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    Posted: 29 October 2003 at 1:03pm
is it imoral just to follow, things in ya heart like pain an sorrow.
cuz ya never know wot tomorrow, or life will bring.
it could end a young g's life in this world of sin, we livin in.
the homeless die shiverin, gangs pack beef in the ghettos we
livin in.
cuz we be driven in to things that be wrong, but nobody
realises untill the homie gone.
so remain strong, cuz the road to success is so long.
one day you could have it all, an the next it be gone.
so today i pump these words out ma lungs, so ya'll can see i
burn up every track im on.
like pac i remain strong, from death he could rise an still be
number 1.
so remember this when the days seem long.
love is true, an homie you just need to hang on!

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 29 October 2003 at 1:14pm
Was aiight... the played ghetto topic, but its cool.
Quote the homeless die shiverin, gangs pack beef in the ghettos we
livin in.

Decent. Some attempts at depth. And no, if Pac rose from tha dead, he wouldnt be number 1

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 29 October 2003 at 1:34pm

Pac was dope tho tyk. But no, he wasnt the illest.. def the most iconic tho. This was a boring open mic to read cuz its been done so many times before. get more creative blud. it was quite deep tho. stay up

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 29 October 2003 at 2:04pm
yeah yeah! same old shit jus a different day! pac woz an still is
the illest mother fucka! trus!
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 29 October 2003 at 5:16pm

I thought you meant about how he sells better now than when he was alive...

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 31 October 2003 at 9:29pm
doesnt every 1 sell betta wen they die???
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