Open Mic: Mudd City

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    Posted: 04 September 2008 at 3:04am
i came in the door
u heard it before
pappa was a pimp till mamma murdered his whores
so when i come thru and put four on the floor
it dont mean im driving a car
                                   listen at me
you might not know it but your boy a star
and you can be 2 if you know u r
you know DaBarz these back ups can't see me
they games streaky like a.j.feely
they mics is leaky they aint wright like winky
they light like twinkies all talk like pinky
we been out on the block like quincy jones
put our feet up cuz we think we home
turn the heat up cuz the brix still cook wit the chrome
 and pappa still rollin wit stones wit money to loan
i bring the bacon back like honey im home and
no lucy you could never be in the show
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Now try making your lines longer, you'll be able to add more detail to your stories, or what have you... 
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