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$n00z
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Posted: 17 October 2010 at 4:57am |
this aint a lyrical piece but jus needed to let some things out.... wrote it to this beat
Why does shit have to be this way?
I just lost my nigga yesterday, but I'll be ok No I wont but what am I to do? I need revenge homie hand me the tool Lord he was only tryin to make ends meet Drug deal gone wrong, deal ends wit heat BLAM! My nigga caught one in the chest Took off runnin usin his last breaths But how the fuck do u get to hospital an still die? Makes me wonder did them muthafuckas really try Guess we gotta shoulder the load 1 shooter down at the ER, 1 to go So tell Jay when you get to heaven Dat bitch is on da way too, jump dat bitch forever Sittin here eyes filled wit tears Seems like every other month a pussy kills my peers Seen ya face not even 24 hours ago Now we wont see you laugh, all cause of cowards an dope Damn Already miss my homie I wish the whole crew was there, deez other niggaz is phony I remember dude was talkin shit, u aint even care U slapped the taste out his mouth an I wont even there That was showin me love now its my time to An I hope somebody ride for me when I die too We'll pour 40s an put one in the sky though 4 words for them pussies.. EAT SHIT an DIE SLOW R.I.P. Mont-Mont 1983-October 15, 2010
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TURTLE
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Damn SnooZ that was just yesterday! Iv lost a few homies myself and I know how you feel my dude. Keep ya head held high bro and it'll help. As far as the piece goes, ... well actually I really dont want to feed it. I actually get the feeling your not lookin for feed though but its more like a personal eulogy to your homie. R.I.P. Mont-Mont. |
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Neek
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I went and got the instrumental for you (full quality)
https://www.yousendit.com/download/ZGJlNU1ONmNuSlN4dnc9PQ you should spit this, let the raw emotion build on a track. take it easy snooz. r.i.p to mont. |
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$n00z
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cant do nothin but smile. thanks yall. preciate that neek, imma do that. turtle i know u feel me mane. much love to yall
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Manc
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Wow!
This was a goose-bump read yano. Lyrics were tight and what better way to let them feelins' out than to write a track about it. Tight drop as always kid. I'd like to hear this on audio Keep ya chin up |
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Woneduh.
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Sorry to hear your homie died. I wouldn't retaliate though,You might get killed or thrown in jail..
You'll get through it though.
I've seen people die, shit's crazy.
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J504
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Man, this was for real straight. It's crazy too, cause I been working on a collab with another member here that's got alot of the same elements to it so I can really appreciate the way you worked this out and got your emotion across. This shit was RAW.
This is some of the tightest shit you've wrote, you gotta put this on audio, cuzzin.
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Lucky D
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Lyrically not great..but ya stated that in tha beginning..but pieces like this don't need to be lyrical..well done and stay up Snooz...
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$n00z
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fa show mane preciate the feed yall
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