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    Posted: 31 January 2010 at 11:22pm
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 03 February 2010 at 2:12pm
shoulda all be easy to understand, got questions ask...
 
 
You'll say I'm wack, wit no skill, but that part isnt true
Cuz if thats fact why'd u ask me to take charge of ya crew!?
pretended he quit, after he started plenty of shit
He won the first battle... But hasnt done anything since!!
This faggot wants to be a scientist, you nerdy fuck
You cant even get a title on the net, and you're already 30+
punches'll leave this bitch tremblin and panicked
No verses, only writes essays, so he pretends to be spanish!
wastin my time, he tries to drop bombs wit words but...
He's got more links in his verses then fences on the borders
been around a while, but when it comes to rappin he's quit
If LA was a school book, you would be the chapter we skip..
 
 
 
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 03 February 2010 at 8:51pm
Too complex for you to understand... without a question...

You're wack with no skill...  It's true what I said,
Getting sucked off by your crew then claiming you got ahead,
But now you lot are dead...  I mean this lyricist stinks,
I know he's gonna jump ship again the minute his sinks,
I'm the celibate rapper...  I'm sick of fucking with bitches,
If LA was a book... you'd just look at the pictures,
Stop wasting your time...  Don't make me attack you again,
I'll hit you with so many links... you'd think you're battling CHAIN,
I ain't Spanish...  He'll resort to fake personals if I push him,
¿Do we even speak the same language...?  ¿I thought Stalin was Russian...?
I'm thinking how it was odd you left... and now you're a Mod,
Might as well call me Apollo...  I have the power of God...

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 04 February 2010 at 12:55am
Stalin, first bar is cool, second is funny as hell, quite an obvious punch, surprised I've not seen it before, age thing on SP been done before, nice hit though, essay shit is pretty funny, borders bar doesn't rhyme, the punch misses, too.... closer is not bad. Nice verse, flowed well except for that one bar. SP, some nice flips in the middle few bars there, pictures shit was nice, not great, CHAIN punch was nice, russian thing was weak, Closer was a bit self hype, rather than a punch.

A little disappointed in the battle, didn't really see the best of either, SP seemed to drop the humour from his verse, which is what I enjoy most in a battle, and why I enjoy SP's shit, and stalin missed out on some chances to make punches pay. SP really could have made better of the flips, too.

Overall, a real close battle, but I think Stalin' just takes it, with a slightly harder hitting verse.

Vote : Stalin






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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 06 February 2010 at 12:46am
1-0 Stalin, vote up...






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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 06 February 2010 at 12:53am
Not a great battle i expected better....Wasnt really feeling senors verse seemed to concentrate too much on flipping (which i dont think should be allowed btw) and not pull the flips off aswell as id expect he could do, stalin just had the better verse imo mainly punch wise and i just enjoyed it more...So for the better overall verse and more enjoyable read....vote stalin

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 07 February 2010 at 11:54pm
2-0 Stalin, lets get some more votes please.






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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 08 February 2010 at 2:08am
Serious, Kay?
Okay I understand that most don't agree with the flipping rule but don't let it become a bias towards your vote. Anyways, Stalin you had a pretty good verse. The let down were the 4th and 5th bars imo, the essay/spanish concept is very played..I mean i've used it myself countless amounts of times just thinking off the top of my head. The 5th bar isn't really a hit is it? He use's links in his verses, but does that really effect the quality of the verse? I don't think so at all, and if it was more of a pre empted line then it still isn't effective due to Senor not using a single link in his verse lol. Though, besides these two let down's your verse was actually quite clever..I was really feeling the 30+ line and closer..though he flipped the closer on you nicely.
 
Senor - Besides the popular belief of flipping being gay, I think if given the opprotunity like now then you should take it. I mean, this is a tournament..why not take every opprotunity to win? Though, I do think that you flipped to much. You have to incorporate both original punchlines and hard hitting flips if you don't want shit to come across as repetitive. I was really laughing at the Chain and LA/looking at picture bars...great flips. I found they both took away from Stalins original punch and added to your advantage.  You can't have such generic disses in such a short amount of lines, you know this? The celibate line was completely generic, i'm sure you could of though of something more effective.
 
Anyway's, I thought this battle was actually pretty good. It seem's everyone has their battle standards up so much they don't appreciate any of the battles anymore. Stalin was simple and effective at times...Senor flipped most of his verses and used his slick flow as usual. It could go either way, but im going to go with Senor.
 
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 08 February 2010 at 5:15am
stalins punches were better...his verse flowed more
senor alright verse but your 4th and 5th bar really didnt rhyme to me and threw off the flow

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 08 February 2010 at 6:38am
I vote for Stalin....
I felt his aggresion more and a lot of Perfectos verse kinds seemed like Stalins...
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 08 February 2010 at 7:19am
I love the "you're the chapter we skip" line and the "you'd just look at the pictures" counter. Besides that, considering the number of flips in SP's verse, I thought they would be better. Stalin's verse had some jabs, but no real hard punches. SP's second half was a letdown after a pretty good start. Because Stalin had at least a jab in every couplet and SP didn't even try at the end,

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 08 February 2010 at 1:43pm
4-1 Stalin.

Snooz, can you please explain your vote in a little more detail, thank you.






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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 12 February 2010 at 10:40pm
¿Why is $nooz's vote disallowed...?  He said Stalin had the more aggressive verse... and that my verse played off Stalin's...  ¿How much more explained does it have to be...?

Mods should use some discretionary sense when it comes to rules... rather than enforcing them for the sake of it...

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 13 February 2010 at 1:29am
And users should start respecting the mods decisions, rather than arguing them for the sake of it...






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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 13 February 2010 at 8:34am
I liked perfecto's verse more to be honest...
Something about stalin's verse, it just felt sluggish. Perfecto's shit had a more.."fresh rebuttle" type of feel to it.
Flips or not I thought it was better...the chapter line was dope, but the pictures line was doper...granted it is a bit of an advantage to go second and flip, but fuck itt...i still vote perfecto
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 13 February 2010 at 11:26am
And Mods should be consistent with their decisions... rather than trying to be a smart-ass vagina plant for the sake of it...

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 17 February 2010 at 12:25am
Nice battle..

Stalin came tight, good opener followed by some hard hits, first battle winner was funny.. Thought the spanish an' finishing lines where funny.. Good flow an' enjoyable all the way through..

Senor, some good flips.. Dropped a "ahead" line, oh dear.. The look at the pictures line was a dope flip, but the last 3 bars let you down.. CHAIN shit seemed irrelevent unless it ment something else cus' your verse had no links atall.. Russian punch was weak an' the closer was just self hype..

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 17 February 2010 at 12:42am
5-1 stalin wins
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 20 February 2010 at 5:40pm
Stalin progresses.






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