Open Mic: Inspirational RAP about GOD

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    Posted: 21 September 2014 at 6:31am
Blessed is the person who never places a verdict
Jesus is the jury in this world full of serpents
The only thing for certain is people are far from perfect
but we all keep searchin' for that perfect sense of purpose

Just look beyond the curtains and beyond the living room
just look how we're living and see we're all getting screwed
Darkness always looms behind every godly view
but be ready to spot the truth, their now plotting on our youth

If a man falls down when he climbs in the ring...
He can jump back up and still fight defeat
you have the right to-be ,Mr. Nice and Sweet
But if thats who you are, you might die in these streets

Its the mystery of me, you can try to understand it
unravel the mystery of the man behind the rapper
but you will never know, not a piece or a fraction
not even a fragment of who i am actually

I pray to the lord in the heavens above
have mercy on my soul for the things that ive done
cuz only the lord knows that im misunderstood
half angel, half demon with the bad and the good
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Best piece you have dropped. This was nice. You stayed on content, rhyming was decent and flow was good. Nice job here man.
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thanks bro
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