the ground crash out.. All verses garnered respectable scores, so this battle was looking like a heavyweight showdown with guaranteed multiple casualties.... Battler #FOUR First guy to hit the ground with an overall score of 7 from a possible winning score of 22 So personally this was the winning verse IMO, but that's JMO what did the voters think? VOTES.. Self Acti Said=Damn! The wording and the flow are dope right out of the gate. The way you put your scheme together immediately grabbed my attention. I'm digging it this thus far, both the mechanics and the content. But Kairo said=I could predict that the verse was going to be littered with internal rhymes as opposed to focusing on a more complex scheme that forwent them every once in awhile. BUT if that's your thing, you did your thing and props to it My view I really liked the angle of approach this writer took, it was a cool take on the theme and delivered really well the compact but very informative nature of this delivery made the verse high end imo It was short but it was satisfying, for me the ending delivered on the promise the verse presented Dope verse........ Favorite lines.. Mind breaker, serial life taker, call me the silent death For years noone's peered through the disguise I've kept Gods and Angels are not able to chart the lives I've wrecked No charges bought, I laugh at thoughts of the eyes that wept Confide in me, give your life to me, it's easy to do I'll take the pain, make it fade, give back freedom to you Bet it's true that I've affected you, tell me, who did I take? No remorse, I own your thoughts, can I break you too? Bet I will, my methods ill, what can I make you do... You know the name, I own the game. They call me Suicide. .............. Battler #THIRTEEN Smashing into Tera Firma next with a score of from a possible winning 22 and Battler 4 not really softening the landing in any way. IT'S a good old fashioned double execution here folks with the new kid in town, lucky number slevin teen proving his guns are fresh and formidable.. VOTES Sammy Said=more advance rhyme scheme and mechanics, i feel comfortable rewarding them the win. good job all. helluva fight here. But Kairo said=verse was decent and I enjoyed how it touched bass on the mythos of Christianity as well. I found the rhyming pretty nice and the flow easy to catch. My view.. It was humorous at some points and perhaps overly descriptive at others the two approaches did clash a bit and despite the end tying in with the beginning well the middle could have been more effective.... Rhyming was obviously well thought out and pretty decent This verse def had some enjoyable moments for me wit some clever touches Story should have been a bit more focused towards the out come.. Could have used some extra polish Favorite lines.. See Once Virgins they were a plenty, but you know the kids of today! Father fooled them with lies, selling his fine art for protection The wrong timber for their stakes, he carved them to perfection Holy water that was fake we collected from the streams an Lakes that we bathed in, that won't save them from demons! It was all a deception, we laid claim to the heathen The life essence of these peasants, was the main thing we needed when they captured my parents and ripped out their hearts Not knowing a son had been born them, I was hid in the cart ............... Battler #FIFTEEN Over exposure to unhygienic sneakers looks to be the downfall for this mid distance runner, chronic athletes foot and ten× ingrowing toenails see this competitor hobble out after a thrilling 4/2 defeat against Battler # two VOTES.. Exoduzt Said=Concept wise...fuck yeah. I absolutely loved the concept and not just that it was the way you executed it that really drew me in. The poetic vibe with beautiful descriptiveness in some areas was pretty fucking stand out top of the line stuff for me. But Kiki S said=Whilst I enjoyed reading your piece, I feel like it was weaker as a topical piece when considering the previously mentioned factors. Your flow at time was fantastic My view.. The rhyming was top tier here, the work flowed well and I found it easy to read.. I kinda wanted this to break into story mode but never felt like it developed on that side of things Favorite lines.. Did you ever notice how in the Bible, when ever God needed to punish someone Take a look around, no idea where you are A bell rings and breaks his meditation He's salivating eyes rounded gazed into the mirror satan Weak souls on the edge of breaking for the demons taking Demon landed on his feet he's standing The light at the end is daunting and what lies ahead is haunting Your soul is wanting answers from God but there's no responding |
