Open Mic: It's Just Me

Is it wrong for me to say I don’t believe in prayer?- -
Or that someone’s tears ain’t enough for me to care?- -
It seems I bare - An evil flared by a demon’s stare...
That leaves me here - Wishing death than having heathen’s spared- -
I don’t mean to share to leave you people scared- -
Wish you can see I’m speaking weird to teach you there...
Ain’t enough time - I’ve stepped in ready and wrote- -
But steady, my throat couldn’t flow when it was heavy with smoke- -
Getting this whole vibe that I’ll die - Forgetting to grow- -
Attempting to show that one day I’ll be letting it go- -
When I was heading below - Met a kid who said he was dope- -
Regretting the “No” I told him when he was measuring coke- -
Settling close to death - I said I’m better than that- -
Took a pen from it’s cap - My first letter in rap- -
It read - “Fuck the cheddar and cash - Bust the metal in fags”- -
Was headed for that - Aware I can never go back- -
Then the pressure to blast made me a feather to cats- -
Too clever for that - Left most of my competitors cracked- -
Yet I dreaded the fact that there’s others greater than me- -
Basic-ally - I ain’t the greatest emcee- -
Later my dream changed from being hated to making you see...
We all vary but lean paired in this scene of laying deceased- -
I’ve lived the ways of beast - Till I was chased through the streets- -
Facing his heat in my face - Grateful he made his retreat- -
Maybe it’s me - Shameful to be that in the past- -
Still mad at the last - Gal that I had in my grasp- -
Used to follow every fad that was passed- -
A young lad in the back of a crowd known for battle with gats- -
That and the fact that I hadn’t been as bad as the kats- -
Rather I had to attack without a gat in my tasks- -
Sad that my dad’s - Nack for returning in rage is what made me- -
Cause lately the pages I’m making’s full of hatred so greatly...

Seeing things being useless and worthless- -
Using these verses as diversions for soothing these urges...
To bruise when I’m nervous - Looking for merchants...
To move in my purchase for truth or some courage...
To shoot when I’m furnished by this sadness inside- -
The madness resides in the past of my life to damage my mind- -
If I managed to find a chance to revise - I wouldn’t catch it in time...
To grasp and refine the actions defining lack to comply...
With facts the divine master applied in circles we live in- -
Though back in my prime - Asked for a sign urging to give in- -
Didn’t earn shit by living it easy - I seeped through the struggle- -
Reached for the puzzle but pieced it so deep that it crumbled- -
I needn’t the hustle to believe in my troubles- -
Defeated in rumbles - But cease to breathe before my knees hit the rubble- -
When the weed was my cover for stress when it formed- -
Couldn’t even appease with my mother to bless from the Lord- -
Just a mess that was born with no direction to tour- -
Refused correction when scorned as being wretched and wrong- -
But I’m set to mature - A sure thing to all who doubt it- -
I paused from drowning in my sorrows now I’m all about it- -
I walked and founded what I’m missing - The vision is clear- -
The gift to spit with no tears - You witness it here...
But sin reappears in every trace that I’m chasing- -
Stating my place in this pave has greatly faded from praying- -
Saying this ain’t me making you see me being faintly degrading- -
Rather it be the day of my wake to be flaming- -
Taken as dainty - They mocked my place with much heat- -
Ladies hated my face and used to same abrupt speech- -
Couldn’t take a slut’s tease - Used to break a thug’s teeth- -
If I could blaze to one beat - I’d like to say just one thing- -
“Can’t wait till each of us - Is erased incomplete”- -
The earth stays with nothing”...But hey, that’s just me- -

this was a piece i shared before, but the bolded part was newly added some time ago cause i wanted to complete the beat...never posted it here...but i think this is new for swordstylez, whom i wanted to shared this mainly with, just cause it's one of my favz from start to finish...

now THAT is real shit, this was dope man, on the real i can't find a single thing wrong with it. flow, content, rhymes, it's all on point. some of my fave lines:

Sick Man...Like Fatal Said Theres Jus Too Many Quotable Lines

This is the best lyrics I've seen so far.. Looking your battles seen some decent punches.. here you express ur emotions thats like coming deep inside of ya as if your sharing your personal experiences. Really dope...  Also as I start reading 1 of the line that caught my attention was
"It seems I bare - An evil flared by a demon’s stare..."

N shit was fun to read all the way.. kept me entertained...Thats long enough for a track.. Keep it up man superb rap...



Edited by Rameez - 01 November 2007 at 5:11pm

Didn’t earn shit by living it easy - I seeped through the struggle- -
Reached for the puzzle but pieced it so deep that it crumbled- -

Settling close to death - I said I�m better than that- -
Took a pen from it�s cap - My first letter in rap- -
It read - �Fuck the cheddar and cash - Bust the metal in fags�- -
Was headed for that - Aware I can never go back- -
Then the pressure to blast made me a feather to cats- -
Too clever for that - Left most of my competitors cracked- -

^^^this scheme made me raise eyebrows, dope for sure

throughout you held the topic and it was very strong in rhyming. not bad at all, pretty good.