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PorteX
Standard Member Joined: 18 October 2003 Location: United Kingdom Status: Offline Points: 265 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 5-17-0 Form: Unknown |
Topic: Imoral Posted: 29 October 2003 at 1:03pm |
is it imoral just to follow, things in ya heart like pain an sorrow.
cuz ya never know wot tomorrow, or life will bring. it could end a young g's life in this world of sin, we livin in. the homeless die shiverin, gangs pack beef in the ghettos we livin in. cuz we be driven in to things that be wrong, but nobody realises untill the homie gone. so remain strong, cuz the road to success is so long. one day you could have it all, an the next it be gone. so today i pump these words out ma lungs, so ya'll can see i burn up every track im on. like pac i remain strong, from death he could rise an still be number 1. so remember this when the days seem long. love is true, an homie you just need to hang on! ><PorteX>< |
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KrescentYk
Newbie Joined: 28 October 2003 Location: United States Status: Offline Points: 55 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 1-0-0 Form: W |
Posted: 29 October 2003 at 1:14pm |
Was aiight... the played ghetto topic, but its cool.
Decent. Some attempts at depth. And no, if Pac rose from tha dead, he wouldnt be number 1 |
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Koncept
Newbie Joined: 29 October 2003 Location: United Kingdom Status: Offline Points: 64 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 1-0-0 Form: W |
Posted: 29 October 2003 at 1:34pm |
Pac was dope tho tyk. But no, he wasnt the illest.. def the most iconic tho. This was a boring open mic to read cuz its been done so many times before. get more creative blud. it was quite deep tho. stay up |
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PorteX
Standard Member Joined: 18 October 2003 Location: United Kingdom Status: Offline Points: 265 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 5-17-0 Form: Unknown |
Posted: 29 October 2003 at 2:04pm |
yeah yeah! same old shit jus a different day! pac woz an still is
the illest mother fucka! trus! |
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Senor Perfecto
Veteran 1st Battle Winner! AM I 'ECK Joined: 18 October 2003 Location: Manchester Status: Offline Points: 3272 Crew: XFade: Phoenix Text Rank: #6 Stats: 66-36-2 Form: WLWLWL |
Posted: 29 October 2003 at 5:16pm |
I thought you meant about how he sells better now than when he was alive... Adios... |
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kaygee
Standard Member Joined: 23 October 2003 Location: United Kingdom Status: Offline Points: 342 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 7-15-0 Form: L |
Posted: 31 October 2003 at 9:29pm |
doesnt every 1 sell betta wen they die???
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