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    Posted: 30 July 2006 at 10:05pm
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Form: LLWWWW 		Direct Link To This Post Posted: 31 July 2006 at 12:28pm
Checking in.........Soon to be checking out with one plus
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check me in..check dat dude out..
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Although krime is meant to drop first i may not be on to drop as i have work the next few day's so im dropping my verse now

Battle aside...G'd luck Krime

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Time to clean up the krime scene....

Ya see yaself on top, but kay's bout to screw wit ya vision...
Kid's only goona blow cause...
Mackie's like bin laden, he sent ya ass on a suicide mission...
Got no history with the law, bitch can't even spell Krime...
His punches couldnt leave my hair on edge if he'd gel mine...
It's crazy....but in this battle ya puttin ya career at stake cuz....
It feels like haloween the way  im messin with this fake blood....
Like a blind dealer, Scribal bitches gotta research n find lines....
Weak punches are like the news it's prime time when krime grinds...
Krimes a rapper?, plz bitch, you can't flow n it shows....
a gangsta?
Shit I'll grab that blood bandana and blow my nose....
Go ride some more, Krime's no novice with promise....
Im robin upon this, you aint sick, but with that vomit ya lost this...
Ya can't stop this. ima go simple n shoot ya than pop chrys...
Mention a Krime scene...fuck well Kay jus crossed this....
Ya bars are lyrically constipated crazy how ya shit dont flow...
Blood or crip bitch hoe, like cencorship violence, Ya hits wont show..
Kay's punches are like ya number plate, leaving X-ES damage...
Mackie man,,,,why you think the dynasty would reject this bagage?...
Fuck, he aint dropped decent shit, n this'll finish the same...
Now kay's gun finally askin nicely....
....Sit down krime, .there's only space for one Jin in this game...

Edited by Kay B - 02 August 2006 at 6:09pm
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get ready ta get burned bitch.
 
------------- Krime Scene, Do Not Cross Bitch -------------
 
Kay-B, nobody can SAVE-THEE, bitch KNOW-YO-ROLES.
u aint hard, ur soft on the inside, like DONUT-HOLES.

u vs. me?..call dis battle "Tyson plannin Hollyfield's death".
but dis time, imma bite both ya ears off, dat way u'll be SO SO DEAF!!..

u nuthin compared ta me, ma punches GO-DIRECT, ma rhymes FLOW-CORRECT.
unlike u fool, 480 posts on tha site and still aint gettin NO-RESPECT!!..

call me Homer addicted ta lyrics, I cant "HOLD MY TEXT".
Im makin yo career cave in, like PAULA ABDUL'S BREASTS!!..
 
mercy iz sumthin dat aint in on ma vocab, so stop TEASIN-MA-FIST.
didnt u learn anythin from History boi?..Dynasties always CEASE-TA-EXIST!!..

u's just a fake ass snitch, u get slammed mo dan CAR-DOORS.
ma crew'll bury urs way below tha ground, daz tha only way u'll be "HARDCORE"!!..

yo face bluer dan a LOC-MAULED, tha Dream Catcher gave ya a BAD-NIGHT.
forcefully put yo vocal chords in a CHOKEHOLD, now bitch u can really "RAP-TIGHT"!!..

haha, ma style RIPPED-YO-TEXT, now watch as VOTES-RING-ON-ME.
just go ahead and "CLICK-THE-X", coz daz tha only way u'll eva "CLOSE-IN-ON-ME"!!..

------------- Krime Scene, Do Not Cross Bitch -------------
 
uppin..
 
 
 
B ~ E ~ Z


Edited by Krime - 02 August 2006 at 9:44pm
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explanations..
 
Bar 4 ~ Homer cant HOLD HIS LIQUOR coz he's an alcoholic, so i translated dat into a meta and u'll get tha rest..
 
Bar 6 ~ "Hardcore" = my crew burying Dynasty way below tha ground dat dey will hit tha Earth's "core"..get it?
 
 
most of it iz self-explanatory..if u dont undastand a bar and/or a line, just holla..
 
 
 
B ~ E ~ Z
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kay b - good opener, nice play, good flip on the goin' 1st bit... nice... 2nd bar again was a nice play, not much of a punch but flow was nice... 3rd bar was dope, lol, good personal/ punch AND play, flow was nice too... good shit... 4th had nice multi's, but seemed a little forced... still, good play, decent punch... 5th bar lost the flow a little but the punch was more direct so that was cool... was ok... 6th bar was weak... wasnt feelin' it... flow was there but thats it... 7th bar was ok, nothing special... 8th bar, the flow was fucked... first line was played but a good setup line... but flow fucked the delivery on the punch... play was ok... 9th bar, decent punch, direct again, flow was back to good... nothing special tho... lol @ the closer, good job on flow and personal was nice... the pic added flavor, too... overall good verse... started nice, fell off a bit in the middle, then ended on a good, hard note... gj...

