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    Posted: 10 February 2010 at 12:29am

The audio of my verse from me and Chain's text collab   

 


Edited by Sick-Witted - 01 March 2010 at 10:17pm
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I'm clever an ill & my best is revealed when

Da pressure is buildin, so step if ya willin

But testin da realest

Will only lead u down a lonely street 2 ya death cuz I kill it
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Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote $n00z Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 10 February 2010 at 12:34am
that was pretty nice.... i like dat joint
U already know...
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Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote I-kontinue Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 10 February 2010 at 4:17am
Lol... Flowed well. Some lines made me laugh. You got work to do though 'cause it's cool and all to just write a quick nice verse, but it takes another level of dedication to make a whole cohesive song, while staying hot and not falling off by the end of the track. Nice flowing verse though.
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yeah, I used to just write with no beat, post my rhymes, and would rarely spit the shit I wrote.  I just started writing to beats and recording verses a few months ago...so I haven't really got the song/ formula or mentality down yet...so I just see this as practice, thanx 4 da feed y'all
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Da pressure is buildin, so step if ya willin

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this iight sick.. even if u is new 2 it   for the most part u got the shit down..... keep workin on it
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I think it's a good way to step your game up, like Kon says it's not the finished article but it was coolio...
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