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III. Throwbacks Seeing it as last round's theme was centered around monster and horror sensibility, i decided to sleuth for some classic verses of the past that touched on the theme. One took a more direct approach while the other was more grounded, meditating on internal monstrosity. Both interpreted horror in different ways but both were dope as fuck! Enjoy and props to the two writers!! "Dracula" - By Rude If Gillman’s actin’ mischievous? He gets a waveless tank of prisms With sonars pinging so loud, even the matrix breaks it’s rhythm Frank is made in increments! But the most famous name that’s given Is the doctor that created him, thus a shameful naked vision The Wolfman’s howl is frivolous, the Lupus Dei’ll taint the system I’ll make him Roll Over on a bear trap, and Beg to Stay in that positon Jack the Ripper was insolence! It was my fangs that ate the vixens I used to roam the streets of London and strangulate the wicked Hypnotized the innocents, pierced a vein and drank the liquid dragged the vagabonds to my lair and exsanguinate my victim Call me Batman in a sense, cause of the pain at stake, inflicted My life force is so moving, there's a change of state when bitten The power felt is imminent, it's the strangest strain of sickness the capillary thirst, amongst the most heinous stage of symptoms prepare for the genesis!, as my greatest reign to witness draining Helsing on his arrival, since he came to slay afflicted Bram branded me as villainous, in his pages, blame was written I bathed in blood that stained the mud, my ancient ways were twisted back when I was militant, enslavement swayed the vicious so they named me the Impaler cuz of the sadist strays I lifted showing signs of vigilance, my changeless face has shifted growing tired but never old, of all this ageless grace I'm given now my story seen as synthesis, and my stasis wanes opinions but you know Legends never die, so I just fade away in distance ---------------- Earlier this week an interesting conversation occurred regarding the “Golden Era” of LA. It was interesting reading some of the thoughts. An intersting notion was brought up about (topical)writings of the current era has elevated past those of the past. This inspired me to look up some of the older pieces and umm...well…..who says writers of the past wouldn’t be able to compete. This was a vicious narrative. It worked with last round’s theme about monster because, more so than any hollywood script, the monsters inside us are often the scariest! Dope ass verse check it out. "Summer Love" - By Fuckoff I was beaming... an looking like young loves summer dream the sun always shone on her.. man she was sweet the streaks of red in her hair lit up like her fiery side I was getting lost in her smiling eyes, while we drive couldn't help stare, an grin, as hers met mine speeding, singing 'long to tracks from way back in ninety five she had her feet sitting on the dash, an hands on her tanned thighs dressed in a tank top that can only be described as, dam tight. the sun setting gently, it fades into the dimmed light of night says she'd told her mum nine - says she's a little tight for time, well off the beaten track now, and she was like 'were we goin'.. i replied 'i'm not tellin... its called a surprise' 'alright?..', she said with a little bite.. an then she piped 'but what are we doing tonight'.. 'gettin fucked babe'.. *twice*.. I thought.. while gently pullin into a empty lay-by 'hello?!', 'emergency services, police, fire or ambulance?' 'police! please! my daughters missing, an im unsure of this man - her friends havent seen her.. her phones broke or off this is so unlike her, an we argued before she went sulking off 'and how olds your daughter, miss?.. twenty? what? im sorry.. but ring back in 48 hours.. till then its best not to worry..' *I really... really... wanted to fuck her..*
her touch is electric, mate, I wonder how she fucks.. I bet her little erect nips taste as good as her wee muff always acts likes shes such a good girl, but maybe shed be naughty maybe if I showed her my dark side, she'd do the same.. for me.. I think she plays with me, teases me.. likes to wind me up always walkin to work in a short skirt that scream 'im a slut - tie me up'.. id sat behind her at school, close enough to smell her she wears chanel, jus like my mother did, with hints of vanilla i showed her kindness, showerin compliments, till she was like 'No, stop it' but.. id been friendzoned so hard... we'd even go clothes shoppin.. *..bitch..* stood at the door knockin, six cops and a swat team 'GET THE RAM READY.. HIT THE LOCK.. HE'S NOT IN'.. the slams steady an with a 'click' its popped off its hinges the search beginnin already siftin thru paperstacks and tossed syringes rippin every draw out. ignoring the stench of rot from the kitchens many half empty pots cause that girl - she been missin days, then without a flicker of hesitation or any doubt came a heavy shout.. 'SARGE... COME HERE...' he pauses, not cause hes breathin - he's jus tryna take it all in.. 'I.. I THINK YOU NEED TO SEE THIS..' 'what is this place.. whats goin on, its kind of creepy'.. 