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    Posted: 18 February 2019 at 7:45pm

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Verse 1 [Sammy]

I sip a green tea watching green sleeves
Til I’m bored
The night begin. It looks alive,

nuthin heard past the parks
Slow ride along the cold isle

The Old diner
Serving cold fries, fuck it

A bit of ketchup and its all right
It’s like I been up at it all night
Just Lost time Driving aimlessly
Chasing any thoughts that might relay. A dream..
decorated in a shade of green
Sage release vapor inhaling the winter sacred secrets
It’s a craving. It keeps me from...
hmmm...it keeps me from inhaling deep
We all curtail secrets.
Paper trails leaving pieces

and when words fail it’s my deepest belief

that history will put it together so...let it be...

throw caution in the wind

but don’t forget to calculate the odds and ends

wind speed from all direction
Density between you and me
The awkwardness
Seeking refuge in humored relief
Comedic timing’s impeccable, yea I let it go
for me to pursue’s a losing effort, no?
and you knew at best words can hurt
so u lurk. The depth is cold

and that’s perfection posed in passive aggression
Slowly eating away
what I’ve tried to maintain  
what I’ve tried to hold sacred
why make it difficult?
When I’m tryna to understand
I get it.
Mars and Venus
Man and woman
Mars and Venus
Sure thing....



verse 2 [Sammy]
The road ahead is pave with mostly mistakes
The ghosts that relay. The “Should’ve. could’ve”
Same motion maintained. An open wound poked and provoke,

goaded til the emotions are faded
colors gone what’s left? A lifeless tone of gray,
but im tone deaf, she said
Never listens. A mistake. A charade
Effervescent of a menace
said she needed her space
A knee to the face, go ahead leave,

cause I don’t need u anyway
Maybe I’ll find peace in this place
Picking up the piece that was broken
History will keep it in place
A piece of me saved.
U know silence is chaotic
Tryna find peace in this place
But something’s missing, its..

it’s not the speech or face but the routine of the days
The way she squeeze in her jeans. Dishes left in the sink
Til she gets home to be cleaned, it was strange
Maybe if I did it once, Just once things could’ve change
Rinsing the stain
It’s a blemish. I blamed you for everything
but it wasn’t anything
Just me seeking attention and..
It Feels nice when you keep me at ur center of things
No innuendo; there’s a sense of something never ending
Though on the low...



Verse 3 [Essence1]

I guess it's time for me to admit my mistakes

Instead of placing the blame

For what happened

I'd be lying if I said, I never thought we could've lasted

I imagine

What I could've done

Although I asked it

You were done

So were my chances huh

And nothing beats the feeling you get

When you think something's up

And it's screaming in your head and gut

When I brought it up

Your body didn't match your words

And what hurts, is you were the first to have enough and uh,

I get it

I was into your friend

Writing letters

Acting clever, and placed you second

Thought what we had was perfected

Like the music improvised

But your eyes knew different

And it was me who lied

But

At the end it was me who tried

When you decided to move on

And string me along

But treated me like a friend

I knew that something was off

And I couldn't pretend

But who what we have until it's gone

Now the nights grow cold

And I think I know

Why roses have thorns

Cause something so beautiful

Is vulnerable at most

I chose to let you go

Cause I was told

If you love something, set it free

If it comes back, you will know

Yo, so much for the goal we set up

Of having a home

Like you, I was fed up

And I'm better off alone

But the truth is

I know what I have

Thank god that you're gone




Edited by Sammy - 19 February 2019 at 5:49pm


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This is 100% dope, both verses were delivered amazingly...

Sammy always been a fan of your style of writing, and you have a super chill delivery that captures the emotion in your words, the beat compliments your standout flow which seemlessly pours through the speaker with the confident candence that I think is your signature.

Essence, also super smooth delivery, writing collaborated perfectly with sammy's when I first heard some of your other drops ...one of the things I thought was that you two would make a dope track... you both I wasn't wrong, you both have very mellifluous voices ....and it sets the tone for this track, along with flow and content it was enjoyable to listen to.


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Originally posted by Dntplywelwitothers Dntplywelwitothers wrote:

This is 100% dope, both verses were delivered amazingly...

Sammy always been a fan of your style of writing, and you have a super chill delivery that captures the emotion in your words, the beat compliments your standout flow which seemlessly pours through the speaker with the confident candence that I think is your signature.

Essence, also super smooth delivery, writing collaborated perfectly with sammy's when I first heard some of your other drops ...one of the things I thought was that you two would make a dope track... you both I wasn't wrong, you both have very mellifluous voices ....and it sets the tone for this track, along with flow and content it was enjoyable to listen to.


ay bro really appreciate the word! I'll return favor as soon as you post something up ha (nah forrealz tho, post something u talented muhfucka!)


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hey! thanks for listening, I appreciate the feedback. Truly honored to do this collab with Sammy as I really enjoy his style/lyricism, it was really a pleasure since for me, the process was so organic based on the points you mentioned.

I look forward to hearing your music!
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Sammy pumping out some audios recently hahah .... your voice fits right into this beat bro. Top notch lyrics as usual, clean flow... this is good stuff fam. Second verse coming in....you’re carrying that same cadence well, ur in the pocket with this third verse coming in. Good lyrics, I might say she don’t sound 100 percent confident on this though. Not horrible, just a bit of a shakey delivery. Otherwise, good lyrics

This collab had a nice little story going on, lyrically dope ...: I enjoyed it fam. I think Essence just needs to be a little more confident in delivery but that’s a minor critique... good work
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Thanks for the feedback Rhetorical, definitely needed more practice before recording this, also been getting back to recording after almost a decade of recording on and off so breath control and delivery needs some work for sure lol was trying to match Sammy's tonality in this one cheers!
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I like the production. 

This track has re-playability. 

rhetorical said it best ..your two sound took this too the next level.

Inspirational.

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@rhet thanks for the feedback and really appreicated bro. i'll be hitting up your piece soon.

@d-nos thanks for the word my dude. will hit up yours with feed also.


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this the sorta vibe i wish i could create

good stuff you two.
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