LA MMX: LA MMX Rd 2 - Stalin v Senor Perfecto |
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NepentheZ
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Topic: LA MMX Rd 2 - Stalin v Senor Perfecto Posted: 31 January 2010 at 11:22pm |
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3 Day time limit [Due by 12.01am GMT, Thurs 4th Feb] 6 Bars per emcee First to 5 vote, 3-0 KO. |
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Stalin
Site Moderator Joined: 24 November 2003 Location: United States Status: Offline Points: 2587 Crew: Renegades Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 34-12-2 Form: LNWWLW |
Posted: 03 February 2010 at 2:12pm |
shoulda all be easy to understand, got questions ask...
You'll say I'm wack, wit no skill, but that part isnt true
Cuz if thats fact why'd u ask me to take charge of ya crew!? pretended he quit, after he started plenty of shit He won the first battle... But hasnt done anything since!! This faggot wants to be a scientist, you nerdy fuck You cant even get a title on the net, and you're already 30+ punches'll leave this bitch tremblin and panicked No verses, only writes essays, so he pretends to be spanish! wastin my time, he tries to drop bombs wit words but... He's got more links in his verses then fences on the borders been around a while, but when it comes to rappin he's quit If LA was a school book, you would be the chapter we skip.. |
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Senor Perfecto
Veteran 1st Battle Winner! AM I 'ECK Joined: 18 October 2003 Location: Manchester Status: Offline Points: 3272 Crew: XFade: Phoenix Text Rank: #6 Stats: 66-36-2 Form: WLWLWL |
Posted: 03 February 2010 at 8:51pm |
Too complex for you to understand... without a question...
You're wack with no skill... It's true what I said, Getting sucked off by your crew then claiming you got ahead, But now you lot are dead... I mean this lyricist stinks, I know he's gonna jump ship again the minute his sinks, I'm the celibate rapper... I'm sick of fucking with bitches, If LA was a book... you'd just look at the pictures, Stop wasting your time... Don't make me attack you again, I'll hit you with so many links... you'd think you're battling CHAIN, I ain't Spanish... He'll resort to fake personals if I push him, ¿Do we even speak the same language...? ¿I thought Stalin was Russian...? I'm thinking how it was odd you left... and now you're a Mod, Might as well call me Apollo... I have the power of God... Adios... |
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NepentheZ
Superior Member ... { 26 } ... Joined: 11 October 2004 Location: Yea..Cake. Man Status: Offline Points: 7727 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 40-32-1 Form: WWLWLW |
Posted: 04 February 2010 at 12:55am |
Stalin, first bar is cool, second is funny as hell, quite an obvious punch, surprised I've not seen it before, age thing on SP been done before, nice hit though, essay shit is pretty funny, borders bar doesn't rhyme, the punch misses, too.... closer is not bad. Nice verse, flowed well except for that one bar. SP, some nice flips in the middle few bars there, pictures shit was nice, not great, CHAIN punch was nice, russian thing was weak, Closer was a bit self hype, rather than a punch.
A little disappointed in the battle, didn't really see the best of either, SP seemed to drop the humour from his verse, which is what I enjoy most in a battle, and why I enjoy SP's shit, and stalin missed out on some chances to make punches pay. SP really could have made better of the flips, too. Overall, a real close battle, but I think Stalin' just takes it, with a slightly harder hitting verse. Vote : Stalin |
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NepentheZ
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Posted: 06 February 2010 at 12:46am |
1-0 Stalin, vote up...
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Kay B
Superior Member Joined: 28 June 2005 Location: Watford Status: Offline Points: 9428 Crew: Lyricist Inc. Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 58-32-0 Form: LLWWWW |
Posted: 06 February 2010 at 12:53am |
Not a great battle i expected better....Wasnt really feeling senors verse seemed to concentrate too much on flipping (which i dont think should be allowed btw) and not pull the flips off aswell as id expect he could do, stalin just had the better verse imo mainly punch wise and i just enjoyed it more...So for the better overall verse and more enjoyable read....vote stalin
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NepentheZ
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Posted: 07 February 2010 at 11:54pm |
2-0 Stalin, lets get some more votes please.
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DressToKill
Superior Member Joined: 27 June 2006 Location: Canada,New Brunswick Status: Offline Points: 6872 Crew: Lyricist Inc. Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 78-62-0 Form: LLWWWL |
Posted: 08 February 2010 at 2:08am |
Serious, Kay?
Okay I understand that most don't agree with the flipping rule but don't let it become a bias towards your vote. Anyways, Stalin you had a pretty good verse. The let down were the 4th and 5th bars imo, the essay/spanish concept is very played..I mean i've used it myself countless amounts of times just thinking off the top of my head. The 5th bar isn't really a hit is it? He use's links in his verses, but does that really effect the quality of the verse? I don't think so at all, and if it was more of a pre empted line then it still isn't effective due to Senor not using a single link in his verse lol. Though, besides these two let down's your verse was actually quite clever..I was really feeling the 30+ line and closer..though he flipped the closer on you nicely.
Senor - Besides the popular belief of flipping being gay, I think if given the opprotunity like now then you should take it. I mean, this is a tournament..why not take every opprotunity to win? Though, I do think that you flipped to much. You have to incorporate both original punchlines and hard hitting flips if you don't want shit to come across as repetitive. I was really laughing at the Chain and LA/looking at picture bars...great flips. I found they both took away from Stalins original punch and added to your advantage. You can't have such generic disses in such a short amount of lines, you know this? The celibate line was completely generic, i'm sure you could of though of something more effective.
