Open Mic: Illiads - El Diablo

Contractual Hitman - El Diablo

My first murder was at the age of 10
Who knew a single child had the rage of men
It was a flavor I savored & wanted to taste again
I did it as easy as you could make a friend
At 15, I mastered these persuasive threats
Torture tactics to make you pay your debts
With each kill I thought that my hatred left
But no, so I became creative in my ways & specs
Accidents, suicide. Researched how cases rest
Crafted mind control so you follow my verbatim steps
I met a man who seen potential in my basic steps
The CEA of the Illiad offered to date me checks
A contract killer with minimum wages set
Fuck the money, that could've motivated less
Youth in me took the cash for those I laid to rest
I felt disgusted & used like if you get paid for sex
Crooked like how I look at the corpses naked flesh
My name became a myth, first was Blade of Death
Shadow Watcher came next then Razor Edge
I think my favorite reference was Satan's Breath
Didn't care for the publicity but it was making sense
That my legend carries a statement, bet

I start to feel that there's more to my madness
Underpaid for the absorption of sadness
10 grand here, twelve five tops
For this expertise!? This is a portrait I've crafted!
Observe the morbid as classic but normal then tragic
Pregnant mothers, deadend lovers
Undercovers, disgusting husbands
Distant cousins, aunties, uncles
Have fell to the Swordsman of Blackness
The Lord Himself swore He could match it
But... its unappreciated as I lay & form to the mattress
I plot my revenge with a strategic war as a passion
It's a need I need to feed like porn to the masses
I'm torn but deep to my core it's an action
That I have to make my point that's pure & dynamic

...to be continued

I like

First verse is dope in regards of concept. You went with the chronological history on your character. Defo know how demented your character has been for how long. Dope. Technically this is what you do best. Flow, scheme, delivery and vocabulary really hit a dope stride in this. I will have my next piece involving you and interacting with your character. If you want. we jump on a collab. I say i "interview" you for a job opening lol.

Overall - This is classic ILL making shit work

Thanks Dubb, Dizzy & Self!

excuse my noobness. . . i have seen a couple of these Illiad posts and Im guessing that its just a volume of writtens from multiple writers thats segment out from single story???