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Lyrical Mind
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Posted: 29 August 2007 at 3:23pm |
thats a better way of lookingat it ...even though its very basic ..its easier to understand ..
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SwordedStylez
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yeah, as i say, i'm gonna add more to it and eventually get into what i like to call compound rhyme schemes (a rhyme scheme WITHIN a rhyme scheme) but hopefully, some newer heads can get an idea how to structure basic rhymes from what i have already.
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Lyrical Mind
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yeah i might try the last one ...might help me ..i like using alot of rhyme... i think remz needs to get up at this ..... lol ( mcchicken and skeleton :D ) im neva gunnna let that go ... !!!!!
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Rameez
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Thanks thats a nice guide...part 2 is spinning my head...
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Yeah LM, You Need To Use This. It Isnt Just Rhyme Scheme Its Structure Too
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Rameez
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Can u also tell me the multi.. by using that A..B...C.. technique
this does not flow man "sittin READY IN A HOOD, grip a MIC IN MY HAND when i FIGHT WITH THE MANS it could NEVER BE ENOUGH" Edited by Rameez - 29 August 2007 at 11:19pm |
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SwordedStylez
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LMFAO - what did i say in the guide? All the textcees who don't rap will try and tell me it don't flow.....
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Lyrical Mind
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lol i know lol
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Nice guide...respect man
And I didn't think Julius Geezer could be topped easily but Beefy McManstick the Hymen Slayer is on another level |
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I Think The Hymen Slayer Kills It, It Should Just Be Beefy McManstick
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LOL, the "AKA" are names i've been given rather than chose for myself :P
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yo whats the most complex style..... would it be like
____a a___a a___b b___b ???? |
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no like cadbdbaca
cadbdbaca
lol.. theres no end to how much you can rhyme.. and complex ain always better.. its very difficult to say what you want to say when you have to rhyme every word.. so theres a choice between rhyme and the actual subject matter. its best to find a balance between the two |
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there isnt a such thing, you style can be as complex as ya want...like this for instance:
Rhyme A...Rhyme A...Rhyme A Rhyme B...Rhyme B...Rhyme A Rhyme A...Rhyme C...Rhyme C Rhyme A...Rhyme C...Rhyme C Rhyme C...Rhyme C...Rhyme B Rhyme B...Rhyme B...Rhyme B Or even this Rhyme A...Rhyme B Rhyme A...Rhyme B Rhyme B...Rhyme A Rhyme B...Rhyme A just depends on what your comfortable with and how well you use ya multis |
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SwordedStylez
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word to that^^^ and yeah i added another section introducing compound schemes. gonna get even more in-depth later on. can't be arsed right now :P
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Rameez
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nice guide...now I'll practice more on the second and third part..
jus a question on this example: 'when i SPIT-HOT, i leave silly KIDS-ROCKEd my QUICK WIT FLIPS LIDS and my glock leaves DICKS-SHOT this SICK DROP, like all the others only SONS-DUDES i RUN'n COME with GUNS'n PUNCH this fucker out with KUNG-FU" ^^^^how come the last word in each line don't rhyme.. like... ________A ________A from ur line I made this so far ____multi____A____A ____A_____A____A This lazy-bad-ass-cat is slow'n fat on my mat the rat liv-in ma hat can beat this kitty in combat Edited by Rameez - 01 September 2007 at 1:37pm |
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Cool guide SS, really informative. Good work learned a few things and more complex schemes.
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SwordedStylez
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No worries bro, glad it helped. This is actually mega old now but when I've cleared some of my backlog of tracks I'ma get on to writing a really comprehensive guide on complex schemes and how to really get the flow to move about/evolve in your verses. It's actually the bit of emceein I enjoy the most (flow) so should be able to go into a lot of detail (maybe not 12,000 words like the audio guide, but possibly I could go 8k haha)
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KwanTem Qaunondrum
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Nice Guide Very informative.
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RealBlitzComet
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Learned quite a few things from this. I really hope you make a more advanced guide on schemes and flow like you mentioned.
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