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    Posted: 28 August 2005 at 2:35pm

5 Bars Per Emcee
No Bitin, Recyclin, Feedin
Due Wednesday NO EXTENSIONS
All Verses Posted As ONE Post per team
No Swaying The Votes...
And 1 Free Post per Person...Keep The Bitchin To a Minimal...
Peerless Heighs Spit First...



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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 28 August 2005 at 4:25pm
Aight Check In...
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 31 August 2005 at 6:58pm
Yu Step To my Dudes, yu'll get Left Wet Again...
An' what kinda Faggot Reps His Net Crew On Msn..!!
Yu'll 'Scramble like Eggs' when the Grey Thing-a Seen Yu..
An' Yu couldnt 'BEAT' SHIT! yall dudes got 8 Wins Between Yu...!!
Yeah You a 'Close' Clique, buh All-a Liars..
Buh its good cuz all yall will 'Blow Up' from the Mortar Fire...!!!
I'll Torch an' Fry Ya.. Scorch this Liar, you dont Jump Cats..!
Cuz Yu a FOOL... an' yu felt Ill gettin told yu Nice... 5 Months Back...!!*
Im on anotha Level, yours i been Past, B..
An' Legalise/Legal Eyes Dope? nah its styll Class C...!! Whew

* - Its sept 1st... count back 5 months...


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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 31 August 2005 at 6:59pm
Ayo...

-Blessed-Wit-Facts-....Bodied In a -Coffin-Then-Prick-...
Cause Your -Dressin-Black-...And I Aint Talkin -Gothic-Or-Shit-(*)


Ya Fearless-Right?, I Aint a Zulu, Chuck a -Spear-Through-Lives-...
58 Losses?, Thats a Record BEYOND the Peerless-Heightz...aha


Learn A -Lesson-N-Fast-...Grab The -Wessun-N-Blast-....
Typical School Kid, Thinks He Sick.. N Gotta -Obsession-Wiv-Cass-...(*)


pH, Victorious, Takin It Wiv E'z, As We Stomp-Ya-Members...(*)
Startin To Romp-Wiv-Gender...How The Fuck You Get Beat...In Every Comp-You-Enter...

Punches, Aimed At Ya -Kidneys-Then-Ya-Face-...Smashed Ya Chest Hit Ya Ribs-N-Then-They-Break...
Illa Owned You, The Reason You Left The FL, And You Aint EVER Visited-The-States...(*)



* Explanations *
His Msn Display Picture AND Profile Pic, Are Both Of Cassidy...
Takin Is Easy, E'z Are Pills, E Also Stands For Entourage...
Was Leader Of Front Line, But Illa Made Him leave, FL is short for Florida, Kid Thinks Hes American...
Dudes The Blackest White Kid I Know, With His NBA Hats....Ahaa!
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 31 August 2005 at 7:09pm

Nox... This was kinda bad, 8 wins and class C shit is nice, 5 months ago is eh, mortar is eh but you switched the rhymes up for that bit, felt the scheme, flow was OK... verse was OK, personal, kinda hard hittin, kinda funny... enough of everything I guess, then I dunno how good this Legal dude is...

Legal... Your flow wasn't consistent enough, your shit had no cohesion, you just wrote lines in 2s... shit wasn't a verse it was 5 punches with 5 setups... I hate that shit... Good grasp of rhymes tho not always used to full potential, no transitional rhymes, not enough internal rhyme (same goes for Nox on that)... punchlines wise... Opener is a good concept... like he uses Cassidy shit, but u didn't work it very nice... he doesn't dress like Cass, he uses Cass as a pic on the net... so u could say he fronts like Cass... but I guess then u lose ur wordplay but THAT is what is key... if your content doesn't actually make sense relevantly then the wordplay is useless... you overdid it re-using the Cass concept too, with no real impact in the punch... comp u enter shit was kinda filler and in short battles u gotta come with the constant hits really... closer was just all over the place... what the hell happened to the flow is anyone's guess, the FL concept was worded so badly... and ILLA didn't make him leave, he left himself, lmao

I guess it goes to Nox for more cohesion/flow... both ya punches sucked

VOTE: Nox

. . . Now who said they fuckin' with me?
They just said that FUCKIN' with me
They didn't mean it
Nah . . .
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 31 August 2005 at 7:25pm

i thought that nox won this battle because

  • legalize, instead of worrying about the punch or diss, worried a little too much on the rhyme scheme. i know Legal is the better emcee but in this instance Nox won with his direct approach that didnt warrant an explanation

 

ps: legal fuck this dude up on the rebound for me 

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 31 August 2005 at 7:29pm
^ 2 - 0

Uppin' KO...


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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 31 August 2005 at 8:31pm

Battle Was Cool..


Nox- Damn man, Last 2 verses u dropped was lackin ur Skill man...This was pritty poor..Flow was Cool kept it consistant...Punchlines were Kinda Weak tho..the 8 wins shit was pritty cool tho...Same with the Weed shit...Your Verse was Ok at best seen u spit far better tho man.

Legal- First time ive seen u spit..Shit was pritty cool...Punchlines were ok..U had the right idea's...Personals were pritty decent...Multis were cool..The Verse lacked sumthin tho an i have no idea what...The flow wasnt to Consistant tho..Kept Strecthin then going short...

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Flow-Nox
Punch-Nox
Personal-Legal
Creative-Nox
Fillers-Legal
Multis-Legal
Wordplay/Metz-Nox

Vote-NOX..

Just for the Record lol...Noxious Left FL because he didnt like what illa was doing so basically he left because of Illa..But thats Past lol 3-0 Ko for NOX

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