Open Mic: Idiomatic(Slip&The Rap Daemon)

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    Posted: 13 August 2018 at 10:40pm

The Rap Daemon

Some hate with the greyest vision, 'coz I make it vivid
Call me a piece of work, but it'll pay to listen
'Coz I spray the wisdom within lyrics, so stay a critic
You're failing to picture me, just frame the lyrics
You know how one bad apple spoils, well you're reaching a bunch
Trying to find ways to put me in a hunch
Funny how you swear I'll be feeling the crunch
I've never lived hand to mouth, I just speak with a punch
I'm not waiting, but what I bring to the table's mad impressive
This ain't front of house, but you'll be served as you step in
I'd be lying to say I'm wrong but I won't stand corrected
I'm a blessing in disguise but it's clear that I am collected
Nothing can challenge this, waiting's something I might try
But walking off the seconds is a drag, 'coz man time flies
Can't find mighty competition, lonely is the high-life
So in this dog-eat-dog world, everything is bitesized.

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We be bringing the best of both worlds no beating around the bush
straight to the point with the drop of a hat, it is the way it looks
push comes to shove, I sink the hooks in quick
Judge a book by its cover? or let the page flip
no crooks gonna cheat me, they say I’m to slick
It’s The Rap Daemon on a verse with a beast named slip
new lease on life keep the blazing flame lit release the light unable to tame it
Brains unstable ain’t somethin to play with
Bout to go off like a quake and shake it
the ground beneath ya feet, I shift and break it
Flow like lava sauna on the sun
Hotter then hell so well done
In the heat of the moment I’m the devils advocate
Your barking up the wrong tree, so inadequate
Having all your eggs in the same fucking basket
No tricks up your sleeves, zero magic
Counting your chickens before they hatch is
Believed to be a real bad practice
More so now dealing with a savage
One wrong move you’ll be picking out caskets
For you and ya family, collateral damage
See no evil speak no evil silent echo alter ego
inner demon violent beast so
warn the mother fucking people
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Slip..I dig the middle verse to the end more than the opening...Felt more pieced together..

In the heat of the moment I’m the devils advocate
Your barking up the wrong tree, so inadequate
Having all your eggs in the same fucking basket
No tricks up your sleeves, zero magic 

The Rap Daemon...I like the middle portion of the verse...The end was not as strong as the start/middle..

Trying to find ways to put me in a hunch
Funny how you swear I'll be feeling the crunch
I've never lived hand to mouth, I just speak with a punch

All in All...Cool Collab that Y'all dropped....


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Not bad...both of you had some heat packed up in there..n yup it was a cool collab fellas.
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I enjoyed this collab'.

Even though we both obviously went with that idiomatic rhythm, I think our styles were contrasting enough for the piece to remain fresh throughout and not feel like a samey approach.

I think we both had depth, though I won't judge my own piece, I believe mine came from a punchy side, and yours from a descriptive note.

My personal favourite line was this one:

One wrong move you'll be picking out caskets.

Faggot
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OK guys Let's See What's Cracking..

always good to read a collab when their in the house,and to be honest i never
saw (you 2 pairing up) this match up coming,TRD i liked your verse,you started
out decent enough,and as your drop progressed it came with more gusto too,it
seemed to build up and up,but in a controlled manner for a selfhype piece,and
due to the unhurried stance it made it kind of subtle also,like you had a message
to give,it also read well,it didn't come off as forced really,nice piece here,Slip i
do feel you started off slow,but your verse did pick up a third of the way in,i feel
in parts you had some nice angles,i liked the fact you included TRD within your
drop,it gave this collab more substance via that route,you had this vibe within
your piece where you seem to raise a point,then make it a statement,i liked that
slant there,i feel overall that this collab was good,you both seem to blend well
here,enjoyable read fella's...peace.
"You need to learn how to make an exit,
before you can dare make an entrance".
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