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    Posted: 31 May 2019 at 5:59pm
Light the flame to the fortune it’s a craft I perfected
It’s icing the cake with the scraps that I’m left with
The height of fame was the torture I hadn’t been sentenced
Lines of fate & hunger strikes my frame famished & friendless
Despite the pain from the corner I’ve been trapped & dependent
Griping the same, lifers to game grabbing for weapons 
Slicing for change, knife to the veins like I ain’t have the attention
Seeking love ‘til the reaper come grasping my legs ‘n
Kicking & screaming, isn’t this dreaming? Dragging to deathbeds
Write my name on the order this wrap with a message

Wait… must’ve forgot…

That I stay strapped, no studs or dykes 
Scuds in flight to take out hubs like a grumpy wife
Relatable warfare…
In your layer swingin’ that jawn like I’m dustin’ mites
One eye closed aimin’ this AR like Buddy Christ
To make a top explode like some bubbly iced 
This that, junkie juice you shoot, in the booth I boot
Kick this habit somethin’ tragic plus it abuse the youth
Make ya moms disappear like she excused the use
‘Specially when you gone & put the you in “poof”
Watch these muhfuckas think & others face screwed with “oofs”
This that backdoor screen, you threw the oop
Unlocked doors, so I ain’t gotta go through the hoops
Socks only, slidin’ on the floor as I scoot in rooms 
No creaks, blown beaks… think I flew the coop 

I’m gone… 
   
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mmm this was nice, the flow was solid throughout plus there was a lot in the
way of content to digest here, that metaphor/simile/anology about husband
and wife was simple but real Ripe, i get the impression that this is acting like
a goodbye text/message (which i hope it isn't) for heads here at LA, I'm just
hopping i've got it misconstrued on reading, as i haven't had much time to
digest it all completely yet, as i've only breezed through it,i'll give it another
whirl when i get home and leave if needs be a more detailed feedback post.
Ripe...peace.
"You need to learn how to make an exit,
before you can dare make an entrance".
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