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    Posted: 21 October 2019 at 8:18pm
2 minute Acapella 

Due 10/29/2019
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Cool and you definitely want to keep it acapella? Just askin.
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I ain’t forget about this. Work has been wild. I have it recorded but can’t convert to MP3 to put on SoundCloud. The app i used puts it in .m4a
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If I knew the deadline wasn’t gonna matter I definitely wouldn’t of posted my first take but whatever. Good luck
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Get over it dude people have lives
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I been over it I said good luck and everything. I don’t have no problem with you. I was hoping we could collab one of these days
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The delivery of ILL's verse was of a different ilk. The directness and aggression was second to none I've seen on LA. The build up and pause "Look how he drops twitching". Class. An air of arrogance to the piece too which was epitomised in my favourite part which was fittingly the closer, "The difference between quality and quality effort".

Even though Vellum didn't bring the same aggression to the party, the flow was pretty good. There was parts of his verse where I was like 'mehh' and others where I was like 'yeah here we go'. My point is, it wasn't fluent throughout. He did however have my favourite bars in the battle;

I'm dropping Scriptz quicker than actors with butter fingers.

I'll beat you with one line you know connect four ya?

You couldn't come out on top if your mum gave birth on a handstand.

So here's my conundrum..

ILL had the swagger and a far superior delivery but as he said himself "Bars above everything". I may be missing it, but I didn't hear any real personals from either of them, and Vellum atleast came with some nameplay. Then on the other hand, Vellum dropped the "I'll fuck your Bitch" & "Bury this clown" stuff, which doesn't carry the same weight as ILL's no nonsense beat down.

Fuck it I'm rambling in self debate now. The defining point is.. Vellum had the stand out bars for me even if other bars were hit and miss, where as ILL'S verse as a whole was of a higher quality and didn't let up. So Does stand out bars beat Overall delivery? Not for me.

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Vellum, a battle works by checking in, posted your verses, then waiting for votes. Anything further is not allowed. You submitted your verse, anything further is considered swaying. I know you were upset about him posting past the deadline but rules state (going from memory but I think this is correct) you are entitled up to half the original deadline once the deadline expires before it's considered a no show. I hid the post, let the votes come in as they may.  

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Alright Nigma. The link to my verse above is dead now though so I'm just going to post the link to my verse.

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LOLOLOLOLOLOL
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If you (Vellum) can't supply the original track that people have already voted on this will be closed as a no contest
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Closed, no contest, as the original verse that votes have been placed is unable to be re-posted.
Submitting something for a battle, having votes placed, then submitting something different for the rest of the votes to vote on is stupid and not allowed.  
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