Open Mic: I'll even be prejudice

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   It's a.. 
Breeze when I hit the script, 
a treat if you've witnessed it. 
So please hit your knees and appease all my wishes bitch. 
Trees in the wilderness would freeze in my bitterness.
When I hit the scene people seem to submit to this. 
Please, 
Ima beast cuz I cease to admit that this is easy so leave me a key to the kingdom.. 
A deed at the interstice of three different entrances
You should've taken heed as I speed toward a precipice. 
Last night indeed I believed I was pegasus 
Im fly like the steed.. and this here is my evidence. 
I speak with an eloquence, I'm leading an exodus of freedom to eden 
These people are credulous. 
I'm deisel its evident that I'm reaping the benefits of a lethal benevolence of the people im up against. 
It seems to be eminent that you need be a detriment to this Internet society of people you've never met.
Fuck around here and you'll cease to be celibate. 
No one really reads what you deem to be prevalent.
So no one really needs what you bring to the delegates
An if I can be mean then I'll even be prejudice.
These iron clad scales that cling to my elephants
are beaten at the seams and they seem to be delicate. 
I'll fire that cannon from the back of my regiment an I'll 
Tebow on a knee while I'm leaving your settlement. 

Edited by Smoothtung - 21 March 2017 at 8:24pm

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Smoothtung Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Standard Member Joined: 09 December 2012 Status: Offline Points: 2222 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 25-8-3 Form: WWWLWN	Post Options Post Reply Quote Smoothtung Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Topic: I'll even be prejudice Posted: 21 March 2017 at 7:39pm
	It's a.. Breeze when I hit the script, a treat if you've witnessed it. So please hit your knees and appease all my wishes bitch. Trees in the wilderness would freeze in my bitterness. When I hit the scene people seem to submit to this. Please, Ima beast cuz I cease to admit that this is easy so leave me a key to the kingdom.. A deed at the interstice of three different entrances You should've taken heed as I speed toward a precipice. Last night indeed I believed I was pegasus Im fly like the steed.. and this here is my evidence. I speak with an eloquence, I'm leading an exodus of freedom to eden These people are credulous. I'm deisel its evident that I'm reaping the benefits of a lethal benevolence of the people im up against. It seems to be eminent that you need be a detriment to this Internet society of people you've never met. Fuck around here and you'll cease to be celibate. No one really reads what you deem to be prevalent. So no one really needs what you bring to the delegates An if I can be mean then I'll even be prejudice. These iron clad scales that cling to my elephants are beaten at the seams and they seem to be delicate. I'll fire that cannon from the back of my regiment an I'll Tebow on a knee while I'm leaving your settlement. Edited by Smoothtung - 21 March 2017 at 8:24pm

Lord Puente Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Newbie Final Boss Joined: 05 July 2016 Location: Florida Status: Offline Points: 1814 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 4-2-0 Form: LWWWLW	Post Options Post Reply Quote Lord Puente Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 22 March 2017 at 3:49pm
	I ain't gonna lie, I read this a few days ago and it's pretty dope but I generally don't like feeding back on people's verses who don't feed themselves, we all hungry. Id like to see you feeding other peoples work as well as making some more dope af drops like this. keep the pen to the pad.