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Sick-Witted
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Posted: 10 February 2010 at 12:29am |
The audio of my verse from me and Chain's text collab Edited by Sick-Witted - 01 March 2010 at 10:17pm |
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I'm clever an ill & my best is revealed when Da pressure is buildin, so step if ya willin But testin da realest Will only lead u down a lonely street 2 ya death cuz I kill it |
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$n00z
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that was pretty nice.... i like dat joint
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U already know...
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TURTLE
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I-kontinue
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Lol... Flowed well. Some lines made me laugh. You got work to do though 'cause it's cool and all to just write a quick nice verse, but it takes another level of dedication to make a whole cohesive song, while staying hot and not falling off by the end of the track. Nice flowing verse though.
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Sick-Witted
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yeah, I used to just write with no beat, post my rhymes, and would rarely spit the shit I wrote. I just started writing to beats and recording verses a few months ago...so I haven't really got the song/ formula or mentality down yet...so I just see this as practice, thanx 4 da feed y'all
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I'm clever an ill & my best is revealed when Da pressure is buildin, so step if ya willin But testin da realest Will only lead u down a lonely street 2 ya death cuz I kill it |
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Alcatraz
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this iight sick.. even if u is new 2 it for the most part u got the shit down..... keep workin on it
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Cuba
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I think it's a good way to step your game up, like Kon says it's not the finished article but it was coolio...
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