Crew Battles: ILLA vs Jehu [Text]

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^3 haha check his grin an his name
4. i Koed him on our first battle



Boring.... shiney head, Mo'fucka ya flows dead
All im seein' is a BITCH... Must be the Brandy fore-head (haha) 1
 U saying "Sex before Music" So U defo gonna lose this
Je-whoo U sayin' it yaself, U literally 'Fuckin' up ya new shit 2
U a fuckin' amatuer,  Ill damage ya wid Lil' ease
Julio FRESH out the hood sayin' "welcome to the BIG CHEESE"* (owned) 3
Ur not a gangsta and I got the upper Hand to thank ya
Yeah he sick?! From our first battle.. HE terminly Ill wid Cancer 4
Open Mic? Frank White Owned u so fuckin' much
An I aint talkin' bout Football but I kicked him into TOUCH
No wonder u got many losses, ya raps easily broken
U Post 10 raps a week.... an every one of em is OPEN (LOL)
These college Kids i throw the book an book em
An I dont need a shoe deal, u dick my kicks are customs
Nox rode me?? i doubt it every1 knows he's on ya mul-ties
I aint talkin' bout the text too, just ur balls on his front teeth
I see Mo' Fake personals, must be how u herbs play
I coulda gone Elite, So why u lie just to get in sum wordplay?? (lol)
Fake Jigga, Who the fuck u even be nigga??
If u worked at "Toys Are Us" u still couldnt see "Figures" (ged-it)
U crazy.. ur beats are as weak as ya shit clan
An U offering 'Beats' for 'Dough' but u aint even got a 'HIT man' (lmao)*

Jehu

When you write, you're not amazing with lead, u facing your death
I'll put a blade to your skull, like I'm shaving your head
Deny losses I handed, cause you claim I don't own you
If you were really a STARR you wouldn't need to customize your own shoe!

^^opener was aite, a bit fillery. second bar was tight, nice personal.

No shoe deal, just kicks to your face, bleed non-stop
You're in FL cause Nox rode you, nothing new that he's on top
You write wack and still haven't found a flow when you rap it
On msn asking me and O "what rhymes with this?" you a weak faggot

^^haha that was nice.

So bring your fake personals about me getting beat
If LA was down for 7 days you wouldn't be MC of the week
You a net thug, so they will never see you with me
Pay to Fly to NY this summer but get defeated for free

^^hmm decent concepts, just wasnt feelin the delivery.

gangsturr... in Halo's the only way you shot a weapon
Now that it's backwards, did Nox have to let you in to stop your beggin?
You're not the elite, but you have frontin issues
You should rep the US seeing cuz Cuba wanted nothing with you

^^nice personal, wasnt feelin the flow in the last line but the delivery was there.

You're a weak link to crews, Front line has bled quickly
ICE knew that with you he'd catch an L, now his head's itchy
What I'm about to say will make this guy get out the way
If you were any more fake, you would lie about your age!

^^first bar was a bit fillery, second bar carried it home, real club-style battle diss there.

Wait... if you were any faker, you'd be your own jewlery
You ain't a boa, so biting's the only thing this snake can do to me
Your tactics are wack shit... I make the rest know it too

Now I dare you to go beg Chin Check to vote for you...

^^liked the boa line, not heard a bite punch flipped that way before. real good closer props.

Illa

iight lemme break this down

JEHU ~ was a tight verse, some bars dun flow well tho, an a few multis recked tha overall flow of the verse, got some nice punches in thurr tho, an a good few personals

multis - 8
metas - 8
personals - 9
punches - 9
wordplay - 8
structure - 8
flow - 7
enjoyment - 9

overall ~ 66

ILLA ~ erm.... ya flow was well off track ~ an wen ya try an rhyme a word at the end of ya lines ya really gotta make sure they tight as fuck other wise ya just look stoopid......sum punches were iight, an although ya dun feed of jehus verse ya still made a few references which shows lack of imagination and skill

multis - 7
metas - 8
personals - 8
punches - 7
wordplay - 7
structure - 5
flow - 6
enjoyment - 7

overall ~ 55

JEHU ~ 66
ILLA ~ 55

nice battle but jehu walked with this one easy

JEHU GMV

***an wen ya try an rhyme a word at the end of ya lines ya really gotta make sure they tight as fuck other wise ya just look stoopid......***

"These college Kids i throw the book an book em
An I dont need a shoe deal, u dick my kicks are customs"

dawg thats just plain shit........NUFF SAID

Everythin' you went at him with is the same shit that you let happen when it worked in your favour vs me... So I ain't sayin' I wouldn't have bitched at that vote too... but I'm jus' sayin' if you allow it for you, allow it against u, which u have so I'm not bitchin' btw, jus' can't be on about ryders when the same thing worked in ur favour before, I mean Frank got bitched at when he voted against u but here he has come and voted for u and it's fine, and Jehu ain't complainin'... Oh an' the bit in caps I agree with 100%... Anyway whatever... can people like, vote... and vote in Briggz vs Neek too... This post is 100% beef-free for the record, just' sayin' my piece as I always do... peace

Hmmmm, this is a tuf one for me to call...Jehu obviously has more prowess with text battlin but I think a lot of his punches missed, things like the fake personals backfired coz Illa flipped that Ice shit on him, whether or nah illa wudda gah in elite u cant really say cuba wanted nothin wit u then say that i had somethin 2 do wit u the next bar, ino wah u meant but as a rap it is kinda like "huh", i liked the halo punch and the MC of the week punch but that rhymes on MSN punch has been used b4 by Orion so it lessens its strength, last three bars brought it bak tho, good personal disses and stylish, was dope, shoe punch was a gay punch and u gah called on it as well...Illa was basically the same story in essense, start was pretty weak i thought but i suppose average punches are slightly better than missed punches, but then illas more average punches stretched out longer at the start than Jehus, illa was consistantly average for the first 5-6bars while Jehu missed and hit but with varyin effectiveness, like a boxer flayin at the start compared to a boxer takin it easy wit jabs at the start...but Jehu did get punked on a cuple of flips, and like Jehu i thought Illa stepped it up toward the end and surprisingly i thought illa had the best wordplay of the battle wit the toys r us line...wierd how shit flips around

To be honest i was pretty sure this was goin to jehu wen i started votin but wen u look at it the battle really came down to a cuple of key sections and i basically think altho jehu had more high quality punches illa averaged out more but still had the best few punches of the battle at the end, i suppose elementally i cud factor in that Jehu had a better use of multis and better flow than illa but jehus better flow came thru his multis rather than anything else and he also lost wordplay, but then agen i think its wack to rate a battle from 'elements' or breakdowns coz jehu has a more complex/advanced text style than illa but then i thought illa had the hardest punches, even if he had wack shit at the start, so i guess its gotta go to illa for usin his 2nd spit advantage and flippin some of jehus better carved punches and leavin his spit lookin pretty weak at the end

Vote - Illa, gay battle to call

wordplay:illa
personal/punches:illa
flow:illa
multis:who cares but jehu on this one

illa personalls won this battle for me, jehu were gud but i think u could of worked on your lines alot more , maybe this is why u post more open mics den battles now who knows, jus this aint the ols jehu i ave seen type before.

if u want more detailed votin pmk or ask in here jus i cant b arsed doin a tigger thing fuck tht

vote: illstarr

wordplay:illa

personals/punches:jehu

metas:illa

flow:jehu

multis:jehu

both of the verses were good...but i thought jehu had a little bit harder punches and personals...illa's verse was good too...but i thought jehu took it...and this is no dickryding vote...coz i had to read thru the battle 3 times fore i could vote...but props to both of y'all tho.