Anyway's, I thought this battle was actually pretty good. It seem's everyone has their battle standards up so much they don't appreciate any of the battles anymore. Stalin was simple and effective at times...Senor flipped most of his verses and used his slick flow as usual. It could go either way, but im going to go with Senor.
Vote : Senor
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The original comeback kid
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Alcatraz
Standard Member Joined: 20 December 2009 Location: Maryland Status: Offline Points: 231 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 3-2-1 Form: LWWLWN |
Posted: 08 February 2010 at 5:15am |
stalins punches were better...his verse flowed more
senor alright verse but your 4th and 5th bar really didnt rhyme to me and threw off the flow Stalin GMV
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$n00z
Standard Member Joined: 06 February 2010 Location: NC Status: Offline Points: 1267 Crew: The Dynasty Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 11-7-0 Form: WWLWWL |
Posted: 08 February 2010 at 6:38am |
I vote for Stalin....
I felt his aggresion more and a lot of Perfectos verse kinds seemed like Stalins...
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U already know...
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King Jehu
Veteran Joined: 23 January 2004 Status: Offline Points: 6088 Crew: Renegades Text Rank: #4 Stats: 54-18-1 Form: WLWWWL |
Posted: 08 February 2010 at 7:19am |
I love the "you're the chapter we skip" line and the "you'd just look at the pictures" counter. Besides that, considering the number of flips in SP's verse, I thought they would be better. Stalin's verse had some jabs, but no real hard punches. SP's second half was a letdown after a pretty good start. Because Stalin had at least a jab in every couplet and SP didn't even try at the end,
Vote: Stalin
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Insert something rappy here
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NepentheZ
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Posted: 08 February 2010 at 1:43pm |
4-1 Stalin.
Snooz, can you please explain your vote in a little more detail, thank you. |
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Senor Perfecto
Veteran 1st Battle Winner! AM I 'ECK Joined: 18 October 2003 Location: Manchester Status: Offline Points: 3272 Crew: XFade: Phoenix Text Rank: #6 Stats: 66-36-2 Form: WLWLWL |
Posted: 12 February 2010 at 10:40pm |
¿Why is $nooz's vote disallowed...? He said Stalin had the more aggressive verse... and that my verse played off Stalin's... ¿How much more explained does it have to be...?
Mods should use some discretionary sense when it comes to rules... rather than enforcing them for the sake of it... Adios... |
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NepentheZ
Superior Member ... { 26 } ... Joined: 11 October 2004 Location: Yea..Cake. Man Status: Offline Points: 7727 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 40-32-1 Form: WWLWLW |
Posted: 13 February 2010 at 1:29am |
And users should start respecting the mods decisions, rather than arguing them for the sake of it...
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SageOne
Standard Member Joined: 12 June 2006 Location: At Your House Status: Offline Points: 2976 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 34-13-2 Form: WLWLLL |
Posted: 13 February 2010 at 8:34am |
I liked perfecto's verse more to be honest...
Something about stalin's verse, it just felt sluggish. Perfecto's shit had a more.."fresh rebuttle" type of feel to it. Flips or not I thought it was better...the chapter line was dope, but the pictures line was doper...granted it is a bit of an advantage to go second and flip, but fuck itt...i still vote perfecto
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Senor Perfecto
Veteran 1st Battle Winner! AM I 'ECK Joined: 18 October 2003 Location: Manchester Status: Offline Points: 3272 Crew: XFade: Phoenix Text Rank: #6 Stats: 66-36-2 Form: WLWLWL |
Posted: 13 February 2010 at 11:26am |
And Mods should be consistent with their decisions... rather than trying to be a smart-ass vagina plant for the sake of it...
Adios... |
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Cuba
Senior Moderator Legendary Assassin Joined: 14 June 2004 Location: England Status: Offline Points: 12327 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 47-22-0 Form: WWWWLW |
Posted: 13 February 2010 at 12:01pm |
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Junior Shade
Superior Member Aka UnaBomber Joined: 07 June 2005 Location: UK Status: Offline Points: 5015 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 55-14-6 Form: LWWWLW |
Posted: 17 February 2010 at 12:25am |
Nice battle..
Stalin came tight, good opener followed by some hard hits, first battle winner was funny.. Thought the spanish an' finishing lines where funny.. Good flow an' enjoyable all the way through.. Senor, some good flips.. Dropped a "ahead" line, oh dear.. The look at the pictures line was a dope flip, but the last 3 bars let you down.. CHAIN shit seemed irrelevent unless it ment something else cus' your verse had no links atall.. Russian punch was weak an' the closer was just self hype.. Vote.. Stalin.. |
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Kay B
Superior Member Joined: 28 June 2005 Location: Watford Status: Offline Points: 9428 Crew: Lyricist Inc. Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 58-32-0 Form: LLWWWW |
Posted: 17 February 2010 at 12:42am |
5-1 stalin wins
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NepentheZ
Superior Member ... { 26 } ... Joined: 11 October 2004 Location: Yea..Cake. Man Status: Offline Points: 7727 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 40-32-1 Form: WWLWLW |
Posted: 20 February 2010 at 5:40pm |
Stalin progresses.
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