'Ive told you, its a secret.. C'mon... come inside.. youll see'.. walls all dark n dirtied, like theyd risen straight from earth fallen windows left jus iron bars, on this prison made from dirt vacated since the eighties, an asylum, where the different went to 'learn' it was lit up by a sick fuck a touch violent, an it still glistened where it'd burnt, charred roof n ash, scattered the path like its past occupants minds knarled roots had wrapped the overgrown gates now lost in the grime the wooden porch was black like tar, this lonely place rotten wa slime most slats now snapped apart, but the door still padlocked with a sign 'KEEP OUT' and 'DANGER'.. the rusty warnings ignored its frame like paper, took one kick till the door was on the floor its was a door like any other, showed nothing apparent.. but inside was the thoughts an soul of a man gone manic.. the cupboard a sick shrine to his love her pictures hung from string, tied from above next to candles and keepsakes her lost gloves an other mementos.. this wretched man who'd reached hate from a rotten love gone bad or mental had full pads of scribbled poems an odes layin next to homemade dolls an a naked barbie shoes thatd fit a two year old tot.. but what really made the alarms ring the bloodied kids knickers stuffed into a locked box and topped with glitter stickers... 'Sarge, this pictures different, it might be suttin its old, worn, n was clipped to this paper cuttin, this womans, shes beautiful.. she looks jus like her.. says she worked at the old institution, untill..' ..he tightens up.. 'she was raped.. real brutal.. i think.. this is his mother' ..then.. as he read on the tale of this monster dawned upon this simple copper.. 'after labour, she went to jail.. for trying to smother him..' we wandered through the neglected ruins, expecting ghouls felt an ambiance that would test tombs, an the guts of lesser fools a menacingly depressive moon filtered through the wreckage roof, through the beams left to stew an lit up the dusty decrepit rooms that once slept the loons, screams still echo'd with every gentle step taken floorboards shake with the weight of a thousand mental patients she turned to me, trying to muster the strength to say something her lips quivered an her chin wobbled, an then 'I'm late..' again.. taking her hands tightly, I squeeze just enough to hurt shes squirms, confused at her situation, 'your not.. scared are you? dont be a little girl.'.. I smirked.. i was gone. the world dissipated, his wet breath felt suffocating so close i could taste it.. with every fibre i should fuckin hate him but past emotion, i just laid still, expressionless.. nothing. vacant resorting to displacement, i wondered if I'd wake up. torrential black rain, the tears mixing with my make up his claw like nails slithered and dug into my neck, the other hand gripped my wrist and positioned above my head. could feel his elbows shake, his weight twice mine an bearing down grunt an rasp, his saliva frothing at the side of his mouth how long could this fuckin last? my toes clenched in self pity his trousers were barely down, and he was in me my whimpers felt silly, trying to tighten up, it was useless, dry as fuck, but he pushed through it, excited by his abusiveness.. her body lay naked clothes torn from her they were too late.. 'SHIT.. phone the coroner' pools of red trickled to flood her eyes still open.. in wonder.. and written in blood the words 'I HATE YOU MOTHER' |
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IV. It's a Number's Game by Ridley Squat I remember reading or hearing someone said once that math is the language of god. If you can fully grasp this “language” you can observe past, manipulate present and predict future!! Sounds fantastic? Fuck you! Testing this theory out, here’s our very own Ridley Squat. BTW, this maybe one of the most interesting shit i’ve read as of late. Damn, Rid, more articles….PLEASE!! -Sammy Numbers, numbers, numbers. They are everywhere, they control everything, but what actually are they? Take 7 for example ... how much even is that? ... Nobody knows! But what might help us to understand is the exciting SCIENCE! of Numerology. This particular SCIENCE! is part of a special branch of SCIENCE! called "Pseudoscience", and unlike bogus ideas like Math(s) ... it remains relevant and useful every day of your life. Let's examine this phenomena in our own IC2. There are some pretty shocking revelations right here ... can they really be coincidences? I mean really? Can they, though? (Warning this is not for the faint-hearted.) 1. The number of participants in each round divides exactly by 2 each time! ... 32, 17, 8 ... I checked, it's spooky but it's true! 2. And the title IC2 actually has a 2 in it! Honestly! Check again ... it's right after the C. 3. And in round 2 ... all 8 contestants have 8 characters in their name! Don't believe me? See for yourself:- Battler1, Battler2, Battler3, Battler4, Battler5, Battler6, Battler7, Battler8. This one doesn't seem to work as well with round one though, I don't know why, the numbers are a fickle mistress I guess. 