Open Mic: Luciferian Oath

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    Posted: 20 October 2018 at 10:04am
Imma demon imma a beast
I'mma feign for leavin' em deceased
I'mma soul snatchin thief that visits in your sleep
I'mma snake who needs to eat
Appetite in need of meat, the Carnage feels so sweet
Fatalities for those who don't believe
You resemble me, might walk past me in the streets
My disguise is so discreet
My victims, "condem them" Seoul is where I send them!
Christ tried to mend them
But I lured then tempted till it was to late for redemption
Another victory for this dark lord!
Humans keep begging me for encore's
So i make my demons all sound off
Send them to give the world what they asked for
Swarming like task force
Rain evil in down pours
These spirits all at war
I'mma take this Earth over like Castro
I must be an asshole who set the mark of the beast in place
A 666 placed in the middle of your face
What can I say, I'm the fucking Messiah for "Christ's Sake"
False prophet? Currently forlorn
An evil being dorment till I'm transformed to a war lord
Sneak attack like this prophecy is written in Morse code
I live in the North Pole cause I'm ruthless & stone cold
Eat your heart and severe your torso
Shit turns me on like watching some porno.....
Canable tendencies.. don't know whats gotten into me ?
I've just been evil for centuries
I'mma satanic entity here to forsake all your sanity
Possession of families since our lord ain't savin' me
Make em' think salvation is make believe
Then they all come straight to me
I'm in hell and I'm sitting pretty
Fuck what God thinks fitting I'm In love with living shity
I feel no pity so lustful that it's sicknening
Good hearts sicken me
Chaos my child that didn't get no chrisenting
Content with the date that God has given me so wait and see



NUMBER 1 FEMALE MC TILL THE DEATH OF ME
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This is awesome.
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Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote spume corrupt Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 18 July 2020 at 10:50pm
First three lines and I was hooked
You brought this from the inside the zone
Very crisp,easy flow some of the best writing I seen you do Ash
Kinda wish you had of come with a little bit white rabbit conspiracy theories and tied the title in a bit better
Anyway loved the read keep doing you

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Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote Objective Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 03 August 2020 at 3:36am
Dope piece. Slight fillers here and there but that's kinda expected from pieces like these.

False prophet? Currently forlorn
An evil being dorment till I'm transformed to a war lord
Sneak attack like this prophecy is written in Morse code
I live in the North Pole cause I'm ruthless & stone cold
^These 4 bars were insane. My fav in your piece for sure.

Definitely a good read, keep writing.
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