Crew Battles: Legal Eyes -V- Noxious |
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Noxious
Superior Member Joined: 29 January 2004 Location: United Kingdom Status: Offline Points: 4167 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 63-59-3 Form: NWLWLW |
Topic: Legal Eyes -V- Noxious Posted: 28 August 2005 at 2:35pm |
5 Bars Per Emcee |
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Legal EyeZ
Groupie Joined: 01 July 2005 Location: United Kingdom Status: Offline Points: 76 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 1-1-0 Form: WL |
Posted: 28 August 2005 at 4:25pm |
Aight Check In...
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Noxious
Superior Member Joined: 29 January 2004 Location: United Kingdom Status: Offline Points: 4167 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 63-59-3 Form: NWLWLW |
Posted: 31 August 2005 at 6:58pm |
Yu Step To my Dudes, yu'll get Left Wet Again...
An' what kinda Faggot Reps His Net Crew On Msn..!! Yu'll 'Scramble like Eggs' when the Grey Thing-a Seen Yu.. An' Yu couldnt 'BEAT' SHIT! yall dudes got 8 Wins Between Yu...!! Yeah You a 'Close' Clique, buh All-a Liars.. Buh its good cuz all yall will 'Blow Up' from the Mortar Fire...!!! I'll Torch an' Fry Ya.. Scorch this Liar, you dont Jump Cats..! Cuz Yu a FOOL... an' yu felt Ill gettin told yu Nice... 5 Months Back...!!* Im on anotha Level, yours i been Past, B.. An' Legalise/Legal Eyes Dope? nah its styll Class C...!! Whew * - Its sept 1st... count back 5 months... |
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Legal EyeZ
Groupie Joined: 01 July 2005 Location: United Kingdom Status: Offline Points: 76 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 1-1-0 Form: WL |
Posted: 31 August 2005 at 6:59pm |
Ayo...
-Blessed-Wit-Facts-....Bodied In a -Coffin-Then-Prick-... Cause Your -Dressin-Black-...And I Aint Talkin -Gothic-Or-Shit-(*) Ya Fearless-Right?, I Aint a Zulu, Chuck a -Spear-Through-Lives-... 58 Losses?, Thats a Record BEYOND the Peerless-Heightz...aha Learn A -Lesson-N-Fast-...Grab The -Wessun-N-Blast-.... Typical School Kid, Thinks He Sick.. N Gotta -Obsession-Wiv-Cass-...(*) pH, Victorious, Takin It Wiv E'z, As We Stomp-Ya-Members...(*) Startin To Romp-Wiv-Gender...How The Fuck You Get Beat...In Every Comp-You-Enter... Punches, Aimed At Ya -Kidneys-Then-Ya-Face-...Smashed Ya Chest Hit Ya Ribs-N-Then-They-Break... Illa Owned You, The Reason You Left The FL, And You Aint EVER Visited-The-States...(*) * Explanations * His Msn Display Picture AND Profile Pic, Are Both Of Cassidy... Takin Is Easy, E'z Are Pills, E Also Stands For Entourage... Was Leader Of Front Line, But Illa Made Him leave, FL is short for Florida, Kid Thinks Hes American... Dudes The Blackest White Kid I Know, With His NBA Hats....Ahaa! |
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-Orion-
Veteran Joined: 08 April 2004 Location: DisturbinLondon Status: Offline Points: 9598 Crew: Renegades Text Rank: #1 Stats: 90-4-1 Form: WWWWNW |
Posted: 31 August 2005 at 7:09pm |
Nox... This was kinda bad, 8 wins and class C shit is nice, 5 months ago is eh, mortar is eh but you switched the rhymes up for that bit, felt the scheme, flow was OK... verse was OK, personal, kinda hard hittin, kinda funny... enough of everything I guess, then I dunno how good this Legal dude is... Legal... Your flow wasn't consistent enough, your shit had no cohesion, you just wrote lines in 2s... shit wasn't a verse it was 5 punches with 5 setups... I hate that shit... Good grasp of rhymes tho not always used to full potential, no transitional rhymes, not enough internal rhyme (same goes for Nox on that)... punchlines wise... Opener is a good concept... like he uses Cassidy shit, but u didn't work it very nice... he doesn't dress like Cass, he uses Cass as a pic on the net... so u could say he fronts like Cass... but I guess then u lose ur wordplay but THAT is what is key... if your content doesn't actually make sense relevantly then the wordplay is useless... you overdid it re-using the Cass concept too, with no real impact in the punch... comp u enter shit was kinda filler and in short battles u gotta come with the constant hits really... closer was just all over the place... what the hell happened to the flow is anyone's guess, the FL concept was worded so badly... and ILLA didn't make him leave, he left himself, lmao I guess it goes to Nox for more cohesion/flow... both ya punches sucked VOTE: Nox |
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They just said that FUCKIN' with me They didn't mean it Nah . . . |
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Conwell
Groupie Joined: 21 August 2005 Location: United States Status: Offline Points: 46 |
Posted: 31 August 2005 at 7:25pm |
i thought that nox won this battle because
ps: legal fuck this dude up on the rebound for me |
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Noxious
Superior Member Joined: 29 January 2004 Location: United Kingdom Status: Offline Points: 4167 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 63-59-3 Form: NWLWLW |
Posted: 31 August 2005 at 7:29pm |
^ 2 - 0
Uppin' KO... |
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BRIGGZY
Standard Member Joined: 16 July 2004 Location: UK Status: Offline Points: 1617 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 9-2-0 Form: WWWWWW |
Posted: 31 August 2005 at 8:31pm |
Battle Was Cool..
Vote-NOX.. |
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