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Sammy
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Posted: 18 February 2019 at 7:45pm |
https://soundcloud.com/user-904165624/mars-and-venus-sammy-ft-essence Verse 1 [Sammy] I sip a green tea watching green sleeves nuthin heard past the parks and when words fail it’s my deepest belief that history will put it together so...let it be... but don’t forget to calculate the odds and ends wind speed from all direction and that’s perfection posed in passive aggression verse 2 [Sammy] goaded til the emotions are faded cause I don’t need u anyway it’s not the speech or face but the routine of the days Verse 3 [Essence1] I guess it's time for me to admit my mistakes Instead of placing the blame For what happened I'd be lying if I said, I never thought we could've lasted I imagine What I could've done Although I asked it You were done So were my chances huh And nothing beats the feeling you get When you think something's up And it's screaming in your head and gut When I brought it up Your body didn't match your words And what hurts, is you were the first to have enough and uh, I get it I was into your friend Writing letters Acting clever, and placed you second Thought what we had was perfected Like the music improvised But your eyes knew different And it was me who lied But At the end it was me who tried When you decided to move on And string me along But treated me like a friend I knew that something was off And I couldn't pretend But who what we have until it's gone Now the nights grow cold And I think I know Why roses have thorns Cause something so beautiful Is vulnerable at most I chose to let you go Cause I was told If you love something, set it free If it comes back, you will know Yo, so much for the goal we set up Of having a home Like you, I was fed up And I'm better off alone But the truth is I know what I have Thank god that you're gone Edited by Sammy - 19 February 2019 at 5:49pm |
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Dntplywelwitothers
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This is 100% dope, both verses were delivered amazingly...
Sammy always been a fan of your style of writing, and you have a super chill delivery that captures the emotion in your words, the beat compliments your standout flow which seemlessly pours through the speaker with the confident candence that I think is your signature. Essence, also super smooth delivery, writing collaborated perfectly with sammy's when I first heard some of your other drops ...one of the things I thought was that you two would make a dope track... you both I wasn't wrong, you both have very mellifluous voices ....and it sets the tone for this track, along with flow and content it was enjoyable to listen to. |
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Sammy
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ay bro really appreciate the word! I'll return favor as soon as you post something up ha (nah forrealz tho, post something u talented muhfucka!)
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Essence1
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hey! thanks for listening, I appreciate the feedback. Truly honored to do this collab with Sammy as I really enjoy his style/lyricism, it was really a pleasure since for me, the process was so organic based on the points you mentioned.
I look forward to hearing your music! |
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rhetorical
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Sammy pumping out some audios recently hahah .... your voice fits right into this beat bro. Top notch lyrics as usual, clean flow... this is good stuff fam. Second verse coming in....you’re carrying that same cadence well, ur in the pocket with this third verse coming in. Good lyrics, I might say she don’t sound 100 percent confident on this though. Not horrible, just a bit of a shakey delivery. Otherwise, good lyrics
This collab had a nice little story going on, lyrically dope ...: I enjoyed it fam. I think Essence just needs to be a little more confident in delivery but that’s a minor critique... good work |
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Essence1
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Thanks for the feedback Rhetorical, definitely needed more practice before recording this, also been getting back to recording after almost a decade of recording on and off so breath control and delivery needs some work for sure lol was trying to match Sammy's tonality in this one cheers!
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D-NoS
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Dope
I like the production. This track has re-playability. rhetorical said it best ..your two sound took this too the next level. Inspirational. Peace
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Sammy
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@rhet thanks for the feedback and really appreicated bro. i'll be hitting up your piece soon.
@d-nos thanks for the word my dude. will hit up yours with feed also.
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Absolute Abomination
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this the sorta vibe i wish i could create
good stuff you two.
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