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Slip
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Posted: 13 August 2018 at 10:40pm |
The Rap Daemon Some hate with the greyest vision, 'coz I make it vivid Call me a piece of work, but it'll pay to listen 'Coz I spray the wisdom within lyrics, so stay a critic You're failing to picture me, just frame the lyrics You know how one bad apple spoils, well you're reaching a bunch Trying to find ways to put me in a hunch Funny how you swear I'll be feeling the crunch I've never lived hand to mouth, I just speak with a punch I'm not waiting, but what I bring to the table's mad impressive This ain't front of house, but you'll be served as you step in I'd be lying to say I'm wrong but I won't stand corrected I'm a blessing in disguise but it's clear that I am collected Nothing can challenge this, waiting's something I might try But walking off the seconds is a drag, 'coz man time flies Can't find mighty competition, lonely is the high-life So in this dog-eat-dog world, everything is bitesized. Slip We be bringing the best of both worlds no beating around the bush straight to the point with the drop of a hat, it is the way it looks push comes to shove, I sink the hooks in quick Judge a book by its cover? or let the page flip no crooks gonna cheat me, they say I’m to slick It’s The Rap Daemon on a verse with a beast named slip new lease on life keep the blazing flame lit release the light unable to tame it Brains unstable ain’t somethin to play with Bout to go off like a quake and shake it the ground beneath ya feet, I shift and break it Flow like lava sauna on the sun Hotter then hell so well done In the heat of the moment I’m the devils advocate Your barking up the wrong tree, so inadequate Having all your eggs in the same fucking basket No tricks up your sleeves, zero magic Counting your chickens before they hatch is Believed to be a real bad practice More so now dealing with a savage One wrong move you’ll be picking out caskets For you and ya family, collateral damage |
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Dave Infinite
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Slip..I dig the middle verse to the end more than the opening...Felt more pieced together.. In the heat of the moment I’m the devils advocate Your barking up the wrong tree, so inadequate Having all your eggs in the same fucking basket No tricks up your sleeves, zero magic The Rap Daemon...I like the middle portion of the verse...The end was not as strong as the start/middle.. Trying to find ways to put me in a hunch Funny how you swear I'll be feeling the crunch I've never lived hand to mouth, I just speak with a punch All in All...Cool Collab that Y'all dropped.... |
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SupaDupa
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Not bad...both of you had some heat packed up in there..n yup it was a cool collab fellas.
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The Rap Daemon
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I enjoyed this collab'.
Even though we both obviously went with that idiomatic rhythm, I think our styles were contrasting enough for the piece to remain fresh throughout and not feel like a samey approach. I think we both had depth, though I won't judge my own piece, I believe mine came from a punchy side, and yours from a descriptive note. My personal favourite line was this one: One wrong move you'll be picking out caskets. |
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Crimson Juice
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OK guys Let's See What's Cracking..
always good to read a collab when their in the house,and to be honest i never saw (you 2 pairing up) this match up coming,TRD i liked your verse,you started out decent enough,and as your drop progressed it came with more gusto too,it seemed to build up and up,but in a controlled manner for a selfhype piece,and due to the unhurried stance it made it kind of subtle also,like you had a message to give,it also read well,it didn't come off as forced really,nice piece here,Slip i do feel you started off slow,but your verse did pick up a third of the way in,i feel in parts you had some nice angles,i liked the fact you included TRD within your drop,it gave this collab more substance via that route,you had this vibe within your piece where you seem to raise a point,then make it a statement,i liked that slant there,i feel overall that this collab was good,you both seem to blend well here,enjoyable read fella's...peace. |
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