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    Posted: 29 March 2013 at 9:50pm






I turn a guy with dry humour to a drooler, 
Until a stray shot gives you a day off like Ferris Bueller, 
You need a tutor, cos a future don't suit ya, 
Know I root for the dudes that won't merit losers, 
Guys are cocky, but don't say smack to me,
 Lies lead to a Rocky road, i'm talking ASAP, 
Say shit comes free? Jeez, I disagree player, 
Some fakes get cake, always sweet on the top layer, 
No prayer, so I give you Mormon's freedom,  
Divine words, but when sight turns we can't see them,  
I'm stepping on young, throttling the older,  
Ki will smash ranks like Gucci bottling that Soldier, 
Through me, they're now rocking all the colder, 
I do me, writing 'til I get a locked shoulder, 
You'll roll over, any jewelry, they'll be for me, 
 Imprisoned in my vision, that's 20/20 like a JT LP.. 
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Until a stray shot gives you a day off like Ferris Bueller,
 
Ohh shit ha ha that wAS CRAZY KEEKS had some nice shit here brother, but this was not the piece i was looking for, gonna go find it an bump it now!!

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Thanks man, was bumping that film yesterday, but assumed that that play might had been done a bit lol appreciate the feed buddy.
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nice shit keeks, this was hot with the multis and flow while the wordplays were nice too.
overall good job! keep it up.
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Feeling it, this is Old School Keekz. Always heavy on the punchlines and wordplay.
Not as complex as usual but switching shit up is always refreshing
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Originally posted by Kiki Spirez Kiki Spirez wrote:


I turn a guy with dry humour to a drooler, 
Until a stray shot gives you a day off like Ferris Bueller,
>>"until" was the wrong word, I think. should've been 'when', right?
You need a tutor, cos a future don't suit ya, 
Know I root for the dudes that won't merit losers,
Guys are cocky, but don't say smack to me,
 Lies lead to a Rocky road, i'm talking ASAP,
>>lol took awhile to catch "ay ess ay p"
Say shit comes free? Jeez, I disagree player, 
Some fakes get cake, always sweet on the top layer, 
No prayer, so I give you Mormon's freedom,  
Divine words, but when sight turns we can't see them,  
I'm stepping on young, throttling the older,  
Ki will smash ranks like Gucci bottling that Soldier,
>>Smoothest bar
Through me, they're now rocking all the colder, 
I do me, writing 'til I get a locked shoulder, 
You'll roll over, any jewelry, they'll be for me, 
 Imprisoned in my vision, that's 20/20 like a JT LP
>> I missed the refrence but this was pretty cool


cool verse... could definitely feel the steez here.. the scheming was short/ chopped almost like an Azaelia Banks feel to it,which probably sounds weird to ya but it was just all very stacatto. the flex/ punchlines were pretty okay, a little played or at least no mind-blowingly fresh fire concepts. good drop. keep keyin.
far as I know we've been blacklist, for as long as the Earth rotate on a twenty-three degree axis
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Thanks for the feed. 

20/20 is Justin Timberlake's new Album, has that 'Suit and Tie' song on it and that.
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This has that kiki spirez word choice all over it. English style for days..
Hold up.
I'm stepping on young, throttling the older,
Ki will smash ranks like Gucci bottling that Soldier,
Through me, they're now rocking all the colder,
I do me, writing 'til I get a locked shoulder,
You'll roll over, any jewelry, they'll be for me,
Imprisoned in my vision, that's 20/20 like a JT LP..

^ love these bars. Stay up brother!
Imagery so vividly intrinsic you might miss it..
Though you never even had the chance to witness it
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nice schemes man, shit was tight and your flow was on point. 
 
 
fav line:
Say shit comes free? Jeez, I disagree player, 
Some fakes get cake, always sweet on the top layer, 
 
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Damn, I read this before and thought I had fed it? The perils of browsing on the phone I suppose, lol. I agree this is classic Ki style right here. Wordplay is fresh as always, I love that you pride yourself in striving to come up with something unique everytime. Mint drop right here, you already know!
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