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    Posted: 27 January 2010 at 3:35pm
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 29 January 2010 at 4:57pm

i dont wanna battle you scotty,it doesnt make me look big!
cos its true wen i compare ya verses to "wack" like ya tourny sigs!*
fuck it ban me,brand me,Banned like rameez an mackie
you like a dog with a muzzle,its clear yu cant attack me!
'csi' ya fav programme i believe thats Calm sexual intercourse?*
you so soft,its nuttin for me to be palm fuckin a blinkered horse!
i say shyt wit no remorse...,an im showing whats 'right'
no1 respects you,....ya tha most hated person on ya 'OWN' site,
retaliation is strong,i expect you to fight back
but dnt go rameez an bite shyt from ya bessie mates track!*(ILLA) 

BAN ME HAHA ;)

*scotty sed if no1 makes sigs ya will have to use his basic wack ones
*csi jus a play on words
*ILLSTARRR an Scotty are 'bessie' mates an i battled ILLA
 maybe they swap notes for verses too,i mean ILLA found my gals name...;)



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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 30 January 2010 at 3:55pm
* Dudes a window cleaner, if ya dont get it, seek help

You dont wanna take on S2H, that even you confirm
cose it'll end in embarresment like ya got hit by The Worm
Jumpin on Cals dick, hopin the juices will stick
to boost ya talent quick an give ya career a lil kick
Obsessed with a Ban, you got somethin to admit?
Id think you bit, if it wasnt for that wack shit
I dont need help from my bessie to beat this weak clown
Cose ya lifes lookin bleak when ya cant even take a Geek down

you can hear the crowd cheer, the out come is clear
Rap find a new career, you aint climbin the ladder here! *


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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 30 January 2010 at 4:03pm
Hahaha, you know what, this is a close battle..!!

Rap.. some expos, really not needed. the CSI one for example, yeah, we get it, haha. Not a bad verse, really. You've attempted disses in each bar, most of them missed. Working the ban / ram / mackie shit a bit too much for my liking. the CSI play on words was awful. Scotty, impressive, all things considered. I genuinely lolled at the opener and the closer. Both were nice bars, the penultimate bar was good too, and flowed remarkably well, for someone who doesn't battle. 2 bars in the middle were pretty shit.

Over all, you know, Scotty just edges this. His 1st, 4th and 5th bars were pretty good. rap, although tried to come correct, just seemed to be throwing big hay makers, but hitting thin air with them. The verse seems rushed, and the punches aren't as good as scottys.

Scotty_32 GMV.






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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 30 January 2010 at 5:34pm
lol alright drop Scotty i never read nuttin of yurs before but yea was 'aite' although mine aint all that either uppin for votes 
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 30 January 2010 at 7:35pm

scotty just dropped verse of the tourney lol!!(well, comparatively).. first one ive been impressed with..

rapdisup.. opener was pretty funny, but needs to be reworded.. muzzle been done before, not bad idea, but not direct enough.. blinkered ass is just no.... not a good hit.. own site is a solid hit, but closer rounded it off weakly.. need to go for the throat, clever personal punches and plays.. 

scotty.. impressed in a word.. opener was funny, if a little indirect.. cals dick line made me lol, but its not very good lol, and the punch itself was weak.. next line was funny shit too.. wack shit had me laughin too, 2nd to last is okay.... not bad.. and the closer itself was funny too, it definately needed the expo but it hit.. 

scotty came clean... solid hits, funny personals.. good shit... 

vote scott... (you'll need to cut out some of the misses in your verses, also work on having less obvious mulits and coming more direct /personal.. and you could go pretty far (if you advance this round))
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 30 January 2010 at 8:02pm
Vote - Scotty

I thought Rap did alright with his verse, you had some good personal punches...opener was cool, closer was cool, second last punch was a little simple but cool...the CSI was a reach, I thought it was weak, horse was weak too...muzzle was very simple, just a minor jab...like I said, it was ok...you maybe didn't anticipate that Scotty was going to drop a decent verse...

Which he did, first two punches were ok, decent wording but nothing too heavy...then I thought the rest of the verse was solid punches...wack punch was quality, like how you set it up with the opener and was a good flip (not sure you're allowed to do that, default rules?)...again with the filler on the next line, was text book good flip and self-deprecating too, which was nice...good punch...kind of like a reverse one-upmanship punch, nice...closer was a nice punch and a decent personal

So yeah, Scotty simply hit harder in his verse and didn't have any misses...which Rap did...harder punches, more consistent = vote for Scotty
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 30 January 2010 at 8:09pm
Hahahahahahahaha... my man.
. . . Now who said they fuckin' with me?
They just said that FUCKIN' with me
They didn't mean it
Nah . . .
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 30 January 2010 at 8:43pm
Scotty asked me earlier if flips were allowed. I said no, because its default rules. He then pointed out to me, that it says flips ARE allowed, in default rules :)
 
Not sure how long its been like that though. ;)






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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 30 January 2010 at 8:45pm
Yeah... Me and scotty had that convo too.. I swore they werent allowed, but I couldve been thinkin of crew votes
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 30 January 2010 at 8:46pm
its always been like that.
Maybe people get it mixed up with Crew Votes?

Anyway, cool battle - yay my first Round 2
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 30 January 2010 at 8:54pm
lol flips or no flips who cares???....  lol gud battle Scotty now its over i can stop with tha swaying lol an also wheres my 50quid and my veteran status? that i was promised Wink lol jokes na man i underestermated ya an to think you sly dog ya asked me wat i did for work haha i trusted ya its all love man good luck in round 2!

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 30 January 2010 at 9:08pm
Originally posted by rapdisup rapdisup wrote:

 sly dog ya asked me wat i did for work haha i trusted ya

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 30 January 2010 at 9:08pm
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