Open Mic: Miss U

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   this aint a lyrical piece but jus needed to let some things out.... wrote it to this beat

Why does shit have to be this way?
I just lost my nigga yesterday, but I'll be ok
No I wont but what am I to do?
I need revenge homie hand me the tool
Lord he was only tryin to make ends meet
Drug deal gone wrong, deal ends wit heat
BLAM!
My nigga caught one in the chest
Took off runnin usin his last breaths
But how the fuck do u get to hospital an still die?
Makes me wonder did them muthafuckas really try
Guess we gotta shoulder the load
1 shooter down at the ER, 1 to go
So tell Jay when you get to heaven
Dat bitch is on da way too, jump dat bitch forever
Sittin here eyes filled wit tears
Seems like every other month a pussy kills my peers
Seen ya face not even 24 hours ago
Now we wont see you laugh, all cause of cowards an dope
Damn
Already miss my homie
I wish the whole crew was there, deez other niggaz is phony
I remember dude was talkin shit, u aint even care
U slapped the taste out his mouth an I wont even there
That was showin me love now its my time to
An I hope somebody ride for me when I die too
We'll pour 40s an put one in the sky though
4 words for them pussies.. EAT SHIT an DIE SLOW

R.I.P. Mont-Mont 1983-October 15, 2010
miss u my nigga

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$n00z Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Standard Member Joined: 06 February 2010 Location: NC Status: Offline Points: 1267 Crew: The Dynasty Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 11-7-0 Form: WWLWWL	Post Options Post Reply Quote $n00z Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Topic: Miss U Posted: 17 October 2010 at 4:57am
	this aint a lyrical piece but jus needed to let some things out.... wrote it to this beat Why does shit have to be this way? I just lost my nigga yesterday, but I'll be ok No I wont but what am I to do? I need revenge homie hand me the tool Lord he was only tryin to make ends meet Drug deal gone wrong, deal ends wit heat BLAM! My nigga caught one in the chest Took off runnin usin his last breaths But how the fuck do u get to hospital an still die? Makes me wonder did them muthafuckas really try Guess we gotta shoulder the load 1 shooter down at the ER, 1 to go So tell Jay when you get to heaven Dat bitch is on da way too, jump dat bitch forever Sittin here eyes filled wit tears Seems like every other month a pussy kills my peers Seen ya face not even 24 hours ago Now we wont see you laugh, all cause of cowards an dope Damn Already miss my homie I wish the whole crew was there, deez other niggaz is phony I remember dude was talkin shit, u aint even care U slapped the taste out his mouth an I wont even there That was showin me love now its my time to An I hope somebody ride for me when I die too We'll pour 40s an put one in the sky though 4 words for them pussies.. EAT SHIT an DIE SLOW R.I.P. Mont-Mont 1983-October 15, 2010 miss u my nigga
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TURTLE Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Standard Member Joined: 10 September 2009 Location: Kansas City Status: Offline Points: 1508 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 12-17-1 Form: WNWWLL	Post Options Post Reply Quote TURTLE Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 17 October 2010 at 5:17am
	Damn SnooZ that was just yesterday! Iv lost a few homies myself and I know how you feel my dude. Keep ya head held high bro and it'll help. As far as the piece goes, ... well actually I really dont want to feed it. I actually get the feeling your not lookin for feed though but its more like a personal eulogy to your homie. R.I.P. Mont-Mont.
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Neek Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Site Moderator Super Mario Slaughterer Joined: 05 October 2004 Status: Offline Points: 3862 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 3-1-0 Form: LWWW	Post Options Post Reply Quote Neek Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 17 October 2010 at 5:26am
	I went and got the instrumental for you (full quality) https://www.yousendit.com/download/ZGJlNU1ONmNuSlN4dnc9PQ you should spit this, let the raw emotion build on a track. take it easy snooz. r.i.p to mont.
	#Bananas

$n00z Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Standard Member Joined: 06 February 2010 Location: NC Status: Offline Points: 1267 Crew: The Dynasty Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 11-7-0 Form: WWLWWL	Post Options Post Reply Quote $n00z Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 17 October 2010 at 6:58am
	cant do nothin but smile. thanks yall. preciate that neek, imma do that. turtle i know u feel me mane. much love to yall
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Manc Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Superior Member Joined: 02 April 2010 Status: Offline Points: 7032 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 82-4-2 Form: WWWWNW	Post Options Post Reply Quote Manc Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 17 October 2010 at 7:16am
	Wow! This was a goose-bump read yano. Lyrics were tight and what better way to let them feelins' out than to write a track about it. Tight drop as always kid. I'd like to hear this on audio Keep ya chin up

Woneduh. Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Standard Member Joined: 30 September 2010 Status: Offline Points: 192 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 2-2-0 Form: WLLW	Post Options Post Reply Quote Woneduh. Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 17 October 2010 at 8:03am
	Sorry to hear your homie died. I wouldn't retaliate though, You might get killed or thrown in jail.. You'll get through it though. I've seen people die, shit's crazy.

J504 Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Banned Joined: 08 June 2010 Status: Offline Points: 5385 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 25-0-0 Form: WWWWWW	Post Options Post Reply Quote J504 Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 17 October 2010 at 4:15pm
	Man, this was for real straight. It's crazy too, cause I been working on a collab with another member here that's got alot of the same elements to it so I can really appreciate the way you worked this out and got your emotion across. This shit was RAW. This is some of the tightest shit you've wrote, you gotta put this on audio, cuzzin.

Lucky D Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Standard Member Joined: 17 November 2008 Location: Canada Status: Offline Points: 1528 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 17-21-0 Form: WWLLLL	Post Options Post Reply Quote Lucky D Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 18 October 2010 at 4:19pm
	Lyrically not great..but ya stated that in tha beginning..but pieces like this don't need to be lyrical..well done and stay up Snooz...


$n00z Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Standard Member Joined: 06 February 2010 Location: NC Status: Offline Points: 1267 Crew: The Dynasty Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 11-7-0 Form: WWLWWL	Post Options Post Reply Quote $n00z Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 22 October 2010 at 12:08am
	fa show mane preciate the feed yall
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