4. And most shocking of all ... the number of every winner so far has been within the following numerical groups :- * Prime numbers * Square numbers * Adele Albums * Perfect numbers * Odd numbers * Even numbers Chilling stuff. Observing these patterns, I am even able to make predictions for the coming rounds. In the Semi-final match-ups I predict the battlers competing will be ... Battler2, Battler4, Battler1 ... and this is a tough call ... but I'll say Battler3. And in the final I'll go further to say it will be Battler1 versus Battler2. Let's revisit this after the coming draws and see how I did. Thanks for your time. For the 8 of you still in ... good luck and good writing! For the rest of us ... unlucky, but keep it to yourself and above all, try not to let on that you've got time on your hands. Peace. Rid Out. |
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V. Interview with Self Activate I don't have to tell yall how big a fan i am of this guy. Let me just lists a few things he's done in only a year time. 1. Champed a pretty stacked SS league with a 5-0 record. 2. 4x RB OM HOF 3. 2x RR Text Drop of the Month Winner (which only awards one piece per month) 4. 4x LA 5 stars level drop who knows what else he's garnered that nobody knows about! Without further ado...Ladies and Gentlemen, my brutha...SELF ACTIVATE!
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VI. Top 10: Twilight Zone Episodes God bless Netflix! Why? TWILIGHT ZONE!! I’ve been compiling a fav twilight episode list for a while now and haven’t had a chance to share it lol. So with the dark, horror-theme topics of last round, i will sneak, under that pretense, it in and share with yall my the list. All episode are on netflix if u want to check them out. Top 10 Greatest Twilight Zone Episodes 10. Night Call Elva Keene starts receiving night calls from an unknown source. Fed up, she finally told the stranger to stop calling her. After realizing where the call was coming from…Elva decided to talk to this person who was closer to her than she ever thought! 10. Death-head Revisited A sort of companion piece to “Judgment Night”, Death-head Revisited tells the tale of a former S.S. Officer, Captain Gunther Lutze returning to his old haunting...i mean hunting ground(lol) only to be visited by a few old friends…. 8. Nightmare At 20,000 Feet On one late night flight, Bog Wilson, played by William Shatner, sees a creature on the wing of his airplane. He tried to warn the crew but no one believes him. So it’s now up to him to save the unsuspecting passengers from 20,000 feet of death. 7. The Last Flight A popular trend in cinema these day involves the time loop and paradox. Films like Interstellar, Predestination, Donnie Darko all touched on that theme. The Last Flight is one of TZ’s examination of that concept - and perhap one of the first of its kind. Its an awesome exercise in pacing and solid storytelling. Def one of the illest! 6. Mirror Image Millecent Barnes is waiting for the bus. But while waiting she encountered a series of weird events that lead her to believe that someone is playing a joke on her…but who? 5. Death Ship Another time loop theme piece, this episode tells of Captain Ross and crew finding a duplicate crashed spaceship, with an identical crew killed in the crash. After each member of the crew has hallucinations involving dead friends and relatives, they are convinced they are dead. Suddenly, they are back in space about to land.* 4. Will The Real Martial Please Stand Up The structure of this story is very similar to a stephen king composition. A group of characters, beyond their control, are gathered at a location. Similar to a King’s novel, the true nature of human emerged as the plot progresses. You will noticed that the title inspired one of Eminem’s greatest hit lol. Awesome episode that should not be missed. 3. Judgment Night Judgment Night tells the story of Carl Lanser, a German, on board the S.S. Queen of Glasgow, a British Ship, in the year 1942. He has no memory of how he got there, but he has a strange feeling that he knows the passenger. Lanser is certain that they are being stalked by an enemy sub. He also feels that something is going to happen at 1:15 AM. Then at 1:15 AM, a u-boat surfaces….woooohhhh.... 2. The Hitch-hiker This Twilight Zone episode is really a television adaptation of a very popular urban legend. There's different variations. In this interpretation, we Nan Adams was going on a cross-country trip from Manhattan to Los Angeles. Along the way she keeps seeing the same hitch-hiker on the side of the road. It wasn’t long before she realizes that her simple road trip might be a long hard road to hell. 1. Walking Distance Gig Young plays a busy ad exec who wants to get away from the daily grind, so he decided to take stroll down memory lane - literally. This was a very personal story to Rod Serling, who wrote several stories with this theme. This is the most emotional.You can't go home again! Edited by Sammy - 07 May 2017 at 4:59am |