krime - opener was ok... the play was basic and spelled out mainly, not direct enough to be taken as much of a punch... flow was ok tho... 2nd bar again had a play, but this 1 coulda been better... 'cept for the fact that holyfield whipped tyson's ass... lol... but the flow again was nice... not direct tho... 3rd bar, the paula abdul's breasts bit was funny, but it was weak in terms of attackin' kay b... ok tho, cuz of the humor... 4th bar was forced... the punchline was cool but the lead up was wack... ok at best... 5th bar, again had a good idea, but seemed forced to me... the lead up should be more relevant to the punchline if you want to word your plays better IMO... the flow was more stretched here as well... 6th bar was wack, wasn't feelin' it... played wordplay to use anyways, and not direct... closer missed completely IMO, because VOTES RING ON ME and CLOSE IN ON ME don't rhyme well enough, for one, and the play was worded horribly, for two... idk... you had good ideas and thoughts, but just didnt attack him enough for my liking...

vote: Kay B, for an all around better verse... gj KB, much better than i expected from you...

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Form: WLWWWW 		Direct Link To This Post Posted: 03 August 2006 at 8:58am
nice battle
 
liked the paula abdul line but kay killed, most of his punches hit while feel short a bit
 
the closer for kay killed it too
 
vote - KayB
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Form: WWWWWL 		Direct Link To This Post Posted: 03 August 2006 at 11:01am
Originally posted by 2smooth 2smooth wrote:

gj KB, much better than i expected from you...


You must think I don't know what I'm doin' when I'm recruitin'. All of 'em can spit that hot shit, they just lazy sometimes.
From a non biased stand point, I'd prefer if iceZ explained his vote better though, 'cus I know I wouldn't like that to count against me in one of my battles...
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Form: WWWWNW 		Direct Link To This Post Posted: 03 August 2006 at 2:11pm
Originally posted by 2smooth 2smooth wrote:

gj KB, much better than i expected from you...

-2s

 
 
i never said anything about your recruitment methods or anything of the sort... i was just going by what i've seen of his previous stuff...
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Form: LLWWWW 		Direct Link To This Post Posted: 03 August 2006 at 6:15pm
Thanks for the Vote 2 and thanks for the prop's it's appreciated

Thanks for the vote IceZ, id appreciate it explained abit if you get the chance just to avoid anyone complaining, thanks
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Form: WLWWWW 		Direct Link To This Post Posted: 04 August 2006 at 2:51am
KRIME
 
u nuthin compared ta me, ma punches GO-DIRECT, ma rhymes FLOW-CORRECT.
unlike u fool, 480 posts on tha site and still aint gettin NO-RESPECT!!..
^nice bar krime flowed nice decent punch
 
call me Homer addicted ta lyrics, I cant "HOLD MY TEXT".
Im makin yo career cave in, like PAULA ABDUL'S BREASTS!!..
 
that was your best i reckon the pic wit it made it hit harder made me laugh
 
 
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KAYB
 
Ya see yaself on top, but kay's bout to screw wit ya vision...
Kid's only goona blow cause...
Mackie's like bin laden, he sent ya ass on a suicide mission
 
^ nice opener the whole bin laden/terroist theme is prolly a bit played now but still hit nice
 
Fuck, he aint dropped decent shit, n this'll finish the same...
Now kay's gun finally askin nicely....
....Sit down krime, .there's only space for one Jin in this game...
that was hot ^ and won it for you
 
 
 
overall kay just hit a little harder than krime , flow vocab from both were nice...but punches win battles and kay just edged in front
 
good battle guys
 
 
vote KayB
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Form: WLWWWW 		Direct Link To This Post Posted: 04 August 2006 at 2:53am
lol just relealised my first attempt at voting didnt even really make sense..heh my bad.
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Form: LLWWWW 		Direct Link To This Post Posted: 04 August 2006 at 4:18am
Thanks IceZ....

2-0 Kay B
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Form: WWWWNW 		Direct Link To This Post Posted: 04 August 2006 at 11:40am

hey, no offense... and i see NOTHING WRONG with that vote at all... just a little bit of info, so that you dont look like a dickryder ICEZ... vote on other peoples battles as well... not just kayB's... prolly be a good idea...

anywho, 2-0 KB uPpIn 4 the Ko...
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Form: WNNWWW 		Direct Link To This Post Posted: 04 August 2006 at 3:10pm
nice battle yall...enjoyed it....-1
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Form: LLWWWW 		Direct Link To This Post Posted: 08 August 2006 at 4:39am
Uppin for the K to the O
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Form: LLWWWW 		Direct Link To This Post Posted: 13 September 2006 at 8:26am
2-0

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Form: LLWWWW 		Direct Link To This Post Posted: 24 September 2006 at 9:13am
So...so i win?
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Form: WWWWWL 		Direct Link To This Post Posted: 29 September 2006 at 8:41am
Yeah... 2-1 The Dynasty... Closed
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