Open Mic: KICH first open mic

Hey y'all this is a little something i wanted to share and get your input on just to show you what I got. Here it is.

First off, who's the king of this rap shit?
Send em this rap diss
With a surgeon general warning claim on the package
Cuz I smoke emcees
Kendrick provoke emcees
And hope you see the side of me that wrote this piece
Cuz I'm a - highly touted rhyming mechanic who might be doubted
In a room that's crowded by critics who think hip hop is garbage
But once I harness these inherited through Ebonics
I spit like a dim-witted pot head...highly retarded

Speaking of fly, my level is looking down at the sky
If I were to spit the world would never go dry
Flow so divine
The name is Angel, but I swear I'm far from it
Raw, rugged looking forward to sickening all stomach
I've got an evil twin called the pen with me
Telling me write this homicidal tendencies
Described as biblical entities
Leaving an emcee testing me holier than a reverend be..


Alright that's it! Lemme know what y'all think

I appreciate the feedback Nigma. It's good to be back on a battle site