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VII. Round 3, FIGHT!! by The Law Round 3 topic theme: Biome Round Biome a large naturally occurring community of flora and fauna occupying a major habitat, e.g., forest or tundra. Just in case anyone needs it. ^ There will be 4 Biomes each given to a specific battle. - Tundra/Arctic - Jungle/Forest/Woods - Desert/Sahara - Marine/Ocean http://www.ucmp.berkeley.edu/glossary/gloss5/biome/ If you need further elaboration. Now you can create your own story whether it's human-character based or based on the wildlife in the biome. The destruction of it. Your story/topical is entirely yours to create, however, it must be based in your specific biome. Ex. Marine/Ocean - Pollution, a guys life living on the sea, shark story.. etc. Same with all of the rest of them. If it's arctic feel free to right about igloos and eskimos. So again. All drops must be based around the given biome for the battle, the rest is entirely up to you. VIII. Outro Edited by Sammy - 07 May 2017 at 4:34am |
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1) that was an incredible collection of material. entirely worth the wait.. whew. heat.
2) amazing interview with Self.. ya'll had natural chemistry and shit was just dope overall.. didnt feel so... I dunno..guarded. also..im glad we cool Self..cause I told endeeze yesterday I was changing my name to Self Navigate...so dont sue me fam. 3) Ridley should tutor me in math, asap. 4) who the fuck watches twilight zone... I get the play... 5) yesterday was cinco de mayo. grande. |
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Sammy
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yo neek! Twilight Zone's dope, son! Best anthology series ever!
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just theme song alone... tales from the crypt...
but if thats your flavor.. I aint even mad. |
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I'm actually gonna roll a joint and watch a few of those episodes, bro.
A few things: 1) I've heard of Celp Taut, SelfSavior, and of course SELF ACTIVATE, but never a non-mechanical version of Self Navigate, so as far as Selfs go I think you got that one in the bag, Neek. 2)Spume, you're one entertaining ass dude. Your commentary is witty and right on point. Good shit. 3)Rid, I see you're trolling the Illuminati enthusiast. Shit was funny on the slick. 4) Where the fuck is Rude??? One of the dopest writers on L.A. Vanished without a trace 5) Fuckoff was a gotdamn beast! That verse was epic. 6) Sammy, you're a mastermind my dude. Best mag to date. Dope shit across the board. Props! |
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im gonna switch my name to Self A Steam
fact, Rude needs to come back yo! werda Empire!
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Dope ass write ups guys, real shit. Neek did tell me he'd change it into Self Navigate. If he gets to do that I want dibs on "Neek", goes well with Endeez. Hell, can even turn it into a 1 man two mans group.
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Lmao @ random Twilight episode reviews. You're crazy man. Ridleys bit had me cracking up.
Will read Spumeys and Self interview later. Amazing job again guys. |
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By far the best mag yet. Also that might have been the best interview. Fucking great job on this everyone
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Incredible mag.. excellent...
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Crazy amount of work gone in this. Props on the creativity aswell.
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This mag here is the best i've read to date,Spume Sammy you guys have done a real
tremendous job here in putting this together,the time taken to write this must of been obscene via length,so super mad props to you both for investing and delivering a truly exceptional mag,that is nothing short of quality alround,thank you both for this ripe enjoyable read...peace. SELF ACTIVATE,you are truly knowledgeable,this was a great interview and prospective from you,as you already know,at LA the talent pool is seriously mad in depth,but you are my favourite OM head here,i love Mythology myself and you do often incorporate this element vividly within your verses,as I read this interview I found myself nodding all the way through too,RIPE...peace. Sammy you seemed real comfortable with this interview,you asked the questions I would of asked,so props and respect from me comes your way too,thanks you..... peace. |
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"You need to learn how to make an exit,
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^The site wouldn't wouldn't be the same without you, Juice. L.A.s #1 